camera work could be

the edit over all went well reshot the footage so we can get make
sure to shot lots of footage
improved and updated so the
better scenes for the music video
there was a tiny mistake footage looks better to make sure there's enough
make the narrative make find ways to link both narratives so
the filming of music video more sense as it was the music video flows easily take charge as director next time
went extremely well confusing in some parts
adding foley work to add depth and
add foley work to add some add piazzaz this will make the edit add b-roll to make sure we can
the main narrative went
depth and add more to the sound better make the story make sense.
well and made sense narrative
adding more b-rool to the music video
the acting was good no edit more of the music video to make the side story make sense add foley work to add various
to add more to it emotions to the project
one messed up
add more b-roll to make the
the footage was shot well side story make sense more
and there was no mistakes