Nama : Faizal Mubarokah

NIM : 051667594

TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |rdutta@email.com | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | vincent.prasad@email.com | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role with
Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech Solutions. I have 12
years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen many young people come and
go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always distinguished herself
as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we first met, I
felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked together, her
understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company grew far more than that of
her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with because of her
amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams. Her focus and attention
to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but also by her peers, who often relied
on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely confident that Ashley would be a great fit at
Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate,
and she can quickly become an asset and help your company grow.

If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact me. As a
recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and achievements, I'd be happy to
further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez
 Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the letter numbered
1-3.(@5 pts)

JAWABAN:
1. Dear Vincent Prasad: This part is the greeting of the letter or words that indicate the
recipient of the letter.
2. It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with
because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across
teams……… She can bring the skills and experiences you're looking for in a
candidate, and she can quickly become an asset and help your company grow: this is
the introduction of the latter.
3. Sincerely, Rachel Gomez Sr. Project Manager: closing part of the letter. includes the
author's name, title, and sometimes additional contact information.

2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857

July 21, 2021

William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656

Dear Mr. Reed,

Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together with samples of
our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown

Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the letter above. (@5
pts)

JAWABAN:
1. There is a writing error in the introductory sentence. the words "Thank you for your"
should be "Thank you for your"
2. There is an error in writing the date "July 4th" it should be "July 4th"
3. There is an error in writing the sentence "We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory." should be "We hope you will find our prices and terms satisfactory."
4. The sender's name is repeated twice at the end of the letter. The sender's name may only
be mentioned once.
5. There are question words in the contents of the letter, this makes the sound seem
informal.
 TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di bidangnya. Salah
satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith. Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih
untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda
harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the field. One of the
experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a thank-you email for Prof. Allen
Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your international seminar. Your email should be 100-150
words long.

JAWABAN:

Dear Professor Allen Smith,

On behalf of the organizing committee, I would like to express my deepest gratitude for your
invaluable contribution as a speaker at the international seminar we organized.

Your expertise and insight not only enrich the discussion but also provide a meaningful learning
experience for all participants.

We greatly appreciate the time, dedication, and wealth of knowledge you share with us. Your
presence also takes this seminar to a higher level.

Thank you Prof.Allen Smith. We are honored to have you contribute to this seminar and we hope
to collaborate with you again in the future.

Regards,

The Head of Committee

Faizal Mubarokah