Letter

You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use
for your job.

Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter

• describe the problem with the equipment

• explain how this problem is affecting your work

• say what you want the shop or company to do

Write about 150 words in an appropriate format and style.

Candidate’s response
Dear Madam or Sir

I am writing to complain about the equipments which I bought from you that I use for my job.
I am a doctor so I bought medicine boxes and medicine equipments from your shop . When I
bought many different furniture from your shop , equipments liked to me but , I arrived at my
home with all furnishings , they did not comfort to my home . For example , my house is small
so , equipments did not contained at my home . Moreover , While I was using the furniture , I
saw cracks at behind and bottom of equipments . Likewise, cracks were ware , deep and big .
If cracks did not deep and big , I did not complain about equipments . Furthermore , Colors of
furnishings was not right for my room . As colour of my room is light blue but color of
equipments were dark blue . So , I wanted to change it , such as , colors of equipments and
figures of equipments . If it is possible changing the color of the equipments to air color . I
assume , you will replace the equipments as it is obviously wrong .

I hope to hear from you soon.

your fuithfully

Shahzoda
Date 18.11.2023

Umumiy tahlil

Xatning ochilish va yakunlash qismlari mavjud, lekin yakuniy qismda

xatolik bor ‘your fuithfully | yours faithfully’.. Barcha tayanch savollarga
javob berishga harakat qilgansiz, ammo siz aynan qaysi jihoz yoki mebel
haqida e’tiroz bildirayotganingizni aniq ko’rsatmagansiz. Undan tashqari,
Topshiriq siz mebel rangi haqida e’tiroz bildirgansiz, buni odatda xaridorning o’zi
talablarining tanlaydi va buni do’konga shikoyat qilmaydi. Siz bunday xatda do’kon
tomonidan yo’l qo’yilgan aniq bir xatolik haqida yozishingiz kerak.
bajarilishi
Sizga tavsiyamiz

Xat topshirig’idagi har bir tayanch savolga e’tibor bering. Yozishni boshlashdan
oldin reja tuzing. Har bir gapingiz savolga aloqador ekanligiga amin bo’ling.

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Fikrlaringiz mantiqiy ketma-ketlikda joylangan va rang-barang bog’lovchi

vositalaridan foydalanilgan. Ammo ba’zi holatlarda bog’lovchilar
yetishmaydi, masala quyidagi gapda when bo’glovchisi kerak ‘I arrived at
my home with all furnishings , they did not comfort to my home.’ Ba’zi
holatlarda esa bo’glovchini ortiqcha qo’llagansiz. Masalan ‘ As colour of
Ravonlik va
my room is light blue but color of equipments were dark blue .‘ Aslida,
bog’lanish
quyidagi ko’rinishda yozsangiz yaxshiroq ‘The color of my room is
light blue, while that of the equipment is dark blue’.

Sizga tavsiyamiz

Bog’lovchilarni to’g’ri qo’llang, ortiqcha va kam ishlatilishga yo’l qo’ymang. Har

bir tayanch savolga javobingizni alohida paragrafda yozing.

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Grammatik bilimingiz yetarli va siz rang-barang qo’shma gaplardan

foydalanishga harakat qilgansiz. Masalan, so, when, if, which li gaplar.
Ammo sizda tez-tez grammatik xatoliklar kuzatilgan. Masalan, equipments
| equipment, color of | the color of,
Grammatika
Sizga tavsiyamiz

to be, artikl, preposition, zamonlar, otlarning shaxs-sonda mosligi borasida ham

aniqlikga e’tibor bering. Kerak joylarida modal fe’llardan foydalishga harakat
qiling.

Umumiy tahlil
 Lug’at boyligingiz umumiy fikrlarni yetkazish uchun yetarli darajada va siz
kam ishlatiladigan va mavzuga xos so’zlardan foydalangansiz, masalan

Lug’at boyligi ‘replace, crack, furnishings’. Lekin sizda to’g’ri so’z tanlashga doir
xatoliklar ham bor. Masalan ‘they did not comfort to my home,
equipments did not contained at my home’

Sizga tavsiyamiz

Bilmagan so’zingizni umuman qo’llamang. Collocation lardan foydalanishga

h k t ili g
 ESSAY
Nowadays shops tend to stay open longer hours ever y day of week .
Do the advantages of this development over weigh the disadvantages?

