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    The document discusses the increasing trend of people in many countries wearing Western clothing such as suits and jeans instead of traditional clothing. It notes that while Western clothing is generally more comfortable and convenient, it can also be more expensive than traditional clothing. The document argues that this issue has both positive and negative aspects. It then provides suggestions on how to improve the writing, such as paying more attention to word choice and proofreading for errors.

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    The document discusses the increasing trend of people in many countries wearing Western clothing such as suits and jeans instead of traditional clothing. It notes that while Western clothing is generally more comfortable and convenient, it can also be more expensive than traditional clothing. The document argues that this issue has both positive and negative aspects. It then provides suggestions on how to improve the writing, such as paying more attention to word choice and proofreading for errors.

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    Result Task 2 - IELTS Science

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    The document discusses the increasing trend of people in many countries wearing Western clothing such as suits and jeans instead of traditional clothing. It notes that while Western clothing is generally more comfortable and convenient, it can also be more expensive than traditional clothing. The document argues that this issue has both positive and negative aspects. It then provides suggestions on how to improve the writing, such as paying more attention to word choice and proofreading for errors.

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    inaccuracies in word choice and usage.

    For example, "a phenomenon of wearing


    Writing Task 2 Western is more and more increase" is not
    grammatically correct and lacks precision.

    In many countries, people now wear western clothes


    such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. There are some errors in spelling and
    word formation, such as "oppotunities"
    instead of "opportunities," "custome"

            instead of "costume," and "complited"


    instead of "complicated." These errors do
        </> not severely impede communication but
    are noticeable.
    sophisticated modency. Furthermore, many residents are
    influenced by some popular cultures such as Hollywood
    How to improve:
    movies, Western TV show so they have a tendency pf
    wearing clothes similar to their idols. Consequence, a
    1. Pay more attention to word choice
    phenomenon of wearing Western is more and more increase.
    and collocation to ensure accurate
    I argue that this issue has both positive and negative aspects.
    and precise expression. Avoid using
    Firstly, almost all Western clothes are comfortable and
    words or phrases that may sound
    convenient for many users. With different materials and
    awkward or incorrect.
    various wonderful styles of Western custome, people can
    2. Proofread the essay for spelling and
    easily find many clothes that fit them well and suit for any
    word formation errors to enhance
    activities while traditional clothes are often designed many
    overall clarity and readability.
    layers and so complited so it is hard to wear them on a daily
    3. Work on sentence structure and
    basis. By contrast, most Western clothes are too expensive
    grammar to improve the overall
    than traditional clothes. Some buyers have to spend a
    fluency and coherence of the essay.
    significant proportion of their budget on buying them and this
    problem puts a burden on their finances.
    In conclusion, there are great number of reasons behind this
    tendency and in my opinion, I believe this trend having both
    advantage and disadvantage to consumers’ life
    Grammatical Range &
    Accuracy
    New
    Nâng cấp Save
    Word Count: 20 Writify PLUS as
    271 Docx
    Plus Band Score: 5.0

    Explanation:
    Muốn tăng band nhanh hơn? Hãy tận dụng những gợi ý để sửa lại The essay demonstrates some
    bài của mình rồi lưu lại nhé grammatical range and accuracy, but it
    also contains numerous grammatical
    Chat với IELTS Science errors and punctuation issues. The essay
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    tends to use a limited range of sentence

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