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TOEFL 2023 Writing 2 - Tamplate (2na1,2x)
TOEFL 2023 Writing 2 - Tamplate (2na1,2x)
Sample Answer 1
Here’s a possible response to the above question. It directly
addresses the responses given by the other students. As you
can see, it elaborates on and challenges the arguments they
made. Some test-takers find this approach easiest.
Sample Answer 2
Here’s a slightly different approach to the question. It mostly
ignores the responses given by the other students. Instead, I
just focused on my response. Some test-takers like this
approach.
Sample Answer 1
This is a challenging topic, but I think we should prioritize the
environment at this time. I strongly agree with Alex’s idea that our lives
will be unpleasant if we focus entirely on economic growth. I
would add that if the environment is damaged by industrial
development we’ll all be more likely to suffer from serious
ailments like cancer and lung disease. These sorts of illnesses
can be a real strain on our medical systems. Maggie raised the
relevant point that it’s possible that profitable companies will
someday solve all of our problems using new technology, but she
doesn’t mention that they might arrive far too late to be of
use. For example, it could take decades for an innovative
company to create a clean energy source, but people are
suffering from environmental catastrophes right now.
Sample Answer 2
While I appreciate the points mentioned by both Maggie and Alex, I
think that we should mainly focus on economic growth. This is because our
lives will become unpleasant if the economy slows down. We all have bills to
pay and those require us to earn an income. Remember that many people
have families to take care of, so they need to earn a regular income. That is
only possible if the economy continues to grow at the same rate year after
year. Some people may feel that preserving the environment is more
important than maintaining our current standard of living, but I tend to
disagree. My main focus is on the quality of life that people enjoy at this
exact moment, not the lives that future generations will lead.