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Parts of Research Proposal Comments Correction

Change the word ”students” Changed the word ”students”


Limitations and Delimitations to “ senior high school to “ senior high school
of the Study teacher” teacher”
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Please add much more about Added much more about the
the background of the study. background of the study.
Background of the study Specifically in International, Specifically in International,
National, Local. National, Local.
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Research Questions Change the research question Changed it to “What are the
“How do they views about perceptions of SHS faculty
multilingual instruction?” teachers on multilingual
- instruction?”

Theoretical Lens Justify theoretical lens. Researched more to justify


- our theoretical lens.

Insert “senior” between Word “senior” inserted


Limitations and Delimitations among, and High School. between among, and High
of the Study - School.

Chapter II Please follow proper format. Followed the proper format.

Change the Research Changed the Research


Question Question to “Lost in
Research Title (Multilingual Instruction by translation: A
SHS teachers of Baganga phenomenological inquiry in
NHS: A phenomenological multilingual instructions
inquiry) among SHS teachers.
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Theoretical Lens Find more citations below Researched more to find


2013. much better citations for our
- theoretical lens.

Change the research question.


“How do students respond to
Research Question multilingual instruction, and Changed it to “How do SHS
what impact does it have on teachers / insights language
their language development diversity on their students?”
and academic performances?”
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