Write at least 250 words in an appropriate style and format

Candidate’s response

Over the last few years , markets tend to stay open more period every time of week. While
There are some benefits of this , I believe the drawbacks would eclipse potential advantages .

On the one hand ,open longer time of shops which are sell foods , clothes , medicines and
others are useful for some people . Becouse , some people work almost every time so , they
have to shopping at night . For example, my neighboor always work every day so , she goes to
shops with children at night . Likewise , She buys different clothes to her children . Moreover ,
accident sometimes happens at roundabout in the city center . So , they go to the hospital
and as they need different medines , they go to chemist's shop .

On the other hand , open far time of markets are demege . Becouse , if shops open at night ,
cars and people are crowded at night and accident would be happen a lot of at night .
Moreover , more air became dirty becouse , cars take out poison smoking both at day and at
night .

In conclusion ,open longer time of shops are good for me . Becouse , I like shopping at night
and sometimes I hungry at night . Likewise , I want eat chocolates , sweets or ice creams at
night so , I go to the shop at night .

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Umumiy tahlil

Insho talablaridan biri bo’lgan kamida 250 so’z yozish talabini

bajarmagansiz va buning uchun sizga jarima qo’llaniladi.

Siz mavzuning ham ijobiy, ham salbiy taraflarini ochib berishga harakat
qilgansiz. Insho format talabga javob beradi. Lekin sizning eng asosiy yo’l
qo’ygan xatoingiz bu - Kirish qismida siz do’konlarning uzoqroq muddat
ochiq turishini ko’proq yomon degansiz, ammo Xulosaga kelganda men
buni ma’qullayman (bu ijobiy) degansiz. Ya’ni, qarama-qarshi firkrga
kelgansiz. Esda tuting – kirish va xulosa qismida sizning pozitsiyangiz bir
Topshiriq xil bo’lishi shart! Undan tashqari siz mavzuga taalluqli bo’lmagan
talablarini ma’lumotlarni ham yozyasiz. Masalan, ‘ For example , my neighboor
bajarilishi always work every day so , she goes to shops with children at night .
Likewise , She buys different clothes to her children . ‘ Shu qismda oxirgi
gap ortiqcha, chunki u sizning fikringizni asoslashga aloqasi yo’q.

Sizga tavsiyamiz

Hech qachon 250 so’zdan kam insho yozmang. Har bir yozgan gapingiz
mazvudagi sizning fikringizni asoslay olishi kerak, buning uchun siz reja tuzib
keyin yozishni boshlang. Body paragraflarining ikkalasini ham teng miqdorda
yoritishni o’rganing.

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Firklaringizning mantiqan joylashuvi, mavzuning umumiy rivojlanib

borishi, paragraflarga bo’linish yaxshi. Siz turli xil bog’lovchi vositalaridan
foydalanishga harakat qilgansiz, masalan ‘moreover, likewise, and, so, on
the one hand … ‘ . Ammo, ba’zi o’rinlarda bularni keragidan kam yoki
Ravonlik va ortiqcha qo’llagansiz. Masalan, ‘ Becouse , if shops open at night , cars
bog’lanish and people are crowded at night and then accident would be happen a
lot of at night ‘.

Sizga tavsiyamiz

Bog’lovchilarni to’g’ri qo’llang, ortiqcha va kam ishlatilishga yo’l qo’ymang. Har

bir paragrafingiz faqat bir g’oya atrofida aylansin.

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Turli xil sodda va qo’shma gap qurilmaralaridan foydalanishga harakat

qilgansiz garchi ba’zan ularni tuzishda xatolar qilgan bo’lsangiz ham.
Ammo, tez-tez grammatik xatoliklar qilgansiz: quyidagilar -

Birlik-ko’plik (ice creams | ice cream),

 zamon tanlash (more air became dirty | more air has become
dirty)
Grammatika to be tushib qo’lishi (I hungry at night | I am hungry at night )
fe’l shakllari( I want eat | I to want eat )
artikllar(at roundabout | at a roundabout ),
preposition (buys different clothes to her children | buys different
clothes for her children)

Sizga tavsiyamiz

Qo’shma va murakkab gaplarning ko’proq turlarini ishlatib, fikr bildirishni

o’rganing. Yuqorida ko’rsatilgan xatoliklar ustida ishlab, gaplarni bexato yozishga
ko’nikma hosil qiling.

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Lug’at boyligingiz ham fikrlaringizni yetkazish uchun yetarli, lekin rang-

baranglik darajasi cheklangan. Siz, shunindek, ba’zi o’rinlarda so’z
tanlashda va to’g’ri imloda xatoliklarga yo’l qo’ygansiz.

damege | damage
medines | medicines
becouse | because
every time | all the time
Lug’at boyligi take out poison smoking | give off poisonous smoke

Ayniqsa, inshoning deyarli barcha yerida ‘do’konlarning uzoqroq vaqt

ochiq turishi’ degan jumlani to’g’ri tarjima qila olmagansiz.

Sizga tavsiyamiz

Bilgan so’zlarni e’tiborliroq yozib, bitta ham imloviy xato qilmaslikga harakat
qiling. Lug’at boyligingizni boyiting. Buning uchun collocationlar, insho
topshirig’ida keladigan asosiy mavzulardagi so’zlarni o’rganib chiqing
(environment, crime, education ....)

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 Speaking
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Date 18.11.2023

Umumiy tahlil

Asosan oddiy grammatik gap qurilishlaridan foydalandi. Qo’shma va

murakkab gaplar juda kam ishlatildi. Gaplarda tez-tez grammatik xatolar
mavjuda, masalan,it is carry myself, its book take part in brave woman,
books is.

Grammatika Sizga tavsiyamiz

Gapirganingizni telefonga yozdiring va avvalo xatolaringizni o’zingiz aniqlashga

harakat qiling. So’ngra sizdan bilimi yuqori boshqa odamdan xatolaringizni
topishga yordam so’rang. Keyingi safar bunday xatolarni qilmaslikga qatiy
harakat qiling. Qo’shma gap tuzishni mashq qiling.

Umumiy tahlil

Ravon va uzunroq gaplashga harak qildi, lekin nutqdagi notabiiy ikkilanish

va pauzalar bunga halaqit beradi. Bog’lovchilardan foydalanishi yaxshi,
Ravonlik va lekin ularning rang-barangligini oshirish kerak
bog’lanish
Sizga tavsiyamiz

Savollarga batafsilroq javob berishga harakat qiling, shunda ikkilanish va

pauzalar asta yo’qoladi. Ayniqsa part 3 savollariga javob berishni mashq qiling.
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So’zlarni umuman olganda tushunsa bo’ladi. Lekin ba’zan so’zlarni xato

talaffuz qiladi yoki aniq talaffuz qilmaydi. Masalan, last, past,
comfortable, prefer. Ba’zan, bunday tushunarsiz talaffuz qilishi, ma’noni
tushinishga halaqit beradi. Gap urg’usini ham o’rganish kerak, chunki bu
deyarli ko’zga tashlanmaydi.
Talaffuz
Sizga tavsiyamiz

Ko’proq Youtubeda sizni qiziqtirgan mavzularda inglizcha videolar ko’ring. Ularni

talaffuziga e’tibor bering. So’zlarni va gaplarni qanday urg’u bilan aytilishini
kuzating. Ustozingiz va do’stlaringizdan siz xato talaffuz qiladigan so’zlarni
aniqlashda yordam so’rang.

Umumiy tahlil

Lug’at boyligi firklarni bildirish uchun minimal darajada yetarli ammo u

juda cheklangan. Turli xil mavzularda erkin gapira olish uchun so’z boyligi
yetarli emas. Ba’zi o’rinlarda so’zni to’g’ri tanlashga doir xatoliklarni qiladi
masalan, historic | historical, point | paint. sociality | society.

Lug’at boyligi Collocation va idiomatic til vositalaridan foydalanmadi.

Sizga tavsiyamiz

Lug’at boyligi ustida ishlang. Ayniqsa collocationlar va so’z birikmalarini yodlab,

gapirganda qo’llang.

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