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Personal Narrative
Alayna Babcock
Senior Project
14 September 2023
I have been running cross country for 8 years. I have been doing track and field for 7
years. Over that time, I have met a lot of really amazing new people from schools all over Idaho.
Sometimes it’s hard for me to be nice to people who I am constantly competing with and trying
to beat. However, I try my best to always be kind and encouraging. This has helped me to
befriend a few amazing girls. Specifically, Brylin Bills from Salmon and Sara Bagley from Teton
Track season my sophomore year was going well. I was winning a lot of races and
getting a lot of personal records at every meet. There was a girl from Challis named Taylor, who
was back and forth with me all season long. Sometimes I had faster times and sometimes she
did. I was really nervous to run against her at districts because she was ranked just ahead of
me (by less than a second) in the mile. My competitive streak was showing, and I really wanted
to beat her.
Districts that year was two days of very cold, very windy, Idaho “spring” weather.
Thunder Ridge High School hosted the 1A, 2A, and 3A meets all at once. It was approaching
time for the mile race, and I decided that it was probably about time to start warming up. I put in
my earbuds and turned on the pump-up song that I was obsessed with at the time (“Hit Me With
Your Best Shot”). After trying, somewhat in vain because of the cold, to warm up for a while, I
jogged over to talk to coach Dave. He laid out a game plan for me–
Game plan: Draft off Taylor. Stay right behind her for three laps. Outsprint her in the last
200 meters.
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Coach Sweeney then gave me his own plan: “Don’t let her beat you.”
The announcer called for the 1A girls mile participants to come to the starting line to be
checked in. As I made my way to the south end of the football field, I prayed that my nerves
would be calmed and that during my race I could make good decisions and be confident in
them. I was still really nervous when I got over to the group of girls I would be competing
against.
While I was waiting to receive my number and my instructions, my friend Brylin came
over to talk to me. She was super sweet and encouraging and helped settle my nerves a lot.
When it came time to take off all my extra layers of insulation, Brylin offered to take them to my
tent for me. She wished me good luck as I handed her an armful of outer layers. Just then, a
man called my name to line up on the starting line. As I stood on the line, the freezing wind
Forget the game plan. I got off the line fast and took an early lead in front of Taylor.
Lap one is always easy and a little too fast for the intended pace. That’s ok. Keep going.
For all three laps, Taylor stayed right on my tail. I think her coach gave the same game
plan that Dave gave me because she was drafting off me the whole time! As I came around the
curve toward the 100 meter mark on my 4th and final lap, I passed my friend Sara. She looked
straight at me. I heard her clearly and firmly say, “Alayna, you have to go now.” I don’t usually
start my kick with 300 meters left in my mile, as that is way too far for me to sprint and I am
usually terrified that I will die out before crossing the finish line. However, I knew Sara was right
I sprinted the last 300 meters of the race with as much strength as my exhausted legs
and lungs could muster. I had no idea where Taylor was, but I was NOT getting passed. The last
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100 meters were straight into the roaring wind. I couldn’t hear anything. My quads were
screaming. That final stretch seemed to take an eternity to complete. I finally crossed the finish
line. As I stumbled forward to get out of the way, I looked back and realized that Taylor was
nowhere near me. Brylin ran over to tell me my time and to celebrate with me that I had run a
new personal record, in spite of the wind and the cold! I was super pleased with how I had
As I ate my celebratory ice cream cone on the bus ride home, I reflected on how thankful
I was to have good friends in my life who help me to do hard things. Brylin may not ever realize
how grateful I was for her kindness that day. Sara may not realize how much confidence and
determination she helped me find when I needed it most. However, I will never forget. And I will
forever try my very best to be kind to everyone, even to those with whom I am competing. It’s
hard to know how much impact a little kindness can have on someone's life or how far a little