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1.

Based on the given text the letter is a letter of recomendation which:

a) Sent to Mr. Vincent Prasad.

b) This part elaborate Ashley’s capabilities and skills.

c) The sender is Rachel Gomez as the Senior Project Manager.

2. errors in the letter


1. The salutation is incorrect. It should be "Dear Mr. Reed," instead of "Thank u for your
letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment?"
2. The sentence structure and grammar are incorrect. It should be "Thank you for your letter
of July 4th inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment."
3. The word "u" should be spelled out as "you."
4. The sentence "We hope you will find our prices n terms satisfactory" contains a
typographical error. "n" should be "and."
5. The sender's name is repeated twice at the end of the letter. It should only be mentioned
once.

Corrected version:
Bridgestone International Co.
1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656

Dear Mr. Reed,


Thank you for your letter of July 4th inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of
payment. We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices and terms satisfactory.
I look forward to receiving your order.
Yours sincerely,
Robert Brown
Sales Manager
3. Dear Professor Allen Smith,

I hope this email finds you well. On behalf of the organizing committee of the International
Seminar on Chemistry In Islam, I would like to express our deepest gratitude for your invaluable
contribution as a speaker at our event. Your expertise and insights were truly instrumental in
making our seminar a resounding success.

Your engaging presentation on Al-quran Verses about Chemistry not only enriched the
knowledge of our attendees but also inspired meaningful discussions and new perspectives. The
feedback from our participants has been overwhelmingly positive, with many highlighting your
presentation as a highlight of the event. Your ability to convey complex concepts with clarity and
passion is truly commendable.

We also greatly appreciate your dedication and professionalism throughout the entire seminar.
Your punctuality, willingness to engage with our participants, and your overall commitment to
the success of the event did not go unnoticed. Your presence elevated the quality of our seminar,
and we are sincerely thankful for your time and effort.

Your contribution to our seminar goes beyond the event itself, as it will undoubtedly have a
lasting impact on the academic and professional development of our attendees. We believe that
your insights will continue to inspire research and innovation in the field.

Once again, thank you for your significant role in our seminar. We look forward to the
possibility of collaborating with you in the future. If there is anything we can assist you with or
any future opportunities for collaboration, please do not hesitate to reach out.

Warm regards and heartfelt thanks,

Naufal Hilmi
Chairperson, International Seminar on Chemistry In Islam

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