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Essay 3 Final Draft
Essay 3 Final Draft
Essay 3 Final Draft
Jaden Maldonado
Professor McCann
English 1301.129
15 November 2023
“On average 35% of students are being bullied in academic institutions in Bangladesh”
(“Bullying Among University Students in Bangladesh”). There were 32.6 million students
enrolled into fall classes in 2017 (Education Policy Data Center | Making Sense of Data to
Improve Education). That means that 11,410,000 students were bullied throughout the school
year. Bullying has been a phenomenon for many years; however, the number of students being
bullied has increased drastically. Bullying has increased over the last three years because
students still have trouble expressing themselves and dealing with stress because of the COVID
pandemic. Educational institutions have tried to prevent bullying, yet they have not found the
correct ways to completely stop bullying in schools. Chowdhury uses this article to bring light to
a topic that was forgotten due to the recent events in the world. Author Chowdhury is a lecturer
at the Southeast University in Bangladesh and has 7 years teaching undergraduate and
postgraduate students while publishing many different articles. The author Chowdhury uses
Institutions” to successfully conclude the horrible problems with bullying and solutions of how it
To begin with, author Chowdhury uses ethos to establish her credibility on the topic of
bullying. Chowdhury cites work from other experts in the field of either education or psychology
to help her argument. For example, Chowdhury mentions from different studies that bullying has
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many factors that trigger students to participate in this act (125-126). This helps her credibility
on the topic by showing the readers that she knows why most bullies start harassing other peers.
These studies help back up the information of the different types of ways she gives to stop
bullying by making the triggers a center point of how the problem can be stopped. Author
Chowdhury also uses her own personal experience on the topic to establish her credibility. For
example, Chowdhury has been teaching undergraduate and postgraduate students at a university
in Bangladesh for seven years. This builds her integrity by showing the experience she has in the
field of education, which means that she has experience stopping bullies before. Also, this
information makes readers feel secure that the information is from someone that has seen
bullying happen firsthand. As has been noted above, author Chowdhury uses ethos to establish
her knowledge on the topic and make readers feel that Chowdhury is a trust source.
Moreover, author Chowdhury strengthens her argument that bullying can be stopped in
schools with the use of logos. Most students say that bullying is something negative, which can
hurt not only the students but the school itself. For example, Chowdhury states, “Around 95% of
the participant students reported that bullying was perceived by them as being a negative issue”
(127). This example uses logos to show readers how most of the 60 participating students believe
that bullying is something that is not supposed to be in school. Also, this makes schools see that
students feel that bullying is destroying schools for them. Although, academic institutions are not
doing enough to cut out the problem. For instance, author Chowdhury mentions how more than
half of the students said that their institutions have tried to do something to prevent bullying, yet
it still is taking place (128). Logos help this sentence get its message across by making readers
see that even though action is taking place in academic institutions, it is not enough to stop
students from being harassed by their peers. However, Chowdhury gives recommendations to the
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institutions on how bullying can be prevented in school, which gives readers more knowledge on
how bullying can be taken down. As a result, author Chowdhury uses logos to make readers see
that even though the institutions are not doing enough about bullying, there are ways to stop it.
In addition to swaying readers with the use of logic, author Chowdhury uses pathos to
make readers see the ways in which bullying affects students mentally, physically, and
emotionally. Bullying can affect students by making them feel less confident in themselves and
also struggle to keep positive relationships with friends and family. To illustrate this, Chowdhury
says how bullying can lead to many negative conditions such as anxiety, depression, lowered
self-esteem, and suicidal thoughts, which can affect the victims for the rest of their lives (126).
The use of these strong words makes readers feel empathetic because readers see that bullying is
one of the most horrible experiences a person can have. These strong words also make readers
feel hatred toward the bullies for causing these devastating problems for the victims. Not only
does Chowdhury make use of strong words, but cases of students losing their lives to bullying. In
particular, Chowdhury mentions how students have had their lives taken by peers due to bullying
reaching an excessive point (123). This statement pulls at the readers’ heartstrings because
nobody wants to see a young life be taken away due to peers’ constant harassment. These deaths
give readers a sense of grief over the fact that they could have been prevented if educational
Hence, Chowdhury gives different strategies on how bullying can be stopped. For
instance, Chowdhury mentions that a change in classroom culture, such as teachers using less
abusive words while talking to students, can help education institutions reduce bullying cases
(129). This uses pathos by giving readers a sense of confidence because it shows that institutions
can do something to stop these horrendous cases from happening again. Also, the example makes
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the reader feel satisfaction that the problem can be solved. As shown above, Chowdhury uses
pathos to show readers that academic institutions need to do more to prevent these devastating
In conclusion, Chowdhury is successful in using ethos, logos, and pathos to argue that
bullying is a horrible experience that many have to suffer through and ways it can be stopped in
Institutions.” She is able to do this by providing the audience with different studies from experts
and personal experience on the topic to establish her credibility. While making readers see the
students’ belief on bullying and the ways it can be stopped through the use of statistics from her
study. Then Chowdhury makes sure to add strong language that evokes the audiences’ emotions
throughout the article to make the audience empathize with the victims. Bullying is a
widespread problem that schools need to remove completely from academic settings. This article
is important because it spreads awareness of the problem that has been affecting students for
years and will continue to affect students for generations to come. Institutions should be able to
make changes on how they can prevent bullying through the use of this article.
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Works cited
bangladeshpost.net/posts/bullying-among-university-students-in-bangladesh-108880.
https://www.epdc.org/.