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Dear student,

In this book, you will find compositions written by students who


joined our Super Writers™ Creative Writing programme. They have shown
tremendous improvements after going through the programme.

Most of them either failed, had a borderline pass or scored below 25


marks for their composition tests/exams at the time they joined our
classes. Eventually, after much hard work, most of them topped their class
in composition writing and eventually scored an A or A* for their PSLE
English!

By compiling these well-written compositions, we hope that they


would be a source of inspiration and motivation for you to write better. If
you enjoy reading their compositions, aspire to write like them, or even
better!

Rest assured that the teachers at Learning Journey would always be


here to help you along the way!

The journey of a thousand miles begin with a single step…

So, take that first step today and start writing!

Nothing is impossible, if only you would TRY!

Yours always,
Teacher Grace
www.learningjourney.edu.sg

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Here’s what our students & their parents say about our Super Writers & Tuition classes:

“I would like to thank Learning Journey for guiding Janelle in her English. Her
compositions improved from the usual 20+ to at least 35. And never in a million years
that we expect Janelle to get A* for her PSLE English. Thank you!”

Janelle’s mum, P6 St Hilda’s

“Thank you for supporting my child in her PSLE journey . She was with LJEC from Nov
2016 till Sep 2017. Like magic, within 10 months, her grades jumped from B to A*. I could
not imagine this great leap. I think this happened not only because she was taught
techniques but also due to the words of motivation by teacher Helen and Grace. Those
words really motivated her to do her home work every week!”

Anitha, Lavaanya’s mum, P6 Geylang Methodist

“Within 3 months, my girl’s composition writing improved from 24 marks to 32 after


joining Learning Journey in Dec’15. She went on to score 34 marks (Compo) in her P6
SA1, and 80/95 (Paper 2), a remarkable improvement and achievement! Thanks to
teacher Grace for her patience and unique style of teaching! Personally, I also like
teacher Grace’s open communication with parents. Kudos to teacher Grace and her
team, keep up the good work!”

Mrs Ho, mother of Yun En, P6, Marymount Convent

“My son’s English grades improved from a B to A within 3 months!


We are so confident with Grace and her team that we also enrolled Calen for the
Chinese writing class. And after 3 months, his grades improved from a C to A! Many
thanks to Grace and her team for doing a fantastic job!”

Mummy of Calen, P6 Catholic High

“Ever since my daughter attended the Super Writers English tuition classes, she started
scoring above 30 marks for her class compositions from 20+ marks. She is now more
motivated and confident and hopes to score at least 70 marks for her SA1! Thank you
Teachers for guiding her patiently.”

Mother of Chloe, P6, Holy Innocents’ Primary School, from C to A (PSLE English)

If you child needs help to write better, we can help!

Your child CAN take his first steps with us...by signing up for our trial classes, where we
will teach him some of the techniques and strategies used by our students to achieve
the above grades!

Sign up here: http://www.learningjourney.edu.sg/sign-up-for-classes/ for a 4 lessons trial


class today!

For more information about our classes, visit:


http://www.learningjourney.edu.sg/creative-writing-english-paper-2-tuition/
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About Learning Journey Education Centre

Learning Journey is best known for our effective composition writing & English paper two
techniques, comprehensive child-centric curriculum & dedicated teachers. We believe
that learning is a journey that never ends.

Our vision is to support our students in their learning journey by providing a quality
curriculum and best teaching practices to help them succeed in life. Since 2011, we
strived to be that pillar of support for our students in their quest for excellence in learning.
By providing students with a nurturing environment and an excellent curriculum, we are
committed to nurture a generation of competent and successful learners who embrace
learning with a growth mind set.

Our Teaching Philosophy

Recognising that every child is unique, Learning Journey believes in nurturing competent
learners to learn at a pace that suits each individual. Students are encouraged to ask
questions, share ideas, think on their feet and as a result, learn effectively under the
guidance of our team of dedicated teachers.

We believe that each child has different learning needs and by having a small class size
(1 teacher to 6-8 students), it enables our teachers to customise their teaching
approaches and lessons for each child, so that they get the MOST out of each lesson.
Students who need help get a chance to catch up, while high ability learners are able
to maximise their potential.

Every week, students and their parents discover that our classes are
“different” from other classes they have attended.

Experience our classes today, to see for yourself,


the difference it makes to your child.

Founder-Principal Grace Tan’s Profile

Teacher Grace is a bilingual education specialist with more than fifteen years of
teaching experience. She specialises in English and Chinese programmes for Preschool,
Primary, Secondary, JC students. As a passionate educator, she enjoys helping
academically weaker students to love the subject they learn. She is known to be a
versatile and patient teacher to her students.

She holds a Master-in-Education (NIE-NTU) and has achieved distinctions for modules in
Bilingualism & Biliteracy, Curriculum Design & Development and Curriculum.

Being effectively bilingual, she achieved distinctions in English/General Paper AND


Chinese for PSLE, GCE ‘O’ & ‘A’ Levels and graduated from NUS with a Bachelor of Arts.
She is also a certified Problem Based Learning Facilitator and used to teach at a local
polytechnic. She has taught modules on Culture and Communication, Cognitive
Processes, Problem Solving and Creative Engagement.

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Grace developed the curriculum for the programmes offered at Learning Journey,
ranging from the parent and child playgroup classes, preschool enrichment classes to
English and Chinese tuition programmes for Primary, Secondary, Integrated Programme
and JC GP Programmes.

Grace is also the author of the most comprehensive and useful series of comprehension
cloze assessment books entitled “Comprehension Cloze Techniques” (published by
Singapore Asia Publishers). The series of six books are available at Popular Bookstores

Our Media Features

Teacher Grace and Learning Journey Education Centre have been featured on
Channel 5 (Talking Point), CNA938 and in The Straits Times, Parents’ World magazine,
Esquire Magazine, amongst others. The centre was also been awarded the Best in
“Creative & Engaging” Learning Centre Award – Parent’s World Best Enrichment &
Learning Schools.

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