IELTs Task 2: Problem Essay

Topic: Some people argue that the overconsumption of meat has created many problems in the world.
What are the reasons that some people eat too much meat? What can be done to solve this problem?
Include examples and explanations from your own experiences.

 Problems and Causes

-Culture

+ Many foods from countries around the world are made out of meat Persuade opp. Dissuade

-Cost

+ Meat cost less than vegetable

 Solution

-Be aware of health issue

+ Hard for the digestive system, lack of nutrient, quality of the meat

-Reduce the availability of meat Produce

+ government can limit the consumption of meat by the citizen according to law

Introduction

Paraphrase the Topic, then state the Problems or Causes and the Solutions (In short, just mention it)

Body (1-2 paragraphs)

First Paragraph (About Problems)

Introduce the problems, then give explanations to them one by one and finish up with overall examples

Second Paragraph (About Solutions)

Start with a mention of the solutions to the topic like how could you stop people from eating meat a lot?
Then gives some explanations and the overall examples of the solving.

Conclusion

Write an overall of the problems and solutions that you just wrote in the body paragraphs (In summary
and don’t introduce new ideas). End with your opinion or just express what you think of this topic.
THE ESSAY

Since human existence on the planet million of years ago, meat was the main consumption for our
ancestor. However, nowadays, people have eaten meat more than ever before, making lives more
troublesome. In the meantime, this can link to individuals’ cultures and the purchase of the meat and
these can surely overcome by increasing the awareness of each health and also the government can set
limitation to consume meat.

There are many to think of when coming to eating meat to much that make many problems happen
regularly these days. Culture of ours from the past is crucial when thinking of how we build the habits of
over eating meat. Many culture cosines from many countries like the Indian cosines, France cosines,
Italian cosines, especially pizza included meat that influence most of the population to consume meat as
because countries’ people love their own culture. So, to conserve it, they have to do to keep it safe and
durable forever or it’s just delicious. Following this, cost of the meat has led to the consumption trend to
rise thanks to it’s surprisingly cheaper than the healthy ones like vegetable. Meat is more available in
market; therefore, cow or buffalo are being sold in cheap prize than the vegetable. In instance, Avocado
prize is sold in the prize range of $6, but the meat only sells $4 in today market.

The overconsumption of meat is worrying for people around the world, especially for individuals’ health.
Overconsuming meat raise concern by the people on obesity, overworking digestive system and also can
cause some kind of diseases. To fight this, people have to always be aware of level meat eating. In
addition, fat will be avoided and consumption of meat will decrease when they think of the
disadvantages rather than the deliciousness of meat. Like yesterday, After I ate a meat food in the
morning, I ate vegetable or something else beside meat. In the other hand, government has to take a
lead to let this happen by limiting how much the people can eat meat or buy it. They can replace new
laws while showing respects and caring for the locals, also always give support or bonus to who ever
follow the limited conditions. Some laws of limitation over meat eating are being conducted by many
countries in the Europe.

To sum up, cultural habits and the lower prize of meat is to blamed when people over consume meat
nowadays. However, in case of taking over those causes, public awareness of meat and limiting the level
of meat can be consumed, are there to take over these. In my perspective, animals are not to be eaten
because they’re such loveable to have, and surely, we need to set the law out so that the habit of
limiting meat is inherit to them quickly and simply.