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Topic: Social media is the real cause of teenage depression.

Nowadays social media is a part of our life. Teenagers also use social media as well. For some of them,
social media causes a little bit of depression, moreover, for the rest of them it is a way of studying. In this
essay, I will discuss the depression of teenagers caused by social media and what are the ways of
reducing the effect of social media.
We all know that everyone can create an account on any social media, such as Instagram, Twitter, or
Facebook. These platforms altogether have more than billions of users, and these users can be teachers,
robbers, scammers, or anyone. I think that teenagers don't have enough experience or information about
scammers. Scammers use various techniques to exploit teenagers and gain financial benefits or access
their profiles, etc. I am sure that after teenagers become a victim of any scammer, they quickly become
sad or depressed. Another cause of depression is that when boys see a pretty girl's profile on social media
they quickly start to send messages to them to take a girl's attention, and in many situations, girls do not
pay attention, this causes depression in boys. There are, many situations on social media that cause
depression in teenagers.

The solution to this problem is to not pay attention to scammers. Because nobody will work for your
benefit conversely, they always think about their benefit. My advice to teenagers is to block scammers'
accounts before they want to reply to them. If they reply to scammers they become a victim of scammers
and it can bring a bad situation for them. Another piece of advice for teenagers is to spend less time on
social media because they will become addicted to it, addiction is a very bad thing because it wastes a lot
of time.
This essay showed what are the main reasons for becoming depressed by social media and what solutions
they have to overcome them. In my opinion, every teenager must spend less time on social media,
otherwise, they can't be focused on school lessons and when they get poor grades this also causes
depression. The best advice to them is to not open a social media account until they are 18.

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