感受到你對兒童嘉年華會的期待，但段落

要分別得更清楚一些。因為是寫嘉年華當

天會發生的事情，最好按照事情發生的順

序來寫，讓人更容易看懂。

_____ is a big day. My school will hold Children Carnival. There is a flea market.

Everyone sells used things in the flea market.

I have sold piggy banks, cups, stickers, and notebooks ____.

This year, I prepared something to sell, too. I still need to bring some money to

change the flea market bill from last week.

on that day, I will go to school by my father's motorcycle.

談談賣東西的分工或趣事

My friends and I will sell things to get money. we will go shopping, too. We will

use the money to buy food. Then, we will clean our booth and have lunch

together. Before I go home, I will play with my friends.

I expect for going shopping on that day. This is my favorite day of school.
March 18th is a special day. Our school has a flea market. My classmates and I

made some paper weapons to sell.

I will go to school on foot on that day. My friend will sell things with me. Our

booth is outside the classroom at the hallway. There are many things can sell.

We have eggs and chocolate pocky. At about 11:00, we have to clean the booth.

My classmates will clean the booth and I will count the money and put the left

weapons away in the bag. We will have lunch together then go home.

I expect for ....

段落結構清楚，讓人清楚知道你為了這一天做了甚麼準備，但可以多說說

自己對這個活動的期待，讀者會更了解你想表達的內容。