Sample Wrting answers TEST 2, WRITING TASK 1 ‘This isan answer written by @ candidate who achieved a Band 7.0 score, “The graph displays the statis of (he namber at tours vting 2 patclar carribean island betwee (he yard) 2010 and 27) inthe yar 2010, hee were 2 quarter of amin vistors that stayed on crue sip, vie another 750000 vistors wee stg on island fa Yas upto a milion of vistors uring ta: yar The flowing year, ich is 20, al 2 milion vistors stayed on evi sips or te vistors who wer slaying onthe island he graph dove’ show ad decree 0° an inctat because the ruber was the sata the previous yar hich i 70000 visors Toa Visitors for tat yar was 1 ion and 2 quacter vistors, Moving on, the numberof vistors saying (on crue ships decreased to 250000 vistors inthe yar 20% vie the numberof vistors staying cm land incase to 1250030 people. This sum upto an amount of 00000 vistors tat year Un the year 207, 500000 vistors stayed on cruise ships while #500000 visors stayed on island *fat ade upto milion vids at year. During the next yar wich i 2014, afta at one tilion vistors stayed on erie ships ile te same number of vrs ang on land remained cersisient which 1500000 people calling up to two milion and a lf vistors that year. For ‘he yar 208, 250000 vio’ were staying on cus ships and 150000 tori were stain on island, showing no changes frm the previous ear.‘ oa of fori in thal year increased to 12150000 visors. The toa cube of vistors remained he same inte following yar which is ‘20 where it sumed up 1590000 visors sang on erie ships ane (250000 vistors saying on island, tne final year. 207, the eumber of vireo on cuits hip and saying on iand inerate 1 tree and a hal ion of vistors. The graph showed an increase of ka lion fr ‘he rambe of waiters sayy on crus ships wich otal up two milion wstrs. A forthe turnber of wsitors saying or iland, fe graph ako increased fer a quarter milion which Ads up to a total of 500000 visors hat yee “Through the years the umber of vaitors soing on rut thipe towed an urtableinereake and decrtate fr the first four years, bu contnaed to increase in te nen year ormards. As for ‘he ruber of vrs staging on island, there was no progres of inereas or Avereasein the firs two yas wich are 2010 and 20n but the graph cose un i remained cota fer ore consectve years in 2 row. The number of vistors then sacked of in the year 201, but maraged to incceate tothe same level a8 te year before he prvaus in 207. lin all he graph showed an outstanding performance fre foal aunber of vor roughout 2620", where increaoed gradual every see yea exept from 2015 to 20s whee it remained constant 129 | | | | | |