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Critical Analysis of Countinour Writing
Critical Analysis of Countinour Writing
According to Foyewa (2013) Critical analysis continuous writing contains information about
everything discussed in the essay. The whole content of the essay is discussed under the writing.
Points are expected to be logically arranged and discussed according to their importance. There is
no definite length or number of paragraphs that the body of an essay must contain. It depends on the
number of words the writers is asked to write.
English Language is Nigerians official language and a medium for communication and instruction in
our secondary schools. Student's inability to write effectively affects other subjects as they cannot express
themselves clearly in other subjects as well. It should be noted that English as language, which student must
understand in order to further in their educational pursuit, a pass at a credit level is demanded for most
courses. Therefore, students must have some means of developing the power of self- expression and creative
writhing to entrance good performance and in all subjects. An English Language teacher needs to be
encouraged on teaching continuous writing by giving the student a chance to put it down on paper. Banjo
(2017)
More so, lack of interest and skill on the part of the teachers to teach continuous writing effectively
affects the student. Poor performance of students in our schools today cannot be over emphasized. This ugly
situation has been blamed on teachers and students for lack of dedication on the part of the teachers and the
lack of seriousness from the students especially in the aspect of continuous writing. There is lack of
consistence in the use of English language textbook, for teaching continuous writing in our secondary
schools today. The ministry of education at different times changes textbooks at the expense of their
student's need for continuous writing.
Due to the corrupt nature of the ministry of education who collects money from "hungry authors" and
recommends their book for use in secondary schools, gives poor strategies for the teaching of continuous
writing skill in our secondary schools. Bangtu, (2014) and that these changes in English language textbooks
over the years produced poor results, and fallen standard of education.
It's at this background that a technique in the use of intensive English language book one,' two and three in
the teaching of continuous writing for junior secondary school is necessary. It our desire that this research
would go a long way in improving the teaching of continuous writing in our junior secondary schools?
Teachers of English language on reading this work should develop interest in English language textbooks
choice with consideration for provision of continuous writing in the book.
1.2 STATEMENT OF PROBLEM
Continuous writing is a type of writing that differs from directed writing. It requires the writer to write an
essay based on his or her experiences and most student don’t have the knowledge about it and this has been
a problem. In most cases, writers are expected to write just one out of about five options. It has been a
common complaint often heard that students are incapable of expressing themselves in a clear, correct and
comprehensible manner in writing. Students’ problems in writing may occur because of many factors like.
Mixed tenses e.g present and past, Poor topic identification, Awkward sentence construction, Poor spelling,
Inappropriate words and expressions, and Lack of adequate ideas to write on Poor Linguistic Background,
Unfamiliarity with the Topic, Lack of Knowledge of Different Types of continuous Writing, First Language
Interference, Bad Reading Culture, Poor Teaching Method, Lack of Proper Writing Skills , Lack of Interest,
Lack of Motivation to Write Encouraging , Inadequate Provision for Writing. Based on the stated problems
above the researchers drive the below research question to guide the study.
1.3 RESEARCH QUESTION
1. What is continuous writing
2. What are the Stages in continuous writing
3. What are the problems encounter in continuous writing
4. What are the types of continuous writing provided in the textbooks'?
5. What is the order of presentation of continuous writing?
2. Descriptive writing
3. Expository writing
4. Argumentative writing
6. Letter writing
2 NARRATIVE WRITING
.
Encort (2003) narrative writing is a story or an account of a sequence of events in the order in which they
happen which is retold to someone, it may be factual or imaginary. Babuje (1998) narrative writing is
relating a series of event or telling stories that are factual or imaginary. Every narrative involves people,
action, place and time.
Writing a good narrative writing involves the following following the order of event
- If the action took place over a period of time, it can be divided into
smaller time unit.
- For past events, past tense should be used.
- You may conclude by starting your expression based on what you have discussed.
In addition to a good note the story should have a beginning, a climax and a conclusion. The writer must
choose appropriate word and expression to create an appropriate atmosphere to the story. You remember the
From the above table all students which represent 100 are being taught writing is their respective
schools. Therefore, continuouss writing is taught in all schools.
