September 2020 Writing

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TASK 2
2020 SEPTEMBER
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BAND DESCRIPTOR CHECKLIST

Task Response ✓ S
addresses all parts of the task
presents a clear position throughout the response

7
presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to overgeneralize and/or supporting ideas
may lack focus
addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others
6 presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive
presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear
addresses the task only partially; the format may be inappropriate in places
5 expresses a position but the development is not always clear and there may be no conclusions drawn
presents some main ideas but these are limited and not sufficiently developed; there may be irrelevant detail
Coherence and Cohesion ✓ S
logically organizes information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout
7 uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use
presents a clear central topic within each paragraph
arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression
uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical
6
may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
uses paragraphing, but not always logically
presents information with some organization but there may be a lack of overall progression
makes inadequate, inaccurate or over-use of cohesive devices

5
may be repetitive because of lack of referencing and substitution
may not write in paragraphs, or paragraphing may be inadequate
Lexical Resource ✓ S
uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
7 uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation
may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation
uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task
6 attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy
makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication
5 uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task
may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty
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for the reader
Grammatical Range and Accuracy ✓ S
uses a variety of complex structures
7 produces frequent error-free sentences
has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors
uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms

6
makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication
uses only a limited range of structures
5 attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences
may make frequent grammatical errors and punctuation may be faulty; errors can cause some difficulty for the reader
TA CC LR GRA BAND
UNDERLENGTH NO OF WORDS PENALTY
OFF-TOPIC MEMORISED ILLEGIBLE
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Writing task 2
아카데믹
1. Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel
that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Read and understand the question (Highlight / underline key parts)
Opinion Discussion Problem and solution 2-part question
Plan your essay structure (4 paragraphs)
Introduction :
topic + answer
1ST Main paragraph
2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
Main paragraphs
1ST Main paragraph
2ND Main paragraph
Conclusions
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2. Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university.
Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business. Discuss both views and give your
opinion.
Introduction :
topic + answer
1ST Main paragraph
2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
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3. Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be
banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Introduction :
topic + answer
1ST Main paragraph
2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
Main paragraphs
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4. Some believe that charitable organisations should help people no matter where they live. Others argue that
charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based. Discuss both views and give
your opinion.
Introduction :
topic + answer
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2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
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5. Some people believe that rich countries should provide poorer countries with help that is not financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
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6. Full-time university students spend most of their time in class or working on assignments. However, some
people think that it is important for students to get involved in non-academic activities on campus as well (for
example, to join a sports team or take part in drama). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
1ST Main paragraph
2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
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7. The best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way
of life for the sake of the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
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8. Some people think that if a country is already rich, further economic development will not result in its citizens
being any happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
1ST Main paragraph
2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
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9. The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to
move from the suburbs or countryside into the city centre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
Main paragraphs
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10. Some people think that in order to produce a happy society, it is necessary to ensure that there is only a
small difference between the earnings of the richest and poorest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
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11. Recent advances in air travel have focused only on those sitting in upper class and have left other
passengers with no benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
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12. Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and
import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
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13. Some children find some school subjects difficult (for example maths or philosophy), so these subjects
should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
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14. In recent years, television has contributed most to changing people’s quality of life . To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
Introduction :
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Conclusion
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15. In the future it may be necessary for us to live on another planets. For this reason, some people believe
that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
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17. Some cities create extra housing by building tall buildings. Other cities do this by building on wide areas of
land. Which do you think is the best solution to the problem of housing?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
Introduction
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18. Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the
environment. Why is this? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
Introduction
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19. There are many female students who finish degrees in science and technology courses at university, but
few move into the workplace after they graduate. Why is this? What measures can be taken to encourage
them into work?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
Introduction
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20. In many cities the construction of new houses and office buildings is not controlled. This leads to people
building in whatever style they want without thinking about design. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh
the disadvantages?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
Introduction
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21. Young people are often influenced by their peers. Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the
disadvantages?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
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22. Many developing countries place a lot of importance on tourism. Why is this? Do you think that this is a
positive or negative development?
Introduction :
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23. In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work, and communicate online without any face-to-face contact
with other people. Is this a positive or negative development?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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24. In the future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people in many countries. Why
is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Introduction :
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25. Some people believe that if an individual behaves in an anti-social manner, such as committing a crime,
then society is to blame. What are the causes of anti-social behaviour? Who do you think is responsible?
Introduction :
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Conclusion
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제너럴
1. Some people think the most important skill nurses should have is having good medical knowledge. Others
believe there are other more important qualities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Introduction :
topic + answer
1ST Main paragraph
2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
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2. Some people think that school children should be asked to work individually in class. Others believe that
working in small groups is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Introduction :
topic + answer
1ST Main paragraph
2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
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3. Some people believe that successful sports teams are always those with the strongest or fittest players.
Others think that success depends more on the team’s mental strength. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
Introduction
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4. Some people think that job satisfaction is the most important factor when looking for a job. Others think that
having job security is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Introduction :
topic + answer
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2ND Main paragraph
Conclusion
Introduction
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5. Some people believe that it is best to do the same type of work throughout your life. Others feel that it is
beneficial to change jobs often. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
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6. Some people think the news has no real connection to people’s lives, so reading newspapers or watching
news programmes on television is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
Introduction
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7. There is less communication between family members today than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
Introduction :
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8. Some people believe that only employees who have worked at a company for a long time deserve to be
promoted to a higher position. What is your opinion about this?
Introduction :
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9. Some people believe that all students should be made to have an unpaid job in their free time. Do you
agree or disagree?
Introduction :
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10. Many people think that the most important things in life are free (i.e. they cannot be bought). Do you agree
or disagree?
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11. Mobile phones and the Internet are used by millions of people every day, but old people use these forms of
technology the least. In what ways can mobile phones and the Internet be helpful for older people? What
measures can be taken to encourage older people to use them more?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
Introduction
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12. In some countries, people waste a lot of the food that they buy in shops and restaurants. Why do you think
this is? What can be done to solve this problem?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Introduction
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13. In some countries, people prefer to rent a house than buy one. What are the advantages and
disadvantages of renting a property?
Introduction :
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14. In many countries traditional customs are being lost. Why do you think this is? What can parents and
schools do to keep traditional customs alive?
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15. Nowadays people are less fit and healthy than they were in the past, which could affect their long term
health. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?
Introduction :
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16. Young people today are often less polite and show less respect than previous generations. Why do you
think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?
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17. Some people today struggle to use modern electronic technology such as smartphones and computers.
Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?
Introduction :
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18. Many university students have part-time jobs while they study. Is this a good or a bad thing?
Introduction :
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19. After finishing school, some students go travelling or work for a period of time instead of going directly to
university. Do you think the advantages of gap years outweigh the disadvantages?
Introduction :
topic + answer
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Conclusion
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20. Some people decide to move to another country when they retire. What are the advantages and
disadvantages of this practice?
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21. In the past, people wore clothes that were unique to their own culture. Today, people all over the world
wear the same types of clothes. Is this trend a positive or negative development?
Introduction :
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22. The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on having the same job or the same
working conditions for life. What are the possible causes of this rapid change? How can people prepare for
work in the future?
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23. People nowadays send text messages more frequently than they talk the phone. What are the reasons for
this trend? Do the advantages of texting outweigh the disadvantages?
Introduction :
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24. Some sports are extremely dangerous for those who play them. Why do people participate in such sports?
What measures could they take to minimise the risks involved?
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25. Most companies use interviews to hire new employees. What other ways could be used? What do you
think is the best way?
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월 간 아 이 엘 츠 Writing 2020-9 스코어팩토리

