Name : Dwi Nur Riska Pratiwi

NIM : 045305893
Prodi : Ilmu Komunikasi

TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

1. Please identify the part of the letter numbered 1-3.

(1) Invitee/Who is invited
Ms. Lee is the name of the recipient of the invitation letter.
(2) Content of letter
The letter in the question is an invitation letter to attend a network event
for the Liberal Arts Department. The contents of the invitation letter in the
form of occasion or what event is this invitation made for, day and date, set
time, the place where the invitees are expect to attend has also been clearly
stated in part number 2.
(3) Inviter
Ms. Linda Lau is the inviter.

2. Please identify 3 (three) errors in the letter above.

- The use of informal or non-standard language, there are many informal words
in writing the letter,
- There is a wrong punctuation symbol, the punctuation symbol in the letter is a
question mark which should not to be needed in a reply to a customer request
letter.
- Repetition of sender’s name at the bottom of the letter.
3. Please write a body letter Please write a body letter in approximately 100-200
words that explains your disappointment.

Gading Raya Street 05

Kelapa Gading-Jakarta

November 11th 2022

Yummy Dough Store

Kuningan Street 56
Semarang

Subject : Complaining

Dear Sir,

I am sorry to send you the letter, it is about my complains for your cookies
product that I order from this store. I was disappointed with the cookies I
received, because after the product arrived at my address and I checked, it turned
out that the cookies had expired. As a proof I have sent a photo of the expired
product to the admin contact on the website.
I hope there is a replacement product or money back from the Yummy Dough
Store, because I bought it in large quantities but all of them expired.
I hope that in the future, I will not receive any more damaged or expired products
like this.

Please look forward my letter to solve this problem.

Sincerely
Riska Pratiwi
4. Write a thank you email about the donation in approximately 50-100 words
Dear Mr. jones

I hope this letter reaches you in good health. My name is Riska Pratiwi from
Kami Peduli community. I would like to thank you for your financial assistance
during our fundraising event in North Jakarta last week. The donation we
received was Rp.10.000.000.- (ten million rupiah).
The funds you given mean a lot to the victims of the disaster. Without your
participation in this fundraising event we might not be able to help victims of the
disaster much.

Once again, I would like to thank you for your kindness and understanding.

Regards

Riska Pratiwi