2. Which textbook are you using?
S/No Textbook Frequency Percentage ()
1. Intensive English 35 87.5
2. English project 1 2.5
3. Comprehensive Eng. 4 10
Total 40 100
From the above table 35 respondents representing 87.5 use "Intensive English" which one respondent
representing 2.5 us 'English project" and 4 respondent representing 10 use Comprehensive English.
Therefore, "Intensive English" is the most popular English textbook used in our secondary schools.
3. Do you have teacher of continuous writing?
30 respondents which represent 75 agreed that teaching and learning of continuous writing is simple, 7
respondents which represents 17.5 are in doubt about it, 3 respondents representing 7.5 disagreed that
teaching and learning continuous writing is not simple.
Therefore, 73, which is greater funds teaching and learning continuous writing is not simple. This
means that teaching and learning of continuous writing is simple.
6. Are there adequate provisions of each topics in your English textbooks?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Yes 20 5O
2. No 13 32.5
3. Doubtful 7 17.5
Total 40 100
From the above table 20 respondents which represents 50 agreed that their English textbook provide
adequate topic on continuous writing. 13 respondents representing 32.5 disagreed that their English textbook
did not provide adequate topic on continuous writing. 7 respondents representing 17.5 are in doubt of it.
Therefore, English textbooks need improvement.
7. Are the topic on continuous writing in line with the national curriculum of education?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Strongly agreed 9 22.5
2. agreed 13 32.5
3. Doubtful 13 32.5
4. Disagreed 3 7.5
5. Strongly disagreed 2 5
Total 40 100
From the above table 22 respondents, representing 55 agreed that continuous writing topics are 111 line with
the national curriculum of education. 13 respondent representing 32.5 are in doubt of whether or not the
topics on continuous writing are in line with the national curriculum of education. While 5 respondents
representing 12.5 disagreed that the topics are not in line with national curriculum of education.
Therefore, based on the 55 agreed, shows that continuous writing topics are in line with the national
curriculum of education.
8. Will the topics on teaching continuous writing prepare students for final? Examinations?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
1. Strongly agreed 9 22.5
2. agreed 20 50
3. Doubtful 10 25
4. Disagreed - -
5. Strongly disagreed 1 2.5
Total 40 100
29 respondents, representing 72.5 agreed that the topics on teaching continuous writing will prepare students
for final exams. 10 respondents, representing 25 are in doubt about it. And one respondent, representing
2.5% disagreed.
Therefore, topics on teaching continuous writing will prepare students for final examinations.
9. Is the order of presentation of continuous writing adequate for students?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Strongly agreed 16 40
2. agreed 13 32.5
3. Doubtful 8 20
4. Disagreed 1 2.5
5. Strongly disagreed 2 5
Total 40 100
From the above table, 29 respondents, representing 72.5 disagreed that the order presentation of continuous
writing is adequate. 8 respondents representing 20 are in doubt of it. While 3 respondents, representing
7.5 disagreed. Therefore, the order of presentation of continuous writing is adequate for students.
10Do the teachers of continuous writing have adequate materials for teaching?
19respondent, representing 47.5% agreed that teachers of continuous writing have adequate teaching
materials for teaching 14 respondent, representing 35 disagreed while 7 respondents representing 17.51lo are
in doubt. Therefore, teachers of continuous writing have adequate teaching materials for teaching.
l 1. Do you think that Government contributes to the poor teaching of continuous writing?
24 respondents representing 60 agreed that government contributes to the poor teaching of continuous
writing. 5 respondents representing 37.5 are in doubt and one respondent representing 2.5 disagreed.
Therefore, Government contributes to the poor teaching of continuous writing.
12. How are continuous writing topics taught ill your school e.g. letter, Narrative, descriptive,
argumentative, short-story and expository writing are they adequately taught in your school?
From the above table, 29 respondents, representing 72.5 agreed that continuous writing are taught in their
respective schools. 8 respondents representing 20· are in doubt about it. 3 respondents which represents
7.5 disagreed. Hence, continuous writing topics letter, narrative, descriptive, short-story, argumentative and
expository writing are adequately taught in our schools.
