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TWO BILLION DOLLARS!

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Akin Alabi
A to me
Sep 6 Details

Human attention is very fleeting, Emmanuel.


Has always been.

But the fact that in this age thousands of


other things now fight for the same attention
makes it even more fleeting than ever.

Grabbing someone’s attention may be easy.


But holding that attention for a while? Not so
easy!

That is why, as a business owner, you must


always look for creative ways to both grab and
hold your prospects’ attention. I mean hold it
long enough till they learn about your offer
and its benefits — and whip out their cards or
wallets to buy.

I’ve shown you how to grab attention and also


given you two ways to hold your prospect’s
attention.

But I reserved the best for the last. Nothing


holds attention as much as it does — if you do
it rightly.

And I’m talking about…

The Story Method!

This is a powerful method, if you know how to


do it.

Human beings love stories. It’s basically


imprinted in our DNA.

It’s how traditions and cultures have been


passed down from generation to generation,
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even without written material.

The older ones sit the younger ones around a


campfire or under the full moon and tell them
countless stories upon stories.

And unsurprisingly, that is the only time the


most restless kid settles down and listens
with rapt attention!

We love stories from childhood and carry that


undying love into old age.

The Holy Bible started with a story. There are


loads of stories in both the Bible and the
Quran.

We love movies because we love stories. We


read, listen and watch the news because we
love stories.

As I'm typing this, the TV is on and it is on


CNN.

They are reporting the story of South Africa’s


first female surgeon. A lot of people are
watching the STORY all over the world.

Can you tell a story to start your sales letter?

Absolutely!

The challenge is that the story has to be


interesting and must be related to what you
are selling.

That could be a tricky combo, but nothing you


can’t master with practice.

If I am selling a course on business, I can tell


a story about myself. I will tell you a story
about how I started my business and why you
should listen to me.

I can say something like...

Dear Friend,
I would like to tell you a story about myself. I
promise to make it short.

In 2003, after completing my NYSC, I decided to


start a business. I attended a seminar on how
to create and sell information products...

Blah blah blah.

A few editions ago, I shared one of the


greatest sales letters ever written. I was
teaching another point when I shared it but
today, I will share it because of its story value.

It was written to sell the subscription of the


Wall Street Journal.

This sales letter grossed...

Two Billion Dollars!

Here goes...

Dear Reader,

On a beautiful late spring afternoon, twenty-five


years ago, two young men graduated from the
same college.

They were very much alike, these two young


men. Both had been better than average
students, both were personable and both – as
young college graduates are – were filled with
ambitious dreams for the future.

Recently, these two men returned to college for


their 25th reunion.

They were still very much alike. Both were


happily married. Both had three children. And
both, it turned out, had gone to work for the
same Midwestern manufacturing company
after graduation, and were still there.

But there was a difference. One of the men was


manager of a small department of that
company. The other was its president.
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What Made The Difference?

Have you ever wondered, as I have, what makes


this kind of difference in people’s lives?

It isn’t always a native intelligence or talent or


dedication. It isn’t that one person wants
success and the other doesn’t.

The difference lies in what each person knows


and how he or she makes use of that
knowledge.

And that is why I am writing to you and to


people like you about The Wall Street Journal.

Blah Blah Blah

Now tell me whether using a story is powerful


or not!

Let me leave you with the final one.

The opening hook Sabri Suby used to sell his


best selling book, Sell Like Crazy:

Dear Business Owner,

If you want to create a torrential downpour of


buyers that flood your business and literally
DEMAND that you sell them your products and
services, this will be the most important book
you'll ever read.

Here is why: My name is Sabri Suby and five


short years ago I was dead broke. I had just
started my business from my bedroom – with
no more than $50 and an old computer that my
girlfriend had bought me.

Oh...

Let me not move past the opening hook.

I will save that for my next email.

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Cheers,

Akin Alabi,
Africa's Number One Business Teacher

PS: I want to recommend a book to you.

It is called The Ultimate Sales Letter by Dan


Kennedy. Go to amazon and order a copy.

And if you don’t have my books already, find


them here:

1. Small Business Big Money


2. How to Sell to Nigerians

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