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    One technological advance is mobile phones. Mobile phones have several advantages such as allowing constant communication, providing entertainment and being helpful in emergencies. However, they also have disadvantages like distracting users and overuse leading to health issues. In conclusion, while mobile phones provide many benefits, their overuse needs to be moderated.

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    FINAL WRITING B05 INTENSIVO

    Write the essay about a technological advance (160 words). Use your notes and the useful
    phrases below to help you. Write four paragraphs: a) introduction, b) advantages, c)
    disadvantages, d) conclusion.
    Listing points
    • Firstly ... / First of all ...
    • Secondly ...
    • In addition ...
    • As well as that ...
    • Another advantage is that ...
    • Finally ... / Lastly ...
    Introducing advantages and disadvantages
    • There are several advantages / disadvantages of ...
    • However, there are also some / certain disadvantages.
    • One of the main advantages / disadvantages is

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