Course: News, Feature, and Editorial Writing

Name: Rizma Fitriatuzzahroh

Nim: 208203068

Class: 7A2

Link blog: https://mengcyapeksss.blogspot.com/

Date: Friday, Nop. 10, 2023

1.
NEWS ANALYSIS

Headline : "A Group of Children Who Troubled Residents of Binong

Permai Housing RW 15"

Byline : Andi Safadila, Muhammad Nurzulham, Rizma

Fitriatuzzahroh

Date : Saturday, October 21, 2023

Lead : - A group of children disturbed residents in Binong

Permai rw 15 housing in front of the Evi’s midwife clinic on Saturday,
October 21, 2023. The incident occurred around 02.00-03.00 AM. to make
residents restless.
1. what happened in the news?
A group of children who disturbed residents

2. where did it happen?

In Binong Permai rw 15 housing in evi’s clinic

3. When did that group of children disturb the residents?

On Saturday, October 21, 2023. The incident occurred around 02.00-
03.00 AM

4. Who are the children targeting?

Mrs. Evi’s

5. Why are they disturbing citizens at night?

 It is not yet known about the purpose of these children disturbing
residents

6. How do they harass residents?

By ringing house bells and loitering at night.

Language Feature:

1. Formal Language : In this article, formal language is evident, as it

reports the incident in a straightforward manner without the use of
colloquial or informal expressions. Example : "I feel uncomfortable
because the children are out late at night and disturbing the neighbors”

2. Past perfect tense : The incident had occurred in his area..." - The past
perfect ("happened") is used to show an action that happened before
another action in the past.

3. Present simple tense : "At the moment, residents are still looking for
the perpetrators, and have yet to find out where the children came from
and what their motive was for disturbing residents in the middle of the
night." - The present simple tense ("are," "do," and "is") is used to
describe ongoing actions, common truths, or usual actions. Here, it
describes the current actions and circumstances of the residents.

4. Specific Details: The article contains specific details such as the

location (Binong Permai RW 15 housing, in front of Evi's midwife
clinic), the date and time of the incident (Saturday, 21 October 2023,
around 02.00-03.00 WIB), and the concerns of the residents. Specific
details will increase the credibility of news reports.

5. Direct Quote: This article includes a direct quote from a resident,

Gusti Firmansyah, who gave a personal account of the incident. Direct
quotes from eyewitnesses or parties involved give authenticity to news
reports.

Link Blog: https://mengcyapeksss.blogspot.com/2023/11/news-gathering-

and-news-writing.html
2.
News Gathering
Observation:
After a long summer, it started to rain in Babakan, Tangerang City.on
Friday, 3 November 2023. Many local residents were happy and grateful
because the rain brought a calm atmosphere and cool air. Apart from
Babakan, in areas that are still in the city of Tangerang, it also rained. rain.
Before the rain fell, the temperature was almost 37℃ every day.

Interview:
Name:
1. Are you happy to see that it's already raining in early November?

Yes, of course, I am very happy

2. Where did the rain fall? Is it raining evenly in the Tangerang area?

I was in Babakan, Tangerang. I thought it was raining evenly in

Tangerang.

3. When did it first rain in Tangerang?

On Friday, 3 November 2023, in the afternoon at 5:41 p.m.

4. Why do you feel happy when it rains?

Because with the rain, the atmosphere inside and outside the room
becomes cooler. besides, it was summer before so the temperature is
usually up to 37℃.

5. How do you enjoy the rain after a long summer?

Maybe I enjoy it by going to bed early because when it rains, it's

perfect for sleeping.

Link Blog: https://mengcyapeksss.blogspot.com/2023/11/news-

gathering-uts.html
3.
News Writing
Friday, November 3, 2023

The rain that fell in the babakan area of Tangerang in the afternoon gave
a cool feeling to the air. (Rizma’s picture)

On Friday afternoon, 3 November 2023, at 5.41 pm. it started to rain in

Babakan, Tangerang after a long summer. Residents were very happy with
the rain. According to one of the residents of Babakan, Tangerang,
"Shinta" before the rain fell, the previous days were very hot and the
temperature was very high, which was around 37℃. even indoors was
also very hot.

“Because with the rain, the atmosphere inside and outside the room
becomes cooler. besides, it was summer before so the temperature is
usually up to 37℃.” Shinta said.

In addition, Shinta also said that it was raining evenly in the Tangerang
area. He also explained that when it rains, most people will stay at home
and choose to sleep.

“Maybe I enjoy it by going to bed early because when it rains, it's perfect
for sleeping.” Shinta said.

Link blog : https://mengcyapeksss.blogspot.com/2023/11/news-writing-

uts.html