Please revise the table of contents again, here is a little guide:

2. Nickel alloys (Here it is not important to mention each individual alloy, but
rather general information such as properties, applications, phase and phase
diagrams, Influence of different elements on nickel alloys etc., ) -> Readjust
subchapters accordingly.

3. Non-metallic inclusions (Endogenous and exogenous, origin, size, oxidic, non

oxidic, etc.) -> Readjust subchapters accordingly

4. slags (Please focus first on the basics, as you have done, and then on nickel
alloys)

sources of sentences

go directly to nickel-based superalloys and not to superalloys in general.

no bullets or numbering

No colon in the text. Please write a coherent continuous text

No first-person perspective. That is unscientific.

No need to list everything, it adds no value to your work. More important are
properties, phases and what influence each element has

a distinction is made between exogenous and endogenous inclusions. Please research

this. Too short.

From the rough to the specific, i.e. your main chapter can be called Slags in
Nickel Metallurgy, then you can introduce the chapter and first write about slags
in general, such as properties, oxygen permeability, basicity, structures and then
specifically on nickel and which slag systems are used and for what. Don't lose
focus on your topic.

Only inserting phase diagrams without descriptions makes no sense. In general,

there are too many diagrams.

corr2:
(reverse slag chapter)
please merge the chapters 2.2 and 2.3

Here you can give a short introduction to the chapter and a short summary of what
the chapter is about. You don't need a separate sub-chapter for that.

Here you can give a short introduction to the chapter and a short summary of what
the chapter is about. You don't need a separate sub-chapter for that.