Feedback Sheet “Confess” Maja

What did you like about the script?
What did you not like about the script?
Is there anything unclear about the events? At the beginning, it feels a little unclear who
Is there anything you would change about
any of the characters attitudes?
I really like the cutting between the event
and the current day and think that the use of
voice-over is a great touch.
I think that the point of the story is a little
unclear, it feels like a cold-open to a longer
script.
Erla is, therefore the water-boarding
comment seems a little bit out of place. It
also seems a little unclear whether or not
she’s a full-blown prisoner with her asking if
she’s free to go.
Nothing that comes to mind. I think the
characterisation is done really well.

What tone of ending do you think would fit I think the ending needs to explain the
script? murder a little bit more, from this, you can’t
really tell what the whole point of the story
is.