TUGAS 2

BAHASA INGGRIS

DISUSUN OLEH :

NAMA : ADRIAN FIRJATULLAH WALUYO

NIM : 045150218
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1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |rdutta@email.com | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | vincent.prasad@email.com | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with
who has always distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we
first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked
together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company
grew far more than that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with
because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams.
Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but
also by her peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely
confident that Ashley would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the
skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can quickly become
an asset and help your company grow.
If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact
me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.
Jawaban :
1.Ucapan salam atau sapaan pembuka / Opening greeting
2.Isi Surat / Content of the letter
3.Tanda tangan / Signature

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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of
payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,
Robert Brown
Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the
letter above. (@5 pts)

Jawaban : Surat di atas adalah contoh surat resmi sehingga ada beberapa poin yang tidak
sesuai.

1. Ada Penyingkatan dalam surat “thank u”, dimana dalam surat resmi seharusnya tidak
ada penyingkatan kata
2. Terdapat tanda tanya di dalam surat.
3. Tidak menggunakan format yang baku.
4. Pada paragraf pembukaan terdapat singkatan kalimat "Thank u for your letter" sebaiknya
menggunakan kalimat " Thank you for your letter"
5. Paragraf penutup " I look forward to receive your order." sebaiknya menggunakan
kalimat " We ook forward to receive your order."
6. Tata letak bagian info pengirim dan tanggal pengiriman surat sejajar dengan penerima
sehingga menimbulkan kebingungan
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3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith.
Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the
field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a
thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your
international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words long.

Subject: Expressing Gratitude for Your Seminar Contribution

Dear Prof. Allen Smith,

I wanted to extend my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable participation as a guest

speakerat our recent international seminar. Your expertise and insights added immense
depth to thediscussions, and your presentation was both engaging and informative.

The knowledge you shared with our audience hasleft a lasting impact and has been
highlypraised by both attendees and fellow speakers. Your willingness to contribute your
time andexpertise is greatly appreciated and has elevated the quality of our event.

Once again, thank you for your valuable contribution to our seminar. We hope to have
thehonor of welcoming you as a speaker in future events. Your support has been
instrumental inmaking our seminar a resounding success.

Warm regards,

Adrian Waluyo
Chairman ot the Internasional Seminar Committe