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wp2 Submission Review Draft Reflection - Vibhas
wp2 Submission Review Draft Reflection - Vibhas
wp2 Submission Review Draft Reflection - Vibhas
Vibhas Simha
Kaaronica Evans
Writing 2
21/11/23
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education requirements that I had with someone from a party I attended to a blog post for my
family. General education requirements have always been an interesting part of my college
experience. They have so many cool facets that give me the opportunity to take classes in
subjects that have no relation to my major, but at the same time they can make me feel
overwhelmed by requirements for classes that I do not want to take. A good example of this is
the Area C requirements. I do not look forward to taking a course in a science, technology, or
mathematics field due to my interests in the social sciences and humanities. I found that
translating this conversation into a blog post was quite difficult as I have never created one
before.
The audience I wanted to reach with this was my family, but honestly anyone. The reason
why this was translated into a blog post was because it would appeal to a wide range of people
who didn’t have knowledge of what general education requirements are. Although the range of
people the blog could reach is wide, the reason why I specified my family was because my
parents went to college in India where the college curriculum was completely different from here
at UCSB. Taking the curriculum of general education requirements and picking certain aspects of
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it to talk about in my hypothetical discussion was intended to make it more realistic even though
The reason why I chose a blog post was because I thought it would be an interesting way
to depict this conversation. I have seen so many blogs and posts that people had written about
their own conversations and experiences at parties that it seemed fun. I honestly didn’t think it
would be this difficult to translate as I had never had a real discussion. I think that since I had to
make up the conversation, it made the blog post harder because I wasn’t telling real aspects
which would have helped me make the blog flow naturally. This challenge kept popping up for
The challenges that I faced were quite large for me. I was quite confused by the project
builder instructions so when this assignment came around, I was slightly prepared, but not fully
prepared as I foolishly didn’t email the instructor asking for clarification about the instructions
for the translations. The instructions on paper were well worded, but I still struggled with fully
grasping the concept. I also found the topic of discussion quite difficult to translate to a blog post
as general education requirements are a really unique and large topic of conversation. I feel like
if I had more time to fully grasp the concept of the instructions, I would’ve been able to pick a
much more defined topic of discussion like a sport or concept in politics. The last challenge that I
faced was that I wasn’t able to adequately ask for feedback from the instructor which was partly
A concern that I kept in mind was that general education requirements were an extremely
vague topic in terms of unsimplified material due to the fact that it would be very confusing to
someone who didn’t understand the actual parts that are required of university students. There
are so many areas that are covered that I wasn’t able to do it justice within my blog post. I also
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don’t think I was able to keep the reader engaged with the general topic of discussion as I only
focused on a few areas. I really hope I can do better with this assignment with my final
submission and final portfolio after receiving instructor feedback. I know there are so many
aspects that I can improve, I just need guidance and really appreciate my peers for reviewing my
Works Cited
Zai, Robert. “Reframing General Education.” The Journal of General Education, vol. 64, no. 3,
2023.
Philosophy (2022).