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1.LARGELY UNDERSTOOD THE CONTEXT OF ALL THE
QUESTIONS AND FAILED TO MEET THE DEMAND OF
SOME QUESTIONS , PLEASE REVIEW THEM
2.CONTENT COMPETENCY IS GOOD OVERALL
3. HAVE A HIGH LANGUAGE COMPETENCY KEEP IT UP
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4.NEED TO REFINE SOME INTRODUCTION AND BASIC

DEFINITIONS TO INCREASE THE ATTRACTIVENESS OF
THE ANSWER
5.STRUCTURE AND PRESENTATION WAS LARGELY
SATISAFCTORY
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6.YOUR HUNGER TO WRITE THE ANSWER

MULTI-DIMENSIONAL IS APPRECIATED BUT MAKE
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ADDRESSED WELL IN THE FIRST PLACE
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7. YOU HAVE A STRONGHOLD IN CASE STUDIES, KEEP

IT UP, TRY TO WRITE MULTI-DIMENSIONALLY, TO
INCREASE THE VERSATILITY
8.KEEP PRACTISING..KEEP WRITING..ALL THE BEST
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decent
intro

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nicely concluded
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Stereotyping is
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Prejudice and social inequality are unavoidable in

a multicultural society like India. The need of the
hour is to encourage such depressed sections
through affirmative action, stricter implementation
of anti-discrimination law like that against
untouchability, gender harassment, this can be
the ideal conclusion
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decent start

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comprehensive
coverage of all
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aspects..keep it
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other risk
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4.digital piracy
5.state
surveillance
6.copyrights
issues
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5.People working
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ethical dilemmas
at work on how to
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treat public data.

try to write For instance,
with Edward Snowden
supporting 6. Increasing
advent of social
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examples
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hate propagandas
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instances..
increases etc. demand public
your servant to follow
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authenticity information ethics

of your
answer

overall a decent
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good definition

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nice points
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decent conclusion
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decent intro

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The
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Act 2010
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The Advertising
Standards
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set some basic
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holistic analysis of the

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need to be more
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1.Sports federations and associations in India function in a very political

manner having office bearers as politicians or businessmen.
2.Most of the sporting federations in the country, including the Board of
Control for Cricket in India (BCCI) are politically dominated organization
3.politicization of sports
4.The federations need to be headed by experienced sports personalities who
can understand the technicalities of the sport rather than by people who are
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establishment of accountability:
1.A law is needed to prohibit people having a political background from
holding positions in sports federations and association
2. ex-sportspersons take a step forward to work for sports by either joining
politics or being office bearers of sports federations.
3.proper sound infrastructure facilities.
incorporate these points
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perfectly met
the demands of
various parts of
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brilliant..
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3.kant CI suggests that human beings should be treated as ‘ends in

themselves’. Thus, for Kant, ‘human dignity’ is a value in itself.
4. CI places significance on the duty aspect rather than the
consequences of the actions.
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GOOD FLOW
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AND
COHERENCE
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RESPONSE..
KKEP IT UP
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START

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UTILITARIANSIM CONTRIBUTION TO ETHICS

1. helps in formulating policies for welfare of maximum number of people
2.to formulate better policies and make informed decisions as the
priority of the government is to maximize benefits from programs and
policies and at the same time minimise the losses and damages.
3. how moral questions can have objectively true answers
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analysis
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in the principle of
DECENT CONCLUSION utilitarianism--Bentham
contributed too as well as
too ethics
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4.stand against
injustice-if not no
one would be on
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you were slightly

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didn't meet the
demand of the
question
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more on this
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reduce the
emphasis on
this aspect
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MENTION THE
SUBJECT
MATTER OF THE
CASE STUDY-IN
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THE ETHICAL
ISSUES
THROUGH
EVERY
STAKEHOLDER
PERSPECTIVE,
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BETTER
VISIBILITY
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ETHICAL ISSUES:
1.violating principles of free and fair opportunity for all
2.larger interests of firm..profit motive
3.trsut and good will of the firm are at stake
need to analyze on these lines
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1.builds trust and
goodwill of the
organization
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2.transparency and
accountability
increases
3.reputation of the
organization
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overall fine..but haven't done the

justice to the first part of the
question..rest is fine
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universal human
right
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NICELY ANALYSED
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BRILLIANT RESPONSE
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Sama Dana Danda Beda” are the

four techniques that are available
for use in order to solve any
problem-employing this method can
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safe passage
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1.deeply influencing
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religious rights-false
propaganda by the
leader
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comprehensive
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remarkable effort...really commendable

effort..impressed with the way of
coherence and structural presentation..
keep it up
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ETHICAL ISSUES AND ETHICAL

DILEMMAS HAVE ONLY SLIGHT
DIFFERENCES..PLEASE BE
ATTENTIVE AND CAREFUL WHILE
ANSWERING
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TRY TO WRITE
SOME MORE
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MERITS AND
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ALSO CONVINCE SAURABH, IF WE DO NOT

ACCOUNT FOR MISTAKES AND IF ANY RIVAL
COMPANY FOUND OUT AND PUBLICIZE IT, IT
TARNISHES THE IMAGE OF THE COMPANY-THAT
NEEDS TO BE MAKE AWARE BY SAURABH
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1.USE OF
TECHNOLOGY
AND
IDENTIFYING
MULTIPLE IDs
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FROM SAME
MOBILE
NUMBER AND
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E-MAIL TO BE
KEPT IN RED
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NOTICE TO
CLOSELY
MONITOR AND
SCRUTINISE
SUCH
ACCOUNTS
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IMPECCABLE...
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DECENT START

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1.ENSURING FAIR
AND JUST WORLD
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2.ENCOURAGING
THE LEGACY OF
TOLERANCE AND
PLURALISM BY
THE
FIRM-LEADING
THROUGH
EXAMPLE.

NICELY CONCLUDED
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