BAND DESCRIPTOR CHECKLIST

addresses all parts of the task

presents a clear position throughout the response

presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear

Coherence and Cohesion ✓ S

logically organizes information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout

presents a clear central topic within each paragraph

uses paragraphing, but not always logically

makes inadequate, inaccurate or over-use of cohesive devices

may not write in paragraphs, or paragraphing may be inadequate

uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision

uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task

6 attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy

for the reader

Grammatical Range and Accuracy ✓ S

uses a variety of complex structures

7 produces frequent error-free sentences

uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms

uses only a limited range of structures

UNDERLENGTH NO OF WORDS PENALTY

OFF-TOPIC MEMORISED ILLEGIBLE

Read and understand the question (Highlight / underline key parts)

Opinion Discussion Problem and solution 2-part question

Plan your essay structure (4 paragraphs)

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

Read and understand the question (Highlight / underline key parts)

Opinion Discussion Problem and solution 2-part question

Plan your essay structure (4 paragraphs)

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

Read and understand the question (Highlight / underline key parts)

Opinion Discussion Problem and solution 2-part question

Plan your essay structure (4 paragraphs)

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

Read and understand the question (Highlight / underline key parts)

Opinion Discussion Problem and solution 2-part question

Plan your essay structure (4 paragraphs)

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

Read and understand the question (Highlight / underline key parts)

Opinion Discussion Problem and solution 2-part question

Plan your essay structure (4 paragraphs)

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

Read and understand the question (Highlight / underline key parts)

Opinion Discussion Problem and solution 2-part question

Plan your essay structure (4 paragraphs)

1ST Main paragraph

2ND Main paragraph

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