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Band Score
* Band Score:
C10 p176 178
理论上:
77 66 — 6.5
666 5 — 5.5 (⼤陆考区)
66 55 — 5.5
6 555 — 5
6666 — 6
实际上:
TR > CC > LR+ GRA
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TR — 6的分⽔岭
* Task Response:
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what is the ‘task’?
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Give reasons[2] for your answer[1] and include any
relevant examples[3] from your own knowledge or
experience. Write at least 250 words[4].
* question types
1) opinion essay: To what extent do you agree or
disagree? ⚠ :区分“现象”(undebatable)和“观点”
(debatable)
2) 利弊分析(现象):Is it a positive or negative
development? ⚠ :⼆选⼀: P or N
3) 利弊分析(现象):Do the advantages outweigh the
disadvantages? ⚠ :⼆选⼀:pros>cons or
cons>pros
4) Discussion essay(观点): Discuss both sides and
give your own opinion.
5) report(负⾯现象):a. causes; b.e ects; c.solutions
—— (ab) (ac) (bc)
e.g. Humans’ average life expectancy(寿命) has been
increasing. What problems does it cause? Suggest
some solutions. (bc)
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e.g. Discuss the causes of juvenile delinquency(⻘少
年犯罪), and suggest some solutions. (ac)
6) mixed 混合类(现象)
Q1: 5)a or 5)b
Q2: 2) or 3)
e.g. More and more people want to buy famous
brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the
reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative
development?
Answer:
1) totally agree: Personally, I agree that the
increasing in uence of news media on people’s
lives is a negative trend.
2) totally disagree: Personally, I disagree and I think
that the increasing in uence of news media on
people’s lives is a positive trend.
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3) sit on the fence (部分同意+部分否定):Personally, I
think that the increasing in uence of news media on
people’s lives can be positive as well as negative.
Answer:
Personally, I think that employers should take both
the way their employees dress and the quality of their
work into consideration.
* ⼩结:
[1] examine topics = pick out ‘key words’ (where
candidates should express their ideas )
[2] make sure the answer-sentence fully covers all
these words.
Q-A:
Q: 为什么良好的教育有助于避免⼈们犯罪,这⽐监狱
更有效?
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A1: 因为( 良好的教育让⼈们具备了法律意识和正确的
道德观念)。= topic sentence // supporting
sentences: 这些能让⼈们意识到伤害他⼈来满⾜个⼈
利益是违法的,要收到严厉惩罚。同时,也让⼈们为⾃
⼰的错误⾏为感到愧疚,⾃责。//相⽐之下,在监狱
中,⼈们则会接触到更恶劣 更富有经验的其他罪犯
们,这导致他们在被刑满释放后,很可能继续犯罪,甚
⾄犯更严重的罪。
A2: 因为(良好的教育为⼈们提供了知识和技能)。=
topic sentence // supporting sentences: 这帮助⼈们
更有可能找到稳定⽽收⼊良好的⼯作,也就意味着,他
们没有必要再通过犯罪的⽅式,例如,偷窃、抢劫,来
维持⽣计。// 相⽐之下,⼤多数建筑⽆法提供给犯⼈能
和在学校⾥相⽐的教育,这导致他们在回到社会后,依
然只能通过犯罪来谋⽣。
traits:
[1] 纯现象
[2] ⼀边倒;不要“中⽴”
* Structure:
Introduction: background statement(现象类的题⽬—
写背景句) + answer
Nowadays, a wider variety of household goods are
becoming available in people’s lives. Personally, I
think this is a largely positive trend.
Conclusion:
repeat your answer or summarise all the topic
sentences.
* 利弊分析 之 advantages outweigh disadvantages
traits:
[1] 现象为主 (个别题⽬夹带观点)
[2] ⼆选⼀: pros > cons or cons>pros(3>2 instead
of 2>1)
[3] 预判 (不强制)
advantages:
[1] fun = entertainment
[2] educational
disadvantages:
[1] studies or work
[2] physical health concerns: eyesight damage(short-
sighted) / insomnia / sleeping disorder / …
[3] mental problems: violent tendency
[4] relationships in reality
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* Structure 1:
Conclusion:
repeat your answer or summarise all the topic
sentences.
