1rst Writing Carlos Intermediate 3 V

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One of the biggest problems that a country has is crime and we need effective

ways to combat it.For me there are 2 crucial aspects to fight against crime,
increasing job opportunities and giving criminals longer sentences.

If we offer jobs to those people who did not have the same opportunities as us,
we would keep them away from crime and make them valuable members of
society.
Many of the people who commit crimes do so to get money, because they do not
have a job or if they do have a job, they are not paid enough to support their
family. This is how they have to enter the world of crime.

If, despite offering them jobs, crime continues to mostly persist, lengthening
prison sentences would be a good idea. Imposing more serious sentences for
those who break the law would make them think more than once if.
Lengthening prison sentences would also be good for a criminal's reintegration
into a working society. We should also improve the judicial system to prevent the
wrong sentence from being handed down to those hard-working people who earn
their own money honestly instead of those criminals who do so much damage to
our society.

In conclusion, financing in prevention by increasing people's jobs and extending


the sentences of criminals would make the world a place with many fewer crimes
and many more opportunities.

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