Outline: Descriptive essay

INTRODUCTION:
Thesis statement:.
Living in 2175 it’s awesome, now I’m in my flying car going to work after my robot wakes me
up, this has become routine since I live alone. My life has become more comfortable, but not
perfect.
Body 1:
Topic sentence 1: Living in this year is wonderful because there are advanced inventions thanks
to technology and science, the medicine is almost perfect. Sometimes there are drawbacks
because humans, like everything else, are not perfect when it comes to building new
inventions. I can't deny that there are things from previous years that I still miss. For example,
there are robots capable of performing many activities like humans, you can see them when
you go to a shopping center, robots are the ones that welcome you and invite you to buy
modern flying cars created to transport people from one place to another with ease. Another
surprising thing has been that scientists discovered the way of life under the sea where
dolphins dance like experienced dancers. Also, another good thing is that all types of cancer
have been overcome thanks to the evolution of medicine. However, there are now some
problems to deal with. For example, the environment has been extremely polluted because
there are nuclear plants in all countries. Another negative point is that some people get bored
because they don't know what to do because robots do almost everything. Many poor people
lost their jobs after being replaced by robots. In addition, they have increased air traffic.
Supporting ideas:
- Perfect advances in medicine.
- There are drawbacks because humans, like everything else.
- Robots capable of performing many activities like humans.
- Modern flying cars created to transport people from one place to another with ease.
- All types of cancer have been overcome thanks to the evolution of medicine.
Body 2:
Topic sentence 2: In the other hand we have that there are now some problems to deal with.
For example, the environment has been extremely polluted because there are nuclear plants in
all countries. Another negative point is that some people get bored because they don't know
what to do because robots do almost everything. Many poor people lost their jobs after being
replaced by robots. In addition, they have increased air traffic.
Supporting ideas:
- The environment has been extremely polluted because there are nuclear plants in all
countries.
- Many poor people lost their jobs after being replaced by robots.

Conclusion:
In conclusion, technology has made my life easier, but at the same time it has increased
pollution and accidents in the world. I am glad of the advances that this era has brought to
medicine, but there are also negatives.

Daniela Salas.