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Poem 1 - The City Planners - Atwood
Poem 1 - The City Planners - Atwood
the
/
around
and driving
Cruising these residential Sunday
to church
people go thankfulness , as noted
worship suburb anic area
in Christian tradition
what offends us is
,
something that
initially seems pleasant '
-
unattainable
columns are arranged
the sanities:
and
" rows
↑
5 the houses in pedantic rows, the planted warmth and invested in the sanities
, suggesting that societies wants / satisfaction
happiness
sanitary trees, assert
does not meet to standard
up
:*
levelness of surface like a rebuke +
clear right away that
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describing
to the dent in our car door.
as
trees
of
trees as
/ \ indication
sanitary life
No shouting here, or design art
the dent
cutting a straight swath in the discouraged grass.
in
↳
natural > sees her door as a marker
growing of of
reality ,
heriˢÑ
removed from them
something unnatural
.⇔÷"
this August day -
1.
_
sidestep hysteria " " "
÷:
"
"
same .
perfection preciseness
the same slant of avoidance to the hot sky,
>
⇔
certain things: roofs are built with the
t
the smell of spilled oil a faint nice number
of paint
20 a splash of paint on brick surprising as a bruise,
unwanted
preciseness towards the
←
( suburbs suburb is new
[
has connotations of
as new
places / houses
unnecessary
coil; even the too-fixed stare of the wide windows the smell of
↑
" " ⇔. paint is bizarre
a ,, ,, , ,, ,,, , , gang ,, g, , .am µ , g. ya ,
brief insight
:* .
,
""
↑
give momentary access to smell of
"
spilled oil
' '
and "
splash of paint
a "
alliteration on a brick
↓
↓ painful brings to mind
/ \
25 the future cracks in the plaster seem to stare the stark nature of a blue or shocked
astonished undecent
smell
< Purple bruise on light -
ayam , men ,
obliquely into the clay seas, gradual as glaciers > to
used describe the coiled hose
sitting outside
that right now nobody notices.
9
[
the By depicting the ↳ me -
The
image of hose
speaker the as a
snake waiting to
houses as future sinking "" " e
" 99 "" that there
doesn't have any is is
emphasises on
or glaciers ,
the speaker something deeper
hope and thinks that
title name
ship ,
that they
and going on in this residential neighbourhood
[
to last > This
of life
manner , so
carefully planned
in these final lines
possible
territories, concealed from each other,
and
predicted can't last Human nature air as
vanishing
.
,
and
to read the snow
[
with how
is fundamentally at odds it .
climate crisis
and
trying
to put impactful city planning can be on a
\
metaphor
political ↑ green economy
.
)
together some
are scattered
people
world immoral plot
guessing directions, they sketch
the
around
> ungrammatical .
suggests that she's
trying
in ordered
decline of
of steady
on a wall in the white vanishing air
a
something
structure
two stanzas .
simile -
" att" " " " '
,
µ , e
a. µ, , trying to confine and
human
creativity
is
and
the last
line , finalizing for the
nature Of
image
.
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