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Essay 3 - Final Draft
Essay 3 - Final Draft
Dariana Contreras
ENGL 1301-130
16 November 2023
“Teen Dating Violence (Physical and Sexual) Among US High School Students” by Vagi,
et al. is a scientific research article focused on the health-risk behaviors newly distinguished as
symptoms of Teen Dating Violence (TDV) from the revisions made in 2013 by The Centers for
Disease Control and Prevention’s National Youth Risk Behavior Survey. Given that the topic
touches on the lived experiences of adolescents and their social impact, the audience narrowed
down to school staff, students, and parents. The authors’ claim for this article was to
demonstrate that the TDV questions are connected to strong associations between health risk
behaviors and the Youth Risk Behavior Survey. As a result, the authors establish strong
credibility in the article because it illustrates data reasoned by experts and implies reliable
Firstly, Vagi et al. present tables illustrating the prevalence of TDV among high school
students, categorized by demographic factors. The fourth table sets them apart by sex, and it
studies how the types of TDV they have experienced impact their behavior by risking their
health, such as attempting suicide, abusing alcohol, or having inconsistent sexual activity. Under
the subtitle named Results, the authors state that Table 4 proved that “every risk behavior was
most prevalent among students who had experienced both physical and sexual TDV.” The table
also showed that females were more likely to consider suicide, get into a physical fight, possess a
weapon, get bullied online, and binge drink if they went through sexual TDV only. Among
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males, those who exclusively experienced sexual TDV were also more likely to engage in these
health-risk behaviors. Additionally, they were more prone to having multiple sexual partners and
currently being sexually active. This table, reasoned by experts, displays correlations between
experiencing TDV and engaging in a concerning manner. By stating that “every risk behavior
was most prevalent among students who had both physical and sexual TDV,” the authors
highlight the strength of their research. In addition, the breakdown of their results for both
females and males adds depth to the analysis, making their rhetorical strategy, logos, more
convincing.
Secondly, including academic credentials beneath the article’s title and references to
credible sources serves as a strategic use of ethos, reinforcing the reliability of the information
given throughout the passage. The authors each have their degrees listed next to their names,
shown as “Kevin J. Vagi, PhD; Emily O’Malley Olsen, MSPH; Kathleen C. Basile, PhD; Alana
M. Vivolo-Kantor, MPH” (474). As well as giving credit to 36 professionals and giving insight
into why their knowledge was relevant to the passage. For instance, they mentioned the Centers
for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) frequently, so as a reference, they gave credit to all
the authors under the organization of the CDC. They also relied on other people’s articles, which
is demonstrated by the title of articles given next to experts’ names, such as “Longitudinal effect
of intimate partner abuse on high-risk behavior among adolescents” (482). Then, next to it is
their DOI number to properly give credit to their references. This evidence further supports the
assertion that including the expertise of each author and using connections strategically indicates
ethos to cultivate trustworthiness. The authors’ academic degrees clearly indicate ethos by the
the CDC, the authors align themselves with reputable entities. The meticulous referencing not
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only acknowledges the contributions of other scholars but also adds a layer of verifiability to
Lastly, the authors fortify their credibility in the article by deliberately incorporating a
factor of ethos through the breakdown of their design and showing the history that creates
rigorous research of the Youth Risk Behavior Survey (YRBS). For example, transparency is
shown when they state, “Student participation in the survey is anonymous and voluntary, and
local parental permission procedures are used. Students record their responses directly on a self-
administered computer-scannable questionnaire.” This shows that Vagi, et al. want to imply that
the survey is trustworthy by respecting their participants' privacy. They also mention parental
permission procedures to ensure the survey has ethical guidelines they carefully follow. By using
an approachable and open strategy for gathering information, analysis, and reporting in the
YRBS, the authors improve their credibility. The passage refers to the fact that the prevalence of
physical and sexual TDV has been published in past years, indicating that the study is part of a
broader body of research. On page 475, the authors explain how “the national school-based
YRBS is a cross-sectional survey that has been conducted biennially since 1991.” This adds
credibility by showcasing a history of scholarly work on the topic by updating it every two years
In conclusion, Vagi et al.'s "Teen Dating Violence (Physical and Sexual) Among US High
School Students" is a notable scientific contribution that delves into the varied subject of Teen
Dating Violence (TDV). The study, prompted by revisions to The Centers for Disease Control
and Prevention's National Youth Risk Behavior Survey in 2013, focuses on health-risk behaviors
that have recently been identified as indications of TDV. The writers address an important topic
and customize their work to a specific audience, including school staff, students, and parents, by
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focusing on the lived experiences of teenagers and the societal effects of TDV. The article's
critical argument, which intends to establish a connection between TDV questions and strong
connections with health risk behaviors as determined by the Youth Risk Behavior Survey, is
supported by a precise and extensive approach. The authors diligently reason the data, depending
on the knowledge of professionals in the field and credible sources, to support the legitimacy of
their arguments. The deliberate incorporation of expert insights and relevant references
emphasizes the study's integrity and presents it as a trustworthy resource on the TDV topic.
Developing strong credibility through expert reasoning and reliance on reputable sources
establishes this research as an essential component in the ongoing discussion about Teen Dating
Violence. It not only grows academic understanding of TDV, but it also has the potential to
encourage real-world changes in how society addresses and combats this widespread issue
affecting the lives of adolescents. Finally, Vagi et al.'s work goes beyond the limitations of an
effort to address and reduce Teen Dating Violence among US high school students.
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Work Cited
Vagi, Kevin, et al. “Teen Dating Violence (Physical and Sexual) Among US High School
Students.” Findings From the 2013 National Youth Risk Behavior Survey, vol. 169, no. 5, 2015,