13. Does "Intensive English" textbook prepare students for final examination?
75 of the respondents agreed that "Intensive English" textbook will prepare student for their final
examination 12 are in doubt and 7.5 disagreed. Therefore, "Intensive English" will prepare student for final
exams.
14. Do you like the method your English teachers use to teach you continuous writing?
From the table above 30 respondents which represents 75 like the methods their teachers use to teach them
continuous writing. 7 respondent representing 17.5 do not like the methods their teachers use to teach them.
While 3 respondents representing 7.5 are in doubt. Therefore, based on the above table student like the
method their teachers used to teach them.
4.3 TEACHERS RESPONSES
1. Do you teach continuous writing?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Yes 10 100
2. No
3. Doubtful
Total 10 100
From the above table, 10 respondents, representing 100 do teach continuous writing in their various schools.
Therefore, all teachers of English language teach continuous writing.
2. Which textbook(s) are you using?
S/No Textbook Frequency Percentage %
l. Intensive English 10 100
2. English project
3. Comprehensive Eng.
Total 10 100
From the table above 10 respondents representing 100 use "Intensive
English" textbooks.
Therefore all schools use "Intensive English" textbooks.
3. Do you have enough teachers of continuous writing? +
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
1. Yes 8 80
2. No 2 20
3. Doubtful - -
Total 10 100
8 respondents representing 80 have enough teachers of continuous Writing while 2 did not have enough
teachers of continuous writing in their school. Therefore, most schools have enough teachers of continuous
writing.
4. Do your textbook provide adequate topic on continuous writing?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Yes 7 70
2. No 2 20
3. Doubtful 1 10
Total 10 100
From the above table, 7 respondents which represent 70 agreed that their textbooks provide adequate topic
on continuous writing. While 3 respondents, representing 20 disagreed that their textbooks do not provide
adequate topic in continuous writing and one respondent is in doubt of it. Hence, most textbooks provide
adequate teaching on continuous writing
5. Do you find teaching continuous writing simple?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage
1. Strongly agreed 3 %
30
2. agreed 3 30
3. Doubtful 4 40
4. Disagreed - -
5. Strongly disagreed - -
Total 10 100
6 respondents, representing 60o/c, agreed that find teaching continuous writing simple. 4 respondents
representing 40 are in doubt. Therefore, teaching continuous writing is simple.
6. Are there adequate provision of each topics in your English textbook?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Yes 6 60
2. No 4 40
3. Doubtful - -
Total 10 100
From the above table, 6 of the respondent representing 60 agreed that their English textbook provide
adequate topics of continuous writing. While 4 respondents representing 40 disagreed that their English
Textbooks do not provide adequate topics on continuous writing. Therefore, English textbook provide
adequate topic on continuous writing.
7. Are the topics on continuous writing in line with the national curriculum of education?
8 respondent representing 80 agreed that the topics on continuous writing are in line with the national
curriculum of education while 2 respondents representing 20% are in doubt.
Hence, the topics of continuous are in line with the national curriculum of education.
8. Do the topics and teaching of continuous writing prepare students for final examination?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Strongly agreed 2
2. agreed 8
3. Doubtful - -
4. Disagreed - -
5. Strongly disagreed - -
Total 10 100
10 respondents representing 100 agreed that topics and teaching of continuous writing prepare students for
final examination.
Therefore, topics and teaching of continuous writing prepare students for final examination.
9. Is the order of presentation q/ continuo us writing adequate for our student?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Strongly agreed - -
2. agreed 9 90
3. Doubtful 1 10
4. Disagreed - -
S. Strongly disagreed - -
Total 10 100
-- that the order of presentation of continuous
From the above table 9 respondents representing 90 agreed
writing is adequate for our students while one respondent, representing 10 is in doubt. Hence, the order of
presentation of continuous writing is adequate for our students.
10. Do the teachers of continuous writing have adequate materials for teaching?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Yes 4 40
2. No 5 50
3. Doubtful 1 10
Total 10 100
5 respondent representing 50 said that teacher s do not have adequate materials for teaching continuous
writing. 4 respondent representing 40 agreed that teachers have adequate materials for teaching continuous
writing while one respondent representing 10 is in doubt.
