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Decent
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to
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Ethical

You can give

example of Japan

Here you can

give example
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We don’t have
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politicians are
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And being judgemental

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essence of the statement

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Sounds
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profit or loss dedication
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Envoys are
expected to lie in
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building,
having acts
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preventive
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Plus it reduces moral

question to simple
algebra
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Needs
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Yes but in rare cases we need

to focus on ends. Eg
torturing a terrorist to know
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Collapse of family
structure in USA

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Case of Anthony
bordain can be

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presented here
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Example? Vijay
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Market
economy
?

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Examples? People
selling covid drugs and
oxygen cylinders at 10
times the rate? Illegal
sand mining?
Exploitation of labour?
Etc
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