IELTS Task 2: Using Phones In School

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones
during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use
their phones.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, phones are commonly used by students, including children. Some

argue that phones should not be used in school. Some, however, agree that there
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information. In some cases, children , especially, primary school students, take
part in a discussion. Phones can be utilized to search for knowledge relating to
their topic. In Vietnam, for example, phone are gradually applied to teaching so
that students do not have to count on teachers. Moreover, recognizing the
effectiveness of phones, a number of teachers encourage students to use
phones. As a result, those teachers can come up with more activities during class
in order to develop students' skills such as critical thinking. In addition to aiding
studying, phones play a part as a tool which helps parents keep in touch with their
children from distance. In any circumstances, children face urgent situations in
school, they can call their parents instantly.
On the negative side, experts indicate that letting children approach phones too
early can make them addicted to phones. They might be captivated by various
contents on the internet. Consequently, instead of enjoying physical activities in
breaktimes or intervals between classes, children are gravitated toward playing
mobile games. This subsequently leads to a sedentary life. Furthermore, the
increasing cases of eye sight problem are attributed to spending too much time
using phones.
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 As outline above, one could see the pros and cons of phone toward children.
Nevertheless, it is supposed that phones must be used in favor of children with
their studying and the downsides need minimizing simultaneously.

21st January 2021

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Nowadays, phones are commonly used by students, including children. Some argue
that phones should not be used in school. Some, Others, however, agree claim that
there are not no detrimental effects if children use their phone while they are in
school. To my view, this opinion need analyzing from multiple perspectives. [ 1] I
believe that the use of phones in schools should be restricted but not banned.

[ 2]

On the one hand, a phone connected to the internet is a great source of information.
In some cases, children , especially, primary school students take part in a discussion.
may need their phones can be utilized to search for knowledge information related
ing to their some topic. In Vietnam, for example, phone are gradually applied to
teaching allowed in schools so that students do not have to count rely on teachers to
get answers. Moreover, recognizing the effectiveness of phones, a number of
teachers encourage students to use them. phones. As a result, those teachers can
come up with more activities during class in order to develop students' skills in areas
such as critical thinking. In addition, to aiding studying, phones play a part as a tool
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 which help parents keep in touch with their children. from distance. In any urgent
circumstances or emergencies, children face urgent situations in school, they can call
their parents instantly.

On the negative flip side, experts indicate that letting children approach use phones
too at an early age can make them addicted to phones. They might be captivated by
various content on the internet. Consequently, instead of enjoying physical activities
in break times or intervals between classes, children are gravitated gravitate toward
playing mobile games on their mobiles. This subsequently leads to a sedentary life.
Furthermore, the increasing cases makes them lazy and increases the risk of
eyesight problems. Besides, browsing the internet, especially social media, while in
school, distracts students from their lessons. are attributed to spending too much
time using phones.

As outline above, one could see the pros and cons of phone toward children.
Nevertheless, it is supposed that phones must be used in favor of children with their
studying and the downsides need minimizing simultaneously. [ 3]

In conclusion, the use of mobile phones by students while in school has some
benefits, including the ability to search for information and communicate with their
parents. However, it must be restricted to stop its undesirable effects of addiction
and distraction.

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[ 1]: You need to clearly indicate your position in the last sentence of the
introduction.

[ 2]: Use a single blank line to separate your paragraphs.

[ 3]: The conclusion you wrote was unintelligible. For the conclusion, you need to
write one or two clear sentences to summarize the main points from the body
paragraphs.

21st January 2021

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