Hence, teachers do not have adequate materials for the teaching of continuous writing.
1 l.Do you think that government contribute to the poor teaching of continuous writing
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Strongly agreed 6 60
2. agreed 1 10
3. Doubtful - -
4. Disagreed - -
5. Strongly disagreed 3 30
Total 10 100
From the above table, 7 respondents representing 70 agreed that government contribute to the poor teaching
of continuous writing. While 3 respondent representing 30 disagreed that government do not contribute
To the poor teaching of continuous writing. Hence, Government contributes to the poor teaching of
continuous writing.
12.Are most of the continuous writing topics taught in your schools e.g. letter, narrative, descriptive, short-
story, argumentative and expository writing?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
1. Strongly agreed - -
2. agreed 10 100
3. Doubtful - -
4. Disagreed - -
5. Strongly disagreed - -
-- Total 10 100
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From the above table 10 respondents, representing 100 agreed that most of continuous writing topics are
taught in their school. Therefore, most of the continuous writing are taught in our schools.
13. Do "Intensive English" textbooks prepare students for final examination?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Strongly agreed 5 50
2. agreed 5 50
3. Doubtful - -
4. Disagreed - -
5. Strongly disagreed - -
Total 10 100
10 respondents representing 100 agreed that "Intensive English" textbooks prepare students for final exams.
Therefore, "Intensive English" textbooks topics prepare student for final examination.
14. Do you like teaching continuous writing?
S/No Response Frequency Percentage %
l. Strongly agreed 8 80
2. agreed 2 20
3. Doubtful - -
4. -Disagreed - -
5. vStrongly disagreed - -
Total 10 -100
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From the above table 10 respondents representing 100 agreed that they like teaching continuous writing.
Hence, Teachers like teaching continuous writing.
15. Do your students like continuous writing?
From the above table 5 respondent representing 50 agreed that their students like continuous writing while 5
respondent representing 50 disagreed that their students do not like continuous writing. Hence, half of the
students like continuous writing while half do not like continuous writing.
4.4 CONCLUSION
Both students and teachers responded to the questionnaire as expected.
CHAPTER FIVE
5.0 SUMMARY
English language is a core subject to others subjects and continuous writing is a core in English
language. Which students must understand and pass. A credit for one to further his or her education
From the research finding it was discovered that must schools use "intensive English" textbooks and
continuous writing is taught in our secondary schools and also all schools have teachers of English language.
The must common use English textbooks provide adequate learning and teaching of continuous
writing, students and teachers find learning as well as texting of continuous writing simple. Also English
textbook provide adequate topics on continuous writing as well as the topics are in line with national
curriculum of education. And the topic and teaching of continuous writing will prepare student for their final
examination.
On the order hand student do not like learning and teaching of continuous writing and teachers do not have
adequate material for the teaching of continuous writing.
The government on their part of contributes for the poor teaching and learning of continuous writing
in our secondary school
5.1 CONCLUTION.
From the analysis of the research is a step forward in the improvement of teaching and learning of
continuous writing in our secondary schools. The authors of English textbook (Intensive English) provide
adequate approaches to each topic for learning and teaching of continuous writing
The qualitative approach of learning and teaching of continuous writing employed are in line with
the national curriculum of education.
5.2 RECOMMENDA TION/SUGGESTION
From the critical analysis of continuous writing the following recommendations/suggestions are
made by the researchers:
1. The teacher of English language should complement the effort of the authors of English textbooks to
improve in their teaching
2. We strongly recommended and encourage the use of" intensive English" textbooks for our secondary
schools, for the authors provided adequate topic for teaching and learning of continuous writing
3. Government should make policies that will make teaching and learning of continuous writing
successful in our secondary school
4. Government should encourage the teachers of continuous writing by paying their salaries on as when
clue.
5. Proprietors and government should materials available for the teaching and learning of continuous
writing our secondary schools.
6. Both teachers and students should use the opportunity provided in the
English textbooks to improve in their teaching and learning.
5.3 BIBLIOGROPHY/REFERENCE
Adinoy, ojo (2003) "The sun news Pepper P.22 1 ST September 2003. Allen, H.B (1965) Teaching English
as a Secondary Language. Babuje D, et' al (1998) Language and Communication Gindiri
Ecanta (2000), A website in the Computer Egudu, R.N (1986) Guide for Continuous Writing: Enugu Haris
Priting and
Publishing Company LTD.
