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Kyle Malashewski
IB English
September 28
Pastiche Paper
The stereotype that Native Hawaiians are lazy, uneducated, primitive, poor, overweight,
and territorial bullies is ironic in its laziness to explain the initial impression Native Hawaiians
may give off. Largely missing from this narrative is the historical and generational trauma
Hawaiians have suffered for centuries. These stereotypes lack understanding and empathy for
this group’s complex issues and tumultuous history. The article; Stereotypes and Sentencing of
Native Hawaiians says “it started with the aggressive exploitation, colonization and annexation
of Native Hawaiians and their kingdom.” (Scanlan 4) As depicted in The Truth About Stories, the
oppression of Native Americans resulting in their failure to thrive is a shared experience with the
These stereotypes date back to the arrival of the missionaries in Hawai’i. Their arrival
marked the end of Hawaiian chant and dance and Hawaiian language. “The painting of…Native
Hawaiians as criminal and primitive has been used to maintain the social hierarchy.” (Scanlan 5)
“Not long after, Protestant missionaries arrived and coercively began converting Hawaiians to
“save” them from dying of the disease that had been introduced by the missionaries themselves
(Osorio 2002). Pressure to assimilate to western lifestyles grew stronger, and the use of
indigenous language and many cultural practices were forbidden by law. This history may have
(Scanlan 7).
traversing vast oceans using the stars, weather patterns, ocean currents and wildlife as their
navigational tools. They used handmade wooden canoes rather than motorized boats or ships.
They didn’t have access to technology like a compass or map. The journey by canoe lasted
months; which meant great thought, care and preparation was needed to account for variables
like food, water supply and weather. Ancient Hawaiians were conducting longitudinal studies
before the dawn of scientific research or the internet; which means they observed, studied and
developed efficient systems to sustain life pre-modern society and western contact. Upon
discovering land, these systems became cultural traditions and values that kept Hawaiian society
alive for generations. As tribal and communal people, they created advanced methods of survival
such as the building of fish ponds, the cultivation of taro, fishing, farming and gathering
practices, observing the phases of the moon to record month and track time, a system of
governance and spirituality. They developed an advanced form of art as chanters, dancers and
storytellers.
teaches adult basic education for students seeking their general education diploma (GED). Sadly,
a good number of my mom’s students are Hawaiian. At first glance, it would appear the
stereotype is true. However, my mom always reminds us how lucky we are because these
students share many of the same barriers like substance abuse and domestic violence in the
home, divorce, single parent families, incarcerated parents or orphaned children, lack of
resources, support, access to education, career opportunities and so on. She says it’s a cycle of
poverty stemming from many sources, with one of the root causes being displacement. So I
firmly believe it is grossly irresponsible to reduce the Hawaiian people by labeling them as lazy,
stupid or at-risk. Labeling people puts them in a box, and creates a ceiling that denies growth and
evolution. It’s mean-spirited and designed to cause harm rather than help identify or categorize.
My mom says she always asks her students “what kind of Hawaiian do you want to be? And she
always answers her question by saying ‘You are not at-risk, you are at-promise. The promise of a
In contrast to the high level thinking of the Hawaiians, the recent Maui wildfires
directly reflect colonial era greed and the sinister desecration of sacred Hawaiian traditions,
ideology and well-designed systems of living. Much like their Native American counterparts,
Hawaiians observed a special relationship between themselves and nature. Hawaiians placed
Why would the Ali’i choose Lāhaina as the original seat of power in Hawai’i? What
determined wealth for the Hawaiian people? It wasn’t the almighty dollar or for-profit
agribusinesses started by the first colonizers. Wealth meant water (wai), land (‘āina), and natural
resources, and preserving these meant longevity and the survival of future generations. Before
the sugar cane and pineapple fields, before the whaling industry and commercial business took
hold in Lāhaina, the area was a verdant, fertile wetland rich in life sustaining resources. All the
water flowed from the mountains and collected at the coastal basin. The original place name was
Moku Ahina and it was abundant in taro fields, freshwater and wildlife. The body of water was
so large that it was navigable by canoe, and one could only reach the other side by paddling over.
At the center of the lake was an island formation called Moku’ula and was the original home of
Chief Pi’ilani, original ruler of Maui. Following Pi’ilani, King Kamehameha III claimed
The sugar plantation era marked the beginning of water diversion and mismanagement,
resulting in the dry and dusty place Lāhaina is today. A horrible truth to come from the wildfire
story is that there wasn’t even close to enough water in the area to douse or even push back the
flames. The gross negligence dates back over one hundred years and underscores how systems of
oppression did more to retard the growth and abilities of the Hawaiian people than any other
factor.
In conclusion, Hawaiians of old were an incredibly evolved and enlightened race. They
were analytical. They were philosophers. Their hands-on experience gave them a thorough
cultural context. They knew how to manage small communities in expansive regions such as the
Ahupua’a land division system, and everything in between. They established a kapu system, an
early version of law and order, and the Pu’uhonua (city of refuge). They designated trades and
had leadership systems proving their ability to organize and think critically.
People should refrain from generalizing an entire group because it’s short-sighted.
Stereotypes keep us closed off from understanding the individual. Stereotypes mainly take
people at face value, believing them to be only one-dimensional and doesn’t account for their
many layers, dimensions, and individuality. It is important to keep an open mind and give each
person the opportunity to present themself free from preconceived notions. How else can we
hope to have a more tolerant and peaceful society? It starts with our choice to be kind and show
https://www.mccubbinresilience.org/kauai-longitudinal-study.html
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Rhetorical Analysis:
For my pastiche paper, the idea I chose to challenge was the stereotype that native
Hawaiians are labeled as freeloaders. That they are less intelligent and even frowned upon
because they aren’t given or they squander opportunities. Many Hawaiians grow up in the wrong
environment which leads them to lash out. My argument is that this could happen to any
demographic, that it isn’t fair to judge all Hawaiians because of a few rotten apples. Every
community has its share of bad people, the Hawaiian population is so small that it is easy to
assume that we are all bad. More than half of all native Hawaiians on the planet do not live in
Hawai’i. Many years ago however, the Hawaiian people were a very proud race who were very
intelligent. It is very sad to see how drastically Hawai’i has changed over the centuries
To address Pathos in my essay, I used examples from my mothers work. Her general
education degree class that she teaches where a good number of her students are of native
Hawaiian backgrounds. To say that they are where they are because of their ethnicity is far from
the truth and very irrational. Many of these young adults come from broken homes and started
off in life with a massive handicap. My second example of pathos was the recent wildfires on
Maui that affected the lives of many. Not only those who lost their lives, but their friends and
family, and those who are now without homes, and have nowhere to go and no idea what to do.
It's not like we didn’t know that Lāhaina was at risk for wildfires. Greed has turned it into a dry
and hot place in very vast contrast to the place the Hawaiian’s in the old days kept flourishing
and plentiful.
To support my claim using logos, I analyzed these ideas; the reason that modern
Hawaiians differ from those of olden times, is that society has changed dramatically, and not in
their favor. Since the arrival of missionaries, it’s been an uphill battle. The communal system was
overruled by the revolution of the cane industry, pineapple fields, and ownership of land. When
previously all land was shared. Secondly, the first Hawaiians who navigated from Tahiti were
very intelligent to have crossed vast oceans with minimal tools and resources.