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Emilys Peer Feedback Sheet
Emilys Peer Feedback Sheet
1. Is the script scary enough? Is there anything I should change to make it creepier?
There’s plenty of scary elements throughout.
2. Is the ending strong enough? Should I change it? I think that the reveal of the doll on
the counter is a good cliff hanger ending
3. Did you like the script? Please elaborate why yes or no. I liked the dialogue between
john and Yvonne and the script was very enjoyable
4. Is it boring? Is there anything I could do to make it more interesting? The doll could
maybe attack one of them or could write something in dirt on a wall
5. Is the dialogue realistic? The dialogue is very good and makes me believe that they
are a couple.