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Evening Street Review Number 40
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EVENING STREET REVIEW
NUMBER 40, WINTER 2023
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CONTENTS
POETRY
NONFICTION
KAILEN NOURSE-DRISCOLL 38
CLELA REED 65
JOANNE DURHAM 71
AARON FISCHER 72
DONNA SPECTOR 73
PEGGY TROJAN 95
L.D. ZANE 104
PATTI SULLIVAN 138
ANTHONY J MOHR 156
MITZI KIRKBRIDE 188
MATTHEW J SPIRENG 218
FICTION
CONTRIBUTORS 233
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AMELIA COULON
THE CALL
It happened on a Tuesday.
Willa and her sister, Paula took their children to the local aquarium
during school vacation. The two older ones, Isabella and Katie ran herd on
the youngest, Kara, as they watched sharks and stingrays. Paula recounted
her latest adorable story about her little one’s newest accomplishment
while Willa listened with amused fondness. Willa's phone buzzed for what
seemed like the hundredth time. In exasperation at the interruption, she
dug it out of her purse, believing it was her husband, Clive, again asking
for pictures. She already sent him some twice.
The readout on the face of her phone caused her to freeze.
“What is it?” Paula asked. “Naughty pictures from Clive?”
“No,” Willa answered distractedly, hollowly. “He wouldn’t. It’s
someone calling from Angie’s phone.”
“Angie?” Paula repeated, startled. “As in, our cousin Angie?”
Willa nodded slowly. “What do I do?”
“Are you afraid it’s actually her on the line?” Paula teased.
“Yes,” Willa answered, agitated. The phone announced for the
final time, then stopped.
“Maybe she’ll leave a message from beyond the grave,” Paula
speculated in an eerie voice. “Willa, save me.” Paula laughed when her
sister smacked her on the arm. “You’re into all that ghost stuff.”
“Ghosts appearing, yeah,” Willa agreed grumpily. They shifted to
follow their children to the penguin exhibit. “I know ghosts talk to people
in person, although usually it’s in a dream. Not calling on their old cell
phone. Which, by the way, should be disconnected, since she died ten years
ago.”
“Did it occur to you the number could have been kept by someone
in the family. Maybe that’s who’s calling you?”
“Logical,” Willa allowed, considering. “Someone who knows me
and my cell number? It’s believable.”
Her phone vibrated again to let her know the caller left a message.
“Play it,” Paula encouraged. “I want to know who it is.”
“I don’t,” Willa objected. “I’m still freaked out.”
“You really do think it’s Angie!”
“I think someone could want me to think so. What if they set it up
with recordings of her voice to make it sound like Angie? I’ve seen movies
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“You would have been friends with her again?” Paula asked in
disbelief and a hint of disappointment.
“Maybe,” Willa speculated. “I always hoped someday she’d
change.”
“You’re more forgiving than I,” Paula commented with a shrug.
“Tolerance isn’t the same as forgiveness, Paulie,” Willa explained.
“I can put up with a lot. That doesn’t mean I don’t hold grudges.”
“What are you gonna do about the call?”
“I don’t know,” Willa wondered. “Should I go to the police?”
“What are they going to do?” Paula demanded with a snort of
dismissal. “They’ll just treat it as a prank.”
Willa sighed. “Let’s put this on hold and get our kids lunch.”
“Good idea, actually,” Paula concurred. “I think I just saw Kara
trying to eat a starfish.”
###
On the drive home from the aquarium, Willa received the second
call.
She felt a strong temptation to answer it, but they had all three kids
in the car. That made it a very bad idea. She let the buzzing call go to
voicemail. Paula glanced away from the road to look at her.
“What was that?” Paula asked suspiciously.
“What you think it was,” Willa replied. “Should I try calling back
when I get home?”
“Why would you do that?” Paula questioned, worry creeping into
her tone. “What if she answers? What are you going to say? ‘Who is this?’
We both know what that answer will be. Don’t engage this psycho.”
“If it’s just her recorded voice, then they won’t be able to answer
every question,” Willa argued. “They can’t have a pre-programmed
response for everything I say.”
“At least do it on speaker with Clive there then,” Paula insisted.
“Your husband won’t let anyone mess with you.”
“That’s a good idea,” Willa agreed with a nod.
“Ask her why she did what she did with your ex-husband all those
years ago,” Paula suggested snidely, aware of little ears within hearing.
“I’ll bet there’s no pre-programmed response for that one.”
