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Essay 3 Final Draft Revised
Essay 3 Final Draft Revised
Jaden Maldonado
Professor McCann
English 1301.129
15 November 2023
“On average 35% of students are being bullied in academic institutions in Bangladesh”
(“Bullying Among University Students in Bangladesh”). There were 32.6 million students
enrolled into fall classes in 2017 (Education Policy Data Center | Making Sense of Data to
Improve Education). That means that 11.4 million students were victims of bullying throughout
the school year. Bullying has been a phenomenon that has plagued students and schools for
many years; however, the number of students being bullied has increased drastically. Bullying
has increased over the last three years because students still have trouble expressing their
emotions verbally and dealing with the stress from the COVID pandemic. Educational
institutions have tried to prevent bullying, yet they have not found the correct ways to completely
prevent bullying in schools. Chowdhury uses this article to bring more light to a topic that was
placed at the back of most people’s minds due to it not being talked as much about and events
that happened around the world. Author Chowdhury is a lecturer at the Southeast University in
Bangladesh and has 7 years teaching undergraduate and postgraduate students while publishing
many different articles. The author Chowdhury uses ethos to establish credibility, logos to show
the statistics from students, and pathos to make readers feel a certain way in “Bullying of
Students in Academic Institutions” to successfully conclude the horrible problems with bullying
To begin with, author Chowdhury uses ethos to establish her credibility on the topic of
bullying. Chowdhury cites studies from other experts in the field of either education or
psychology to help make her argument stronger. For example, Chowdhury mentions from
different studies that bullying has many factors that trigger students to participate in this act
(125-126). This helps her credibility on the topic by showing the readers that she knows why
most bullies start harassing other peers in the first place. These studies help back up the
information of the different types of ways she demonstrates on how to stop that specific type of
bullying by making the triggers a center point of how the problem can be stopped. Author
Chowdhury also uses her own personal experience on the topic of bullying to establish her
credibility. For example, Chowdhury has been teaching undergraduate and postgraduate students
at a university in Bangladesh for seven years. This builds her integrity by showing the audience
the amount of experience she has in the field of education, which means that she has experience
dealing with bullies and also seeing what being bullied can do to a student overall. Also, this
information makes readers feel secure that the study is from someone that has seen bullying
happen firsthand and has worked with this topic. As has been noted above, author Chowdhury
uses ethos to establish her knowledge on the topic and make readers feel that Chowdhury is a
trust source.
Moreover, author Chowdhury strengthens her argument that bullying can be prevented in
schools with the use of logos. Most students say that bullying is a negative problem in school,
which can hurt not only the students but the school itself. For example, Chowdhury states,
“Around 95% of the participant students reported that bullying was perceived by them as being a
negative issue” (127). This example uses logos to show readers how more than half of the
participating students believe that bullying is something that needs to be stopped because it does
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not belong in school. Also, this makes schools see that students feel that bullying is destroying
schools for them and makes some of the student body not want to show up at all. Although,
academic institutions are not trying hard enough to cut out the problem from the source. For
instance, author Chowdhury mentions how more than half of the participating students said that
their educational institutions have tried to do something to prevent bullying, yet it still is taking
place (128). Logos help this sentence get its message across by making readers see how the
academic institutions are trying to do something, but it is not enough to stop students from being
harassed by their peers. However, Chowdhury gives recommendations to the institutions on how
bullying can be prevented in school, which gives readers more knowledge on how bullying can
be taken down in schools one step at a time. As a result, author Chowdhury uses logos to make
readers see that even if schools are not trying harder enough to stop the problem of bullying,
In addition to swaying readers with the use of logos, author Chowdhury uses pathos to
make readers see the different ways in which bullying can affect students mentally, physically,
and emotionally. Bullying can affect students by making them feel less confident in their work
and themselves while also struggling to maintain healthy relationships with friends and family.
To illustrate this, Chowdhury says how bullying can lead to many horrible conditions such as
anxiety, depression, lowered self-esteem, and suicidal thoughts, which can affect the bullied
victims for the rest of their lives (126). The use of these strong words makes readers feel
empathetic to the victims because readers see that bullying is one of worst experiences a person
can go through while being in school. These strong words also make readers feel hatred toward
the bullies for causing these devastating problems for the victims and their families. Not only
does Chowdhury make use of strong words, but cases of students losing their lives to bullying. In
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particular, Chowdhury mentions how students have had their lives taken by peers due to bullying
reaching an excessive point and nobody doing anything to stop it (123). This statement pulls at
the readers’ heartstrings because nobody wants to see a young life be taken away so early due to
peers’ constant harassment. These deaths give readers a sense of grief over the fact that they
could have been prevented if educational institutions had tried harder to find solutions that will
Hence, Chowdhury gives different strategies on how bullying can be stopped. For
instance, Chowdhury mentions that a change in the way the classroom customs are being done,
such as teachers using less abusive words while talking to students, can help education
institutions reduce bullying cases (129). This uses pathos by giving readers a sense of confidence
because it shows that institutions can do something to stop these horrendous cases from
happening to young students again. Also, the example makes the reader feel satisfaction that the
problem can be solved with enough effort from the academic institutions. As shown above,
Chowdhury uses pathos to show readers that academic institutions need to do more to prevent
In conclusion, Chowdhury is successful in using ethos, logos, and pathos to argue that
bullying is a horrible experience that many have to suffer through and ways it can be stopped in
Institutions.” She is able to do this by providing the audience with different sources from experts
and personal experience on the topic to establish her credibility. While making readers see the
students’ belief on bullying and the many ways it can be stopped through the use of statistics
from her study. Then Chowdhury makes sure to add strong language that evokes the audiences’
emotions throughout the article to make the audience empathize with the victims and show the
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horrible experiences they have to go through. Bullying is a widespread problem that schools
need to try harder to remove completely from academic settings. This article is important
because it spreads awareness of a problem that has been affecting students, staff, the school, and
parents for years. This problem will continue to affect students for generations to come if the
correct solutions are not implemented in the schools. Institutions should be able to make changes
on how they can prevent bullying completely through the use of this article.
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Works cited
bangladeshpost.net/posts/bullying-among-university-students-in-bangladesh-108880.
https://www.epdc.org/.