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Advertising and Private Healthcare
Advertising and Private Healthcare
To
what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken
to protect them? page 45
- Thesis statement: consumers – manipulated by..., yet a number of measures …. proposed to …..
Body 1: Topic sentence: From my perspective, …adversely impact (v) on …. adverse (adj,
catastrophic, detrimental, disastrous impacts (n) on….
1. Consumerism: (disapproving) rampant consumerism (n) – result (v) from unscrupulous (vô đạ o
đứ c) advertisers with appealing graphics and compelling stories + exaggeration manipulate consumer
behavior. Repercussions: superfluous (dư thừ a) purchases + waste disposal
2. Children behavior: pester (v) parents to Vo = insist parents on… overindulged (v3) bị nuô ng chiều
quá mứ c + undesirable effects on their health (consumption of fast food due to alluring/tempting adverts)
Body 2: a multitude/myriad of…
1. authorities stringent regulations on information delivery (Youtube kids, ….) censor information
authenticity
2. a heavy fine or even prison sentences on companies selling low-quality products via means of adverts
33. Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should
not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the
disadvantages? page 45 – khung “Advantages – Disadvantages” trang 17 sách task 2
Intro:
- the inexorable development of private-owned healthcare sector.
- While S+V, it is my concrete belief that ….. (my view)
Benefits Drawbacks
- ease burdens on public healthcare sector, - exorbitant/prohibitive cost of hospitalization
particularly in the unprecedentedly difficult and other services. Explain: not subsidized by
time of global pandemic. Explain/example: public funds only the wealthy can afford
medical facilities + equipment + medics those services >< the impoverished – unable to
assist overloaded public hospitals get access to ….
- most advanced treatment + services pour - not closely scrutinized (controlled) by the
huge investments into medical and drug state might conduct unethical or immoral
research access (v) state-of-the-art research (surgery, medicines) for their own
machines or equipment interests (lợ i ích, $$) take a heavy toll on
patients
- tax revenues to the government
Đề thi IELTS chính thức ngày 1/2/2020:
Task 1: Pie chart