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Up 3 Understanding Punctutation
Up 3 Understanding Punctutation
Up 3 Understanding Punctutation
My other essay was rushed and did not meet the criteria. Particularly, I improved clarity
and analysis. There was little to no evidence used to back up my statements and that has now
been fixed. The style and organization as subpar and did not meet the expectations but with my
Everything about my work has improved. The prompt is more fully answered, it read’s
Professor Henken
ENC 1101
Rhetoric can be formed in a multitude of different ways including, but not limited to,
word choice and punctuation. Rhetorical tools are incredibly powerful to the reader as well as the
writer. It allows the writer to express themselves more effectively and express a specific tone or
emphasis on a piece of information. It also allows the reader to better understand the writer and
the message the author is trying to convey. The use of rhetoric using through punctuation varies
For example, in opinion news articles they are filled with rhetorical uses of punctuation.
opinion commentaries are filled with rhetorical uses of punctuation. From dashes to create
emphasis to colons to create anticipation there is a strong variety in of punctuation and sentence
structures. For instance, the article published on CNN titledthe CNN commentary titled
“Opinion: It’s incredibly obvious what voters want. Republicans – and Democrats – won’t
listen.” talks about the state of the US government and what the people want what the American
people with the 2024 elections coming up. It is well known the CNN favors Ddemocrats over the
Republicans. Just by analyzing the title, the use of the dash to provide emphasis that democrats
this is significant. Just by analyzing the title, the use of the Dash to provide emphasis that
Democrats are also a part of the problem, which is significant from a publisher like CNN
because they tend to be anti-Republican. Further in the article more rhetorical punctuation is
used saying “Trump prioritized a conventional Republican economic agenda: tax cuts,
deregulation and repealing Obamacare.” The use of the colon draws attention to the actions that
are apart of the conventional Republican economic agenda. This done again in the article stating,
“Populist voters, Drutman argues, share similar leanings to most populist leaders: They skew
"left" on economic issues and "right" on identity issues.” Again, drawing attention to what makes
In contrast, spam emails have little to no rhetorical use of punctuation. The sentences are
bland and are often comprised of periods and commas with the occasional exclamation point. A
overwhelming majority of these types of emails are scams and relying on the uneducated to fall
for these tricks. The lack of rhetorical punctuation can he attributed to a few reasons. One would
be the source of these emails are usually from people whose first language is not English therefor
not educated enough to used rhetoric effectively. Secondly, the text focused on other forms of
rhetoric to grab the reads attention including word choice and visual aids. These emails are short
in content and are very quick reads. People will likely on look at these emails for ten seconds
max. In a spam email that I received it said, “A user just logged into your Facebook account
from a new device IPhone 13 Pro Max. We are sending you this email to verify it’s really you.”
There is not much to look at here. Single independent clause sentences with little to no meaning.
In another spam email I received it says, “You've been selected to receive an exclusive offer!”
Although the exclamation point provides some rhetorical appeal through punctuation, the use of
word choice overshadows the punctuation. The word “exclusive” creates a much greater effect.
For writing that are looked at for very minimal amount of time the authors understand that word
choice is far more powerful. That is not enough time for the reader to think critically about the
As shown, rhetoric can be conveyed in a multitude of ways, but one the most advanced
and effective uses of it is through punctuation. Due to its advanced natural it is not always used.
Opinion commentaries use it frequently compared to something like spam email which are on the
opposite side of the spectrum. Both are effective in the author communicating their message
Sentence Changes:
Original Sentence: “Opinion: It’s incredibly obvious what voters want. Republicans – and
Sentence without rhetorical appeals: It’s incredibly obvious what voters want. Republicans and
With the rhetorical appeal removed the sentence becomes incredibly bland. As the title of article,
it is supposed to gain the readers attention but it does the opposite. The use of punctuation is
Pro Max. We are sending you this email to verify it's really you.”
Sentence with added rhetoric: “A user just logged into your Facebook account from a new device –
an IPhone 13 Pro Max. We are sending you this email: to verify that it’s really you!”
In the new sentence that has added rhetorical punctuation it has created a greater meaning in the
sentence. The dash emphasis what new device has been logged in with. This helps the reader
know that if they don’t have this device then their account has been infiltrated. This is more
convincing then the sentence with no rhetorical appeal. The addition of the colon and the
exclamation point both add value. The colon adds some anticipation to the sentence and more
anticipation as to the purpose of the email. The exclamation point adds a sense of urgency and
importance to the email that could lead to a poor decision to follow up on the email and get
scammed.