NAMA : EKO PRASETYO

NIM : 051544781

MATA KUIAH : BAHASA INGGRIS (MKWI4201)

TUGAS 2

1. a) Dear Vincent Prasad : The sentence Vincent uses this is the opening setence addressed
to the recipient of the letter.

b) It's my pleasure to strongly recommend ashley singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role with
Clounddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech Solutions. I have
12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen many young people come
and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always distinguished
herself as a team member: This is the introductory sentence of Rachel Gomez the witer of
the letter, introducing herself, giving her professional background and revealling her
recommendation for Ashley Singer for the role of Jr. Data Analyst.

c) Sincerely, Rachel Gomez Sr. Project Manager : This is the closing of the letter. It includes
the writer's name, title, and sometimes additional contact information. In this case, Rachel
Gomez signs off as the Sr. Project Manager

2. There are several errors in the letter. Here are 5 identified mistakes:

a) Date Format: The date provided in the letter is not properly formatted. The correct
format to use is "July 21, 2021" or "21 July 2021," not "July 21, 2021."

b) Punctuation: There are punctuation errors in the letter. For example, the correct
punctuation is a comma (,) and not a question mark (?) in the sentence "Thank u for your
letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment?" and "We
are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together with
samples of our promotional gifts."

c) Spelling Errors: The letter contains spelling errors such as "u" instead of "you," "n"
instead of "and," and "receive" instead of "receive" (possibly a typographical error).

d) Company Name Spelling: The company name "Bridgestone International Co." is not
spelled correctly. It should be "Bridgestone International Co." instead of "Bridgestone
International Co."
e) Signature: The letter does not have a signature. Typically, a business letter should be
signed by the sender or an authorized party.

By correcting these errors, the letter will become more professional and easier to read.

3. Dear Prof. Allen Smith,

I would like to thank you for your availability as a resource person at the International
Seminar of Science and Technology which was held on Saturday, 28 October 2023 at the
Arthagraha Technology Building, Universitas Terbuka.

I hope the cooperation between Prof. Allen Smith with the Universitas terbuka may
continue.

I look forward to working with you for many years to come.

Thanks again.

Regards,

Eko Prasetyo

Chairman of the committee