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Final College Essay - TJ Cooke
Final College Essay - TJ Cooke
TJ Cooke
Ms. Dill
English IV
31 October 2023
Talkative TJ
move my star card from green, to yellow, then red. All my classmates watched in fear like I’d
been charged with a crime. I was the laughing stock all because of my outgoing personality.
Melting into my seat, I felt the condemnatory eyes of my peers burning into my skin. The little
ping pong ball of ideas in my head wasn’t done bouncing around; I needed to let the thoughts out
As I matured, I harnessed the ivory-colored sphere, as well as the green, yellow, and red
of the past, using them as the basis of the person I am today. Throughout my life, people
described me as a “people person” while others identified my “gift of gab.” The latter phrase has
negative connotations, but I see it as a true gift. As Lady Gaga once said, I was born this way,
people! My gift tells me exactly what to say and when to say it: I express my thoughts and
feelings without restriction. My unique demeanor grants me the ability to make friends wherever
Dolce Liberta [translation: sweet freedom], the restaurant I’ve worked at throughout high
school. A workplace turned safe space, the “DL” gave me my Dolce Liberta. My hard work paid
off, working my way from busser to host to finally waiter. I remember when my boss handed me
my green apron: the nights where I felt the sweat beading on my brow were worth it. I was given
the green light; it was time for me to spread my waiter wings. Proudly, I tie my jade-colored
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cape around my waist and approach my tables with my inviting smile and gregarious demeanor. I
ping pong my way around Dolce Liberta, using my gift of gab to provide a warm feeling, similar
to the warm Italian meals I serve. Unlike my teacher, these people appreciate my loquaciousness.
Although each shift feels slightly less like “Waitress: The Musical” and more like an episode of
The yellow from my past has transformed into my bright personality. My mastery of
comedic timing, sardonic remarks, and goofy ideas are always sure to put a smile on the faces of
the people I meet. My attributes blossomed on an unexpected day when Isabella, the new girl,
walked into my middle school class. I was the only one who talked to her on her first day. I had
finally found someone who shares my unique gift (and could talk just as much). With her, my
personality is in full bloom. She is my partner in crime, and there is no better feeling than going
for a drive, singing along to “Pocketful of Sunshine'' by Natasha Bedingfield. Rain or shine, I
In high school, I’ve put the star card-pulling days behind me and stepped in the right
direction. Instead of hiding my outgoing identity, I embrace my “gift of gab.” Now, not only am I
verbose, but an excellent listener, filled with love and compassion. Friends confide in me and my
convivial persona connects me with my peers and teachers. Presenting, talking, and leading
became second nature to me. My booming voice echoes throughout the room, displaying my
confidence. That red card, that was once a punishable offense, now symbolizes the love for what
I’ve reclaimed the colors of my past, creating new symbols of persistence, brightness, and
love. The things I was once punished for are my most celebrated qualities. My chattiness became
Objective: To express my outgoing and comforting personality through my work, personal, and
academic life.
Prompt #7