* structure 2:
Introduction: background statement + answer
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Nowadays, an increasing number of parents expose
their children to computers and tablets so that they
can acquire technology skills. [1] Personally, the
possible bene ts of this trend are more signi cant
than the potential dangers. [2] Personally, the cons of
this trend are outweighed than the pros. —— [1][2]: ⼆
选⼀
Conclusion:
repeat your answer or summarise all the topic
sentences.
* Discussion essay:
例题: C8 P129
* Structure:
Introduction: 只写⼀句话,即background statement
or
discuss:
[1] relations with the opposite sex
[2] learn from each other — experience di erent types
of talents and skills (stystxmati / empathy )
Conclusion:
summarise my ideas stated in main bodies
discuss:
my idea: However, I take the view that it is
unnecessary to require women perform as well as
men.
reason1 for my idea: One of the reasons is that most
of women are disadvantaged at physical conditions.
To be speci c, their insu cient strength may put
them under the dangers of injury and even death
when they are ghting against with criminals.
discuss:
my idea: Indeed, the majority of them are not suitable
due to the disadvantages mentioned above, but there
are some posts where females make great
contributions.
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reason 1 for my idea: This is because many
policewomen are better at mediating the con icts
within the community because of their patentee and
empathy
* caution
“可能”
probably / be likely to do / will— ⼗有⼋九
possibly / perhaps — 6-7成
may — 50%
might / would/ could — 2-3成
* 雅思写作中的例⼦:
不要:
[1] 列举数字
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[2] according to a study/research/ case/ report …
[3] stories
要:
[1]⽤“下义词”完成例⼦
e.g.
wildlife— kangaroos/ lions/ zebras
diverse cultures — languages /foods / social
customs/ traditions / arts/ literatures/ histories
e.g.
Video games stimulate players’ practical skills in
reality.
Computer simulation games improve users’ motor
skills in real-life tasks, such as driving cars and
airplanes.
* Report
[1] 负⾯现象
[2] a. causes? b.e ect c. solutions: ab/ ac/ bc
*Structure:
1) background statement:
Nowadays, an ever-increasing proportion of criminals
are teenagers.
2) answer
❌ :In this essay, I will state some causes and
related solutions.
Main body1:
One of the possible reasons is … . + supporting
sentences(reason1如何导致题⽬现象 ).
Another striking factor is … . + supporting sentences.
( Finally, … is/are responsible for this problem. +
supporting sentences. )
Main body2:
Fortunately, we have been well informed of how to
reverse this trend.
To be explicit, the utmost measure is … . +
supporting sentences(solution1如何reduce cause 1).
In addition, … . + supporting sentences.
(It is the responsibility of … to do … . + supporting
sentences.)
Conclusion:
There are but two of the potential answers to this
problem. Although the problem may seem hard to
eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken
to change this situation.
* 关于ideas:
[1] think of ideas based on personal experience and
general knowledge
[2] steal ideas from model answers (Cambridge
textbooks / model essays from BC ex-examiners:
Simon & Liz )
[3] 微软Bing搜索: advantages/disadvantages/causes/
e ects/importance of 关键词
[4] Simon’s pdf pages 52
* ⼉童/⻘少年问题
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“甩锅”原则
causes:
1. family(parents): ——be buried in—— lack of …——
draw one’s attention——extreme things——including
crimes
2. school(ing): classmates——e.g. theft(pocket-
picking / shoplifting) / violent attack/ joyriding —— if:
often hang out with —— follow … to o end
3. society(media): be exposed to pornographic and
violent content in mass media, such as lms ——
imitate(vt.)
* 雷区:
[1] ⼩概率事件: domestic violence / school bullying
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[2] “挖坑”:divorced parents
[3] the cultural and social di erences between
candidates and examiners
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* Coherence and cohesion:
连贯:前后⽂逻辑 — (暗)
衔接:the use of cohesive devices including linking
words and other devices — (明)
练习
Are the following sentences coherent, cohesive and
both ?
A. only coherent ❌
B. only cohesive ☑ ⽆直接关系;he指代Daniel
C. both ☑ 因果关系;he指代Daniel
D. neither ☑ ⽆直接关系;Daniel是个⼥的
练习:找句间衔接
* C9 P173 paragraph4
these 指代可数名词(⾮⼈)复数
long-term relationships — a contented family life +
long-lasting friends
career — work
* Lexical Resource:
[1] at least 5000-6000 words (topic language)
[2] 词义:—— 英⽂解释
❌ :ascend / descend (位移)
❌ :occupy / take up (a space or time )
[3] 搭配:——英⽂解释
❌ :Many schools are dedicated to cultivating
students into all-round talents.