“Oh, I’m sure the generic, ‘I’m sorry’ fits for someone who’s
trying to play me. But I really don’t care why. Even though I hated him,
he was still my husband. I was faithful. He should have been, too. She
never should have even thought of doing what she did. That’s not
something a person can explain away.”
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“No, it’s not,” Paula agreed gently. “I didn’t mean for it to sound
that way.”
“It’s not you,” Willa exclaimed in frustration. “This brings up so
many mixed memories for me.”
Paula nodded with understanding and sympathy.
For the remainder of the drive, they discussed other subjects, but
the call nagged at Willa until she felt worn down when they arrived home.
Her daughter went straight to bed and Willa cornered her husband,
explaining what happened. She played the eerie first message for him and
then played the second for them both.
“Look, Will, I get it. It’s been a long time since we’ve talked. You
might not want to see me. But I’m going through a lot right now. I don’t
know if you heard, but Rick died. He overdosed on something. I just need
a friend.”
Willa stared at her phone. “It’s her tone, her cadence. I don’t know
how they managed it. I have to call my mom.”
“Why?” Clive asked lightly. “You gonna tell her Angie’s alive?”
“No. I need to find out if Rick really OD’d. This is getting really
specific.”
Willa dialed her mother and she picked up right away. After the
typical greetings, Willa asked about Angie’s brother, Rick.
“Oh, right,” her mom answered. “Did I forget to tell you? He died
from a drug overdose. You know, he struggled his whole life. Drugs finally
took him. It’s pretty horrible. They had the funeral in Wisconsin, so it’s not
like we could go or anything. I guess I didn’t really think it would be a
very big deal to you. You weren’t close. For you, it was always Angie.”
“Thanks, Mom.”
“How did you learn about it?” her mom wondered. “Did Patty call
you, too?” She referred to Rick and Angie's sister.
“No, a friend of Angie's told me,” Willa exaggerated. “It was just
out of the blue.”
Willa spoke to her mom for a few more minutes before she finally
wished her goodnight.
“So is it true?” Clive asked as soon as she got off the phone. He
drew his attention away from his video game to look at his wife. “Is he
really dead?”
“Yes, exactly like the voicemail said,” Willa confirmed. “I think I
should call the number back.”
“Why?” Clive questioned. “You know it’s a hoax.”
“If I agree to meet them, maybe I can find out who’s behind this,”
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“It’s so good to see you,” the false Angie gushed. “It’s been too
long.”
“And you haven’t aged a day,” Clive inserted rudely, from behind
his wife. “In fact, being dead actually gives you a youthful appearance. So
which are you? Terry or Grace?”
He threw out the daughters’ names to garner some sort of reaction
from the stranger, but it didn’t faze her. The false Angie wrinkled her
forehead the tiniest bit and said, “I’m Angie, Clive.”
She grabbed her purse from the bar and dug out her wallet. She
pulled out her license and handed it to him. Willa peered over his shoulder
as he read it. The information looked official. It confirmed who she said
she was, Angie’s correct birthdate and year, and an address in Connecticut.
“No,” Willa stubbornly shook her head. “I went to your funeral.
We went to your funeral. We saw your body. Angie is dead.”
The false Angie sighed. “Why do you have to make this so
difficult?” she asked. “Why can’t you just accept it’s me?”
Willa had a strange moment of clarity. “You’re Terry. You were
devastated when your mom died. I tried to talk to you at the wake and you
dismissed me. There were pictures of your mother and I all over the place.
She must have spoken about me a lot. You probably hated me for showing
up to her funeral like I did. I’ll bet you thought I had a lot of nerve. But
your mother was the one who caused the rift between us, not me.”
“She made a mistake,” Terry spat, unintentionally revealing
herself. “You couldn’t just forgive her and move on, after everything you’d
been through together.”
“Everything,” Willa murmured, pleased to have uncovered the
truth. “Like when we were eleven and she told everyone how I wet the
bed. Or when we were sixteen, she started the rumor at the religious school
we attended, saying I was a lesbian and I was almost expelled. Then, she
came to live with me in California when I first got married and I walked
in on her and my husband in the middle of foreplay. Or how about, when
she left California and stole my things and my credit card, charging
hundreds of dollars. Is that what you meant?”
“She wouldn’t do those things,” Terry hissed angrily, defensively.
“You knew her,” Willa said gently, not without sympathy. “When
she couldn’t handle being a mom, she left you with your step-dad and
moved in with a new boyfriend. She didn’t even die with family at her
side. She couldn’t help but betray you in the end.”