"Federal Ministry of Education National Curriculum Language for
Secondary School" Volume 2. (1999)
Gorman, p. (1973) Methods of Teaching to Students: Advance Level Paper
Presentation on teaching English as Second Language.
Krik Patrick E.M (2ED 1983) Chambers 20th Century Dictionary: W &R
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Opara E.S (2000) Teaching English Language
5.4 APPENDIX 1
1. Are you being taught continuous writing or essay writing? r 1 Yes r 1
No [ ] Doubtful
2. Which textbook are you using?
3. Do you have teacher of continuous writing? [ ] Yes [ ] No
[ ] Doubtful
4. Do your textbooks provide adequate teaching on continuous writing?
[ ] Yes [ ] No [ ] Doubtful
5. Do you find teaching and learning of continuous writing simple? [ ]
Strongly agreed. [ ]Agreed [ ]doubtful [ ]disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
6. Are there adequate provisions of each topic in your English textbooks?
[ ] Strongly agreed [ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ] disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
7. Are the topics on continuous writing in line with the national curriculum of education? [ ] Strongly
agreed [ ] Agreed [ ] Doubtful
[ ] disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
8. Will the topics on teaching continuous writing prepare students for final examinations? [ ] Strongly
agreed [ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful
( ) disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
9. Is the order of presentation of continuous writing adequate for students?
[ ] Strongly agreed [ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ] disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
10. Do the teachers of continuous writing have adequate materials for teaching? [ J Strongly agreed [ Agreed
[ [doubtful [ disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
11. Do you think that Government contributes to the poor teaching of continuous writing? [ ] Strongly
agreed [ [Agreed [ ]doubtful [ ] disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
12. How are continuous writing topics taught in your school e.g. letter, Narrative, descriptive,
argumentative, short-story and expository writing are they adequately taught in your school? [ ] Strongly
agreed [ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ] disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
13. Does "Intensive English" textbook prepare students for final Examination? [ ] Strongly agreed
Disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
14. Do you like the method your English teachers use to teach you Agreed doubtful continuous writing? [ ]
Yes [ ] No [ ] Doubtful
] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ]
2.37 APPENDIX 2
1. Do you teach continuous writing? [ ] Yes r ] No [ ] Doubtful
2. Which textbook(s) are you using?
3. Do you have enough teachers of continuous writing? [ ] Yes [ ] No [ ] Doubtful
4. Do your textbook provide adequate topic on continuous writing? [ ] Yes [ ] No [ ] Doubtful
5. Do you find teaching continuous writing simple? [ ] Strongly agreed [ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ] disagreed
[ ] strongly disagreed
6. Are there adequate provisions of each topic in your English textbook? [ ] Yes [ ] No [ ] Doubtful
7. Are the topics on continuous writing in line with the national curriculum of education? [ ] Strongly
agreed disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
8. Do the topics and teaching of continuous writing prepare students for final examination? [ ] Strongly
agreed [ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ]
disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
9. Is the order of presentation of continuous writing adequate for our
Students'? [ ] Strongly agreed [ ] strongly disagreed
I Agreed [ ] doubtful [disagreed)
10. Do the teachers of continuous writing have adequate materials for teaching? [ ] Yes [ ] No [ ] Doubtful
11. Do you think that government contributes to the poor teaching of continuous writing? [ ] Strongly agreed
[ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ] disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
12. Are most of the continuous writing topics taught in your schools e.g. letter, narrative, descriptive, short-
story, argumentative and expository writing? [ ] Strongly agreed [ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ] disagreed [ ]
strongly disagreed
13. Do "Intensive English" textbooks prepare students for final examination? [ ] Strongly agreed [ ]
Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ] disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed
14. Do you like teaching continuous writing? [ ] Strongly agreed [ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ] disagreed [ ]
strongly disagreed
15. Do your students like continuous writing? [ ] Strongly agreed
[ ] Agreed [ ] doubtful [ ] disagreed [ ] strongly disagreed