The two bar charts illustrate the number of people living per square kilometer in six countries in

2003 and the changes in the urban population in six countries from 2003 to 2005.
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As for the number of people per square kilometer in 2003, Japan has had by far the highest figure of
the six countries at just over 300. After that came Italy and the UK at just over 250 and slightly less
than 200, respectively. Meanwhile, Australia, Canada, and Sweden had much lower figures. The
number for Australia showed roughly 10. The figure for Canada has was the lowest of the six
countries at around 5. The number for Sweden was slightly less than 25.
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On the other hand, the growth rate of the urban population from 2003 to 2005 showed different
trends. Australia had the highest rate of the six countries at just over 1.4%. This was followed by
Canada and Japan at slightly less than 1.4% and slightly less than 1.2% respectively. After that came
Italy at slightly less than 0.4%. Sweden had by far the lowest figure of the six countries at just under
0%. The number for the UK stood at just over 0.2%.
数字が高い順を守って書く方が分かりやすいです。

In summary, Japan and Italy had a high population density, while the increase rate in urban
population in Australia, Canada, and Japan was high.
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【総合】
・TA：内容 OK
・CC：OK
・LR：OK
・GRA：正確性 OK。時制には注意！ 単文が続きすぎないようにしてください。

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