Terry started to cry, tears slipping down her cheeks. “I found some
of her diaries,” she confessed. “She loved you so much. She missed you
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every day you were gone from her life. She tried to move on, but she
needed you, she reached out to you and you ignored her.”
“Yes,” Willa admitted, laying a soothing hand on Terry’s arm. She
took the handkerchief Clive passed her and gave it to the girl. “It was the
hardest thing I ever had to do in my life. Because the truth is, I loved her,
too. Despite everything she did to me. I wanted her back. But she wasn’t
good for me. She hurt me too many times. I knew she would keep hurting
me. And I would let her.”
Terry threw herself into Willa’s arms and clung to her while her
tears fell. Though she tried to compose herself, she seemed very shaken.
When she finally got a handle on her emotions, she backed away. “I’m
sorry I tried to hurt you like this.”
“Have a seat, Terry,” Willa offered with a sigh. “Let’s have a drink
and some dinner. I’ll tell you all the good things I knew about your mom.”
She and Clive took stools next to Angie’s daughter at the bar. Willa briefly
rested a motherly hand on the back of Terry’s head.
“Did she ever tell you about the time we thought we could make
a rap video? Worst Salt-N-Pepa lip-sync ever. But damn, did we have some
moves.”
MICHAEL MINASSIAN
BABY, YOU’RE SO CRUEL
ALAN SWOPE
A PIECE OF WORK
WITNESS
ANDREW C MILLER
CUZ
Ben had just settled onto the couch with a glass of red wine when
his mother called. Since he and Veronica divorced, she phoned at least
once a week. She wanted to know if he was dating, when he would be
promoted at Jablonski & Associates, and what he was doing next weekend.
She'd bring the conversation to a close when he'd ask about their volunteer
work at the food pantry or Dad's golf game. But today was different.
“It’s your father,” she said.
Dad had collapsed while practicing with his pitching wedge in the
backyard. Sebastian, his Australian shepherd, barked for 15 minutes
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JACOB FRIESENHAHN
GRIEF
purchased two bottles of wine. He wished he had a glass in hand right now.
He sat on the grass next to the garage.
“Ready for a swim?” The words burst out of him.
She laughed deep in her throat, almost a chuckle.
“Are you drinking?” she asked.
He could hear her breathing. “I will be later.”
“That time in Lake Michigan?” She laughed again. “I sneaked a
couple of peeks through the leaves but didn’t see much.” She paused,
“What I mean was—I saw you from the back. You have cute buns, Cuz.”
She had seen more of him than he had of her. That didn’t seem
fair. He remembered her clothes draped over willow branches. He was
glad his mother was inside.
“I never told anybody, did you?”
“You were 16 then—right?”
The next-door neighbor, a man about Ben’s age, dropped a couple
of black plastic garbage bags next to the tomato cages. He raised his hand
in a somber wave. Ben knew he should go over and speak to him. Mom
would know his name.
He wondered if she was still married. “How’s Lawson?”
“Still into NASCAR.”
He picked up a slight hitch in her voice. Like she didn’t think that
was too neat. Why had he lost touch with her? It wasn’t intentional. He
hadn’t seen her since the reunion.
She asked what he was doing tomorrow.
“I’ll rent a kayak, float down the Betsie River.” He flicked a black
ant off his pant leg.
“Is your mom okay?”
He thought about Sebastian. “Yeah, considering. Dad was tough
to be around.”
“Sometimes it’s harder that way.” There was a muffled
conversation at her end. “Hey, things are happening here and I’ve got to
go.” Her voice turned sharp, a little edgy, “And Cuz—don’t get drunk
tonight and call up old girlfriends.”
#####
Ben packed sandwiches and water into a cooler and drove to a
kayak/canoe livery on the upper Betsie River. He considered stopping to
see Sebastian but decided against it. Dad dies, Mom gives away his dog.
What a deal.
While sorting through his father's filing cabinet, he found a letter-
sized envelope stuffed with bills. Twelve hundred and eighty dollars. He
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She stood up. “Tell you what, Cuz.” She pointed to a brush pile.
“See that?”
A section of bluff had collapsed, knocking loose a wedge of clay
jammed with rooted birch and willow saplings. It had slid into the water
and formed a tiny peninsula.
“I’ll go on the other side, and you stay here. It’ll be private.” She
scrambled through the branches.
Feeling giddy, he pulled off his shirt, pants, and underpants and
piