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Topic #3
10:30AM
September 15, 2023
Societal roles have been set in place so that everyone has a set task to follow that will
ultimately help benefit the society as whole. However, the greater the impact one has on society,
the more problematic they can be. Hatshepsut in The Expedition to Punt and Gilgamesh in The
Epic of Gilgamesh hold high societal roles as leaders of their society and prove that holding such
a high status results in tyrannical actions. First, both Gilgamesh and Hatshepsut are very prideful
in their abilities as leaders of their country which serves as motivation to threaten their people to
accept the standards that they established. Second, the people of Egypt weren’t approving of
Hatshepsut taking the throne after the passing of her half-brother simply because she was a
woman. To assert her position, she led an expedition to Punt and unethically demanded that
luxurious goods be given to the people of Egypt. Finally, Gilgamesh, the King of Uruk, was
highly powerful and used his power to his advantage by starting disputes that feed his ego. In this
paper, I will argue how both Hatshepsut and Gilgamesh prove that holding a higher societal role
On a number of occasions, pride was used among Hatshepsut and Gilgamesh for personal
gain rather than for the benefit of their societies. Hatshepsut establishes her worthiness of being
Pharaoh by describing a conversation she had with the gods in which they tell her that she was
meant to take the throne after her half-brother’s passing and that she is highly deserving of
respect. According to Hatshepsut, the gods say that “He entrusted to her the heritage of the Two
Lands, the kingship of Upper and Lower Egypt.” (Hatshepsut 2006, 1). If the gods are telling her
that she was meant to be the next ruler of Egypt, then no one can really object to that claim
without facing consequences of apostacy. To further establish her position of power, she declares
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how the gods describe her by saying, “She has no enemies among the southerners, she has no
antagonists among the northerners. Heaven and all foreign lands created by the god are
completely subservient to her.” (Hatshepsut 2006, 2). Again, because these are claims that the
gods are making about Hatshepsut, the people of Egypt are inclined to treat her the way the gods
intended her to be treated to avoid conflict with government despite their own opinions. Rather
than using her pride for the people’s best interest, it was used as a scare tactic to force the people
to accept Hatshepsut as the new Pharaoh. As for Gilgamesh, he used his physical strength to
satisfy his personal cravings. On many occasions, he would cause trouble amongst the Uruk
people in which “The young men of Uruk he harries without warrant, Gilgamesh lets no son go
free to his father.” (George 2002, 3). Gilgamesh is aware of his strength and uses it simply
because he can, and the more men he is able to defeat, the further it will feed his ego. Not only
does he hunt after the men of Uruk, but also the women in which he steals men’s wives and
mother’s daughters to engage in nonconsensual sexual activities (George 2002, 3-4). Rather than
using his strength and powers to protect his people, Gilgamesh uses it to his advantage by
fulfilling his own wants and needs. This is indicated by the fact that the people are constantly
tyrannized by his actions and do not feel safe under his rule. Thus, pride as a result of one’s high
societal role is used to threaten people into accepting their orders rather than benefiting the
society as a whole.
One may argue that pride, though used to satisfy one’s own desires, can be used to satisfy
the needs of others. Hatshepsut uses her power to not only assert her position as Pharaoh, but to
bring back goods from Punt for the people of Egypt. We can see the Egyptian people’s gratitude
and acceptance of Hatshepsut’s efforts as she writes, “They brought things the like of which had
not been brought to other kings of Lower Egypt…because of the greatness of the might of this
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noble god Amun-Re, lord of the Thrones of the Two Lands.” (Hatshepsut 2006, 9). However, we
must also consider how Hatshepsut was able to achieve these goods for her people. During the
expedition, the King and Queen of Punt weren’t expecting the Egyptians arrival as they reacted
with shock, saying, “Why have you come here to this foreign land, unknown to Egyptians?”
(Hatshepsut 2006, 7). Rather than notifying them that they were visiting Punt, Hatshepsut’s men
made an unannounced appearance, expecting that her role as Pharaoh was an invitation in itself
to allow her to show up at any Kingdom whenever she wanted. We can also infer that the King
and Queen of Punt feared the Egyptians arrival as images depict their hands in a surrender
position. (Hatshepsut 2006, 14). Again, Hatshepsut assumes that her power grants her easy
access to these luxurious goods from Punt without considering a more respectful approach to
possessing such items. Her demanding attitude ultimately proves that when one holds a higher
societal role, it results in the false idea that things should come easy for them.
Considering that he was the strongest amongst the people of Uruk, Gilgamesh utilizes his
abilities to start conflicts with others despite people’s objections to these disputes. At one point of
the story, Gilgamesh seeks to defeat Humbaba despite Enkidu’s pleads to avoid the treacherous
journey and to avoid the terrors of Humbaba himself. (George 2002, 18-19). Gilgamesh
ultimately ignores the warnings put out by Enkidu and the elders of Uruk and sets out on the
journey to kill Humbaba in which he successfully accomplished. Even when punished for his
actions by witnessing the death of Enkidu, Gilgamesh still sought for more that he continued to
believe he could attain. He went on a long journey to visit Uta-Napishiti in hopes to achieve
immortality and was disappointed when he tells him, “[Enkidu indeed] they took his doom. [But
you], you toiled away, and what did you achieve? You exhaust yourself with ceaseless toil, you
fill your sinews with sorrow.” (George 2006, 86). Gilgamesh expects that his strength and power
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will continue to support him beyond death and he becomes frantic when he finds out that he, like
every human, cannot cheat death and must eventually die. Thus, the more each victory one
achieves, the more that success feeds their ego which ultimately leads them into partaking in
When one holds a higher role in society, they are more likely to participate in tyrannical
activities rather than using their platform to benefit society. We see that both Gilgamesh and
Hatshsepsut gained a sense of pride that eventually led them to use their power for their own
good. Hatshepsut, although providing her people with goods, used her power to unethically
achieve those goods from Punt without considering a more respectful approach to the situation.
Gilgamesh’s pride led him to partake in multiple disputes that will further feed his ego,
regardless of his peers’ oppositions. A common thread among those who have a higher position
in society is to see what more they can achieve by using their authority. We see this with
communist countries where those world leaders use their platform to have people follow their
strict set of rules that don’t necessarily benefit the peoples’ well-being, only their own.
Furthermore, those who’ve accomplished many goals because of their higher role in society set
greater expectations for themselves and develop a mindset in which they believe should be able
to accomplish more. When holding a high societal role, goals that were once set to satisfy the
society turn into goals that will strictly satisfy the beholder. As I mentioned previously, societal
roles are used to benefit the society as whole, and that especially applies to those who hold
authority in higher positions. If they let their selfishness get in the way of the needs of the
people, then it could lead to a downfall in the community. Overall, it is important to remember
that with more power comes greater responsibility and one must overlook their own desires to