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Nowadays, many young adults seem to have a problem staying motivated while trying to succeed. Many
young adults are finding it tough to get motivated for success these days, and it's becoming a real issue
in our society. I partially agree that the lack of motivation contributes to young adults' struggles in
achieving success, but there are additional factors involved as well. Beside problems with motivation
involving time and goal management, the limited opportunities also significantly contribute to young
adults facing difficulties in achieving success.

First and foremost, I strongly believe that the main reason young adults find it hard to achieve
success is because they lack of motivation in aspect of time management. This is because they are not
motivated to manage their time well. This usually happens as they grow up and face more
responsibilities. Some young adults struggle with managing their time because they have no discipline
and a daily timetable. Without discipline and timetable, they may find it hard to stay organized that may
lead them being unmotivated. Learning to set a schedule and stick to it can be tough for them, especially
if they are lack of discipline. This lack of discipline on time management makes them harder to be
successful. Thus, it is without a doubt that lack of motivation in terms of time management is the
leading cause of the young adults hardly achieve success.

Additionally, young adults nowadays lack of motivation in terms of zero effort in their goal management.
Young adults do not put enough effort in their goal management. This can result in missed opportunities
and slow progress during the transformation process. Without clear goals and plans, young adults may
struggle to prioritize their efforts. Also, they lack of confidence to try something and think that they will
fail without trying first. Hence, it is evident that lack of success among young adults is also caused by
lack of motivation in terms of not managing their goals.

However, lack of opportunity is also one of the factors for not achieving success other than lack of
motivation. The problem of insufficient financial resources from parents causes young adults to cancel
their intention to get involved in what they want to do. This is because young adults worry that they will
increase their parents burden. For example, those who are good at playing guitar necessarily want a
better quality and durable guitar to play. As a result, they are afraid to ask money from their parents to
buy the guitar and the intention of becoming a successful guitarist is difficult for young adults to achieve
because not all of them get the opportunities that are available. Thus, it is without a doubt that lack of
opportunity also one of the factors that stops young adults in achieving success.

In a nutshell, success is not impossible when you have the right drive such as motivation. Regardless, we
need to acknowledge that motivation is not the only factor that will lead to success. Success also
depends on many factors such as opportunity and financial security. We need to work hard to achieve
the desired success and don't forget to pray to God so that our paths to success become easier.