[4] 字典:Longman online > Ox > Cam
[5] 背词:1) 按话题 2)collocations/ phrases
[6] 别问⽼师
[7]
2. 分词状语
❌ : There was an increase in the proportion of
females, rising from 15% to 35%.
改:The proportion of females showed an upward
trend, rising from 15% to 35%. ⚠ 分词和谓语动词必
须共⽤同⼀个主语
3. 分词状语
❌ :Boiled in water, the cocoons are unwound into
silk thread.
改:Having been boiled in water, the cocoons are
unwound into silk thread. ⚠ 分词和谓语动词具有同时
性
4. 定从关系词判断 — 先⾏词在从句中成分
❌ :I went to the factory where was located in the
north of the city.
改:I went to the factory which was located in the
north of the city.
5. 标点
❌ :I got up late. So I missed the bus.
改:I got up late, so I missed the bus.
* 范围:
[1] 划分成分: 主谓(系)宾(表) — 定/状
[2] 谓语动词 v.s. ⾮谓语动词
[3] 三⼤从句:名词性/定/状从
[4] with的独⽴主格
Beef was by far the most popular food, with
approximately 250 grams consumed per person per
week.
[5] 代词:this/ it / that/ these/ they/ one
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English Grammar in Use 剑桥英语 中级
* Task1:
TA > CC > LR+ GRA
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* task achievement
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考⽣:Summarise the information[1] by selecting and
re p o r t i n g t h e m a i n f e a t u re s [ 2 ] , a n d m a k e
comparisons[3] where relevant. Write at least 150
words[4].
考官 :
[1] overview = paragraph2 我和你的体重变化不同
[2] key features 我胖了;你瘦了
[3] details 2010: 我120⽄; 2020: 我220⽄
* 动态图的overview:
总结所有变量[1]在趋势上[2]的异or同[3]
练习C7T2:
To sum up, the consumption of chicken showed a
di erent trend from that of the otter foods. —
overview
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To sum up, there was a decrease in the popularity of
beef, lamb and sh, while the consumption of chicken
showed an upward trend. — main features
练习:
To sum up, there were great/substantial di erences in
the change of the popularity of these activities.
* 静态图的overview:
[1] 涵盖所有变量(两组)
[2] di erences / similarities (数字⼤⼩)
* steps:
[1] 找全两组变量
[2] Q1: 谁和谁做⽐较?
[3] Q2: ⽐什么?
[4] ⼆选⼀:di erences / similarities
练习C4T3
To sum up, there were substantial di erences[4]
between the proportions of males and females[2] at
di erent education levels[3].
* 地图的overview:
将所有变化分类
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* 流程图的overview:
总结步骤个数 + highlight key stages
answer
Personally, I agree that the authorities should spend
the nance invested in the maintenance of ancient
buildings on new housing and road development.
topic sentence x 2
“ ⾃问⾃答”
Q2: 为什么政府要把修复⽼建筑的钱⽤在road
development上?
A: 因为( 经济的增⻓,作为政府的⾸要⽬标,在很⼤
程度上依赖于城市的道路状况 ) 。// 发达的道路系统为
城市引⼊了丰富的资源,充⾜的劳动⼒以及先进的技
术,这些是经济增⻓必不可少的因素。// 相⽐之下,
只有⼀些⽼建筑能被开发成旅游景点,但也只能通过旅
游业为经济增⻓做出有限的贡献。
Main body1:
topic sentence: air pollution
supporting sentences(how/why): natural resources —
exhaust fumes — pollutants e.g. SO2 — contaminate
the atmosphere
Main body2:
topic sentence: global warming
supporting sentences: fossil fuels — greenhouse gas
emissions e.g. CO2 — the increase of temperature
Main body3:
topic sentence: the potential to energy crisis
supporting sentences: the production and use of
private cars — natural resources — the increasing
number of cars — tremendous consumption of fuels
— some of which are nonrenewable
Main body4 :
topic sentence: However, convenience for commuting
supporting sentences: commuting between home
and the workplace — faster to get the destination due
to … + comfortable and private space
Main body5:
topic sentence: exibility for travelling
supporting sentences: timetable + reach the
destinations out of the routes of public transport