Name:Marcos Benavides Date: 11/10/23

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
1. One thing that I will change is to cut down on the repetitiveness because I think some of my sentences are
repetitive.

2.Another thing that I will change is to add citations to the quotations because that is an important part of the essay.

3.The last thing that I will do is to organize my points together in the body paragraphs as some of them are
misordered.

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. One thing that I won’t change despite my peers responses is to get rid of entire sentences because they are
contradictory because I think it’s the wordings that is wrong and not the sentencer itself.

2.One thing that I wont change is a minor grammar error that says to add a semi colon after a however and I think its
not necessary to change the comma to a semi colon

3.The last thing I will not change as well is to change the sentences to sound more professional as I think the way my
sentences are worded add more personality to the essay

What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. I need to fix all of the errors my peer pointed out.

2.I need to split up some of the long paragraphs.

3. I need to go to ace to fix any minor errors

4.I need to cite the quotes.

5.I need to make the works cited page.

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