TUGAS 2

BAHASA INGGRIS

OLEH :
GRACE REMBET
NIM :050905298

PROGRAM STUDI ILMU HUKUM

UNIVERSITAS TERBUKA
2023
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1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |rdutta@email.com | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | vincent.prasad@email.com | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

2 It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked
with who has always distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When
we first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked
together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company
grew far more than that of her peers.
 It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with

because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across

teams. Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by
me, but also by her peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm
absolutely confident that Ashley would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She
can bring the skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can
quickly become an asset and help your company grow.
If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact
me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)

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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857

July 21, 2021

 William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656

Dear Mr. Reed,

Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms
of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown

Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the
letter above. (@5 pts)
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3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith.
Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the
field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a
thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your
international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words long.
JAWABAN :

1. Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the letter
numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)

The letter can be divided into three parts:

1. Introduction: The first paragraph of the letter introduces the writer, Rachel Gomez, and
explains her relationship with the recipient, Vincent Prasad. She also mentions the purpose of the
letter, which is to recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role with Clouddatanow
Tech.

2. The Letter Content : The body of the letter ( letter content ) consists of two paragraphs that
provide details about Ashley Singer's skills and qualities. Rachel Gomez describes Ashley's
technical skills in data analytics and her ability to communicate effectively across teams. She
also mentions Ashley's positive attitude, focus, and attention to detail, which were valued by her
peers.

3. Conclusion and the the letter sender : The final paragraph of the letter offers to provide more
information or specific examples if needed. Rachel Gomez expresses her confidence that Ashley
would be a great fit for Clouddatanow Tech and could quickly become an asset to the company.
She signs off the letter with her name and job title.
2. Pertanyaan / Questions

Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the letter
above. (@5 pts)
There are several errors in the letter:

1. The letter lacks proper capitalization and punctuation, making it difficult to read and
unprofessional.

2. The letter is not addressed to a specific person or company, which could be seen as impersonal
and unprofessional.

3. The letter contains a typo in the first sentence, where "u" is used instead of "you."

4. The letter does not use proper grammar in the sentence "We hope you will find our prices n
terms satisfactory."

5. The letter is signed twice by Robert Brown, which is unnecessary and confusing.

To improve the letter, it should be revised to include proper capitalization, punctuation, and
grammar. It should also be addressed to a specific person or company and signed only once by
the appropriate person.
3. Dear Prof. Allen Smith,

I hope this email finds you well. On behalf of the organizing committee, I would like to express
our deepest gratitude for your willingness to be a guest speaker at our upcoming international
seminar. Your expertise in the field of [insert field] is highly respected and we believe that your
insights will greatly benefit our attendees.We are excited to have you as a guest speaker and look
forward to hearing your thoughts on [insert topic]. Your participation will be invaluable in
advancing our understanding of [insert topic] and inspiring eager learners in the audience.Once
again, thank you for your time and effort. We hope that this will be the beginning of a long and
fruitful collaboration. If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact us.

Warm Regards,

Grace Rembet
Chairman, International Seminar Committee.