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Republic of the Philippines

Department of Education
REGION VI – WESTERN VISAYAS
SCHOOLS DIVISION OF ROXAS CITY

ROXAS CITY SCHOOL FOR PHILIPPINE CRAFTSMEN

Lanot, Roxas City, Capiz
Telefax No. (036) 6212-291

Titanic: A Timeless Tale of Love and Tragedy

A Critique Submitted to

VINCENT D. VALENZUELA, Ph.D.

Roxas City School for Philippine Craftsmen

Lanot, Roxas City, Capiz

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In Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements

for the English for Academic and Professional Purposes

Grade 11 ARISTOTLE (SECTION)

Humanities and Social Sciences, Academic (TRACK AND STRAND)

By

IAN CHRISTOPHE DEMON

November 13, 2023

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Republic of the Philippines

Department of Education
REGION VI – WESTERN VISAYAS
SCHOOLS DIVISION OF ROXAS CITY

ROXAS CITY SCHOOL FOR PHILIPPINE CRAFTSMEN

Lanot, Roxas City, Capiz
Telefax No. (036) 6212-291

TABLE OF CONTENTS

CONTENT PAGE REMARKS

(WHAT’S INSIDE MY CRITQUE PAPER?)

COVER PAGE………………………………………………….. 1

TABLE OF CONTENTS………………………………............... 2

AGREED CRITERIA…………………………………………. 3

TITLE OF CRITIQUE……………………………………………… 4

INTRODUCTION…………………………………………….. 4

BODY/DISCUSSION/CRITIQUE………………………………. 4

CONCLUSION………………………………………………….. 4

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REFERENCES…………………………………………………………...

ORIGINAL COPY OF A TEXT /DOCUMENTATION / PHOTOS 5

AGREED CITERIA/ RUBRICS

AGREED CRITERIA: PERCENTAGE ACTUAL REMARKS
RATING
I. FORMAT / GRAMMAR/MECHANICS/STYLE
Follow all the formats and Mechanics
*Font style – Century Gothic
* Font size – 12
* Margins
Left – 1 ½ inches
Right – 1 inch
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Top/upper portion - I inch

Bottom/lower portion – 1 inch
Spacing – single spacing 25% ___ %
*SHORT COUPON PAPER/
*Kindly put fastener on the left side
* Pagination is to be found in upper right side of the paper
*Grammar is accurate.
Spelling, capitalization, indention, and punctuations are correctly used.
 Word choice is appropriate
 Sentences are well –structured
STYLE
 Paper showcases the writer’s voice
 Paper uses a variety of sentence structures.
 Paper eliminates sexist language
 Paper uses language appropriate to the text
 Paper eliminates wordiness
II. CONTENT / ORIGINALITY
I.INTRODUCTION (around 5% of the paper) 25% ___ %
Introduction states the title, director
*Title of the Book/Work of Art
*Writer’s / painter’s name
*Thesis Statement/ Main Idea
* Main idea is clear
II. BODY (70 % of the paper)
*Critique/ Discussion
*Critical Approach (e.g. Historical)
* Why Historical? or Why Formalism?
*Do you agree with the author? Why or why not?
* Answers for the guide questions (modules)
* Explanation is comprehensive and sufficient.
*Explanation has depth.
*Supporting details are directly linked to the main idea.
* Paper presents different perpectives of the issues raised.
* Paper clearly points out the weaknesses of the text/art/movie
*Explanation and opinion are supported by evidence
* Ideas are presented convincingly
* You may use the technique D-A-I-J
D- Description, A-Analysis, I-Interpretation, J-Judgement
III. CONCLUSION
 Paper presents the summary of the reviewed text/art/movie
 Conclusion states the over-all impression of the work
III. ORGANIZATION/ Completeness
From cover page – original copy of text
 Paper use organizational pattern and structure appropriate for the genre
 Cohesive devices are effectively use (First, next, then, finally)
 Ideas are correctky placed with improves the paper’s organization
 Flow of ideas is smooth and easy to read
IV. DOCUMENTATION/ SOURCES /CLEANLINESS/PROMPTNESS OF SUBMISSION
 Paper uses correct citation and reference fornmat 25% ___ %
 Sources are reliable
 Sources used are relevant to the topic

(Deadline: 1 day before the 1st quarter exam, usually falls on Wednesday – October
25, 2023)

TOTAL 100% ___ %

AGREEMENT / SUGGESTIONS:
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SIGNATURE OF SUBJECT TEACHER:___________________________

SUBJECT TEACHER: MR. VINCENT D. VALENZUELA, Ph. D. (0907-234-2832)

I. INTRODUCTION

Titanic is a classic romantic disaster film that captured the hearts of audiences
worldwide. Released in 1997, it recounts the ill-fated maiden voyage of the
RMS Titanic, beautifully weaving in a timeless love story between two
passengers from different social classes. With its groundbreaking special
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effects and gripping storyline, the film continues to resonate with viewers,
even decades after its initial release chemistry and heartfelt romance.
II. BODY

Cameron's skillful storytelling brings to life the stark contrast between the opulence of
the upper class and the struggles of the lower class on the ill-fated ship. The characters of
Jack Dawson, a free-spirited artist played by Leonardo DiCaprio, and Rose DeWitt
Bukater, a spirited young woman yearning for freedom portrayed by Kate Winslet,
captivate the audience with their undeniable The meticulous attention to detail in
recreating the grandeur and tragedy of the Titanic's sinking is one of the film's notable
strengths. From the lavish ballrooms to the haunting underwater scenes, the visual effects
and cinematography create an immersive experience that tugs at the heartstrings of
viewers. Additionally, the historical accuracy of the disaster and the inclusion of real-life
accounts from survivors add an emotional depth that resonates long after the credits roll.

III. CONCLUSION

Titanic remains a timeless masterpiece that skillfully navigates the complexities of

human emotion, societal divides, and the indomitable force of love in the face of
insurmountable odds. With its unforgettable performances, breathtaking visuals, and
enduring storyline, the film continues to leave an indelible mark on the landscape of
cinema, reminding audiences of the power of love and the enduring legacy of a ship that
met a tragic fate on that fateful night in April 1912.

Republic of the Philippines

Department of Education
REGION VI – WESTERN VISAYAS
SCHOOLS DIVISION OF ROXAS CITY

ROXAS CITY SCHOOL FOR PHILIPPINE CRAFTSMEN

Brgy. Lanot, Roxas City, Capiz
Telefax No. (036) 6212-291

IV. REFERENCES:

A. INTERNET SITES
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Accessed on November 12, 2023, Britannica,

https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0120338/

V. DOCUMENTATION / PHOTOS / APPENDICES /

SUPPLEMENTARIES / ATTACHMENTS/

COPY OF ORIGINAL TEXT OR ART WORK

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