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THE VALUE OF THE SPINE FOR ORGANS

Although some people believe that pains in the back is normal. I consider that isn’t
normal and is an alarming notice for our health. In spite of some scientist studies. Despite
the fact that some scientific studies say that these pains come from the misalignment of
the vertebra of the column, there are people who think that it’s only due to stress and
they go for relaxing massages. Perhaps that isn’t enough to prevent future damage.

There are several reasons to take chiropractic as an alternative medicine to treat these
pains. Firstly, we must understand that the spine is the base of our body. Futhermore, if
we feel pain in any part it may be due to the deviation of this. In Peru there are many
forms to improve our spine, such as chiropractic, which is a non-invasive process and
without pain we can see changes. One argument against this process is that it can take
twice as long as with conventional medicine. Although it is a slow and expensive
treatment, many people are doing it for its long-term effectiveness. In addition, this
doesn’t use machines or instruments, only the hands of the chiropractor who has the
experience and study necessary to align the column and leave it as it should be.
In conclusion, I believe that alternative therapies like this should be more studied so that
people feel confident about the options that they have to eliminate these health problems.

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Content: Organization & Cohesion Language: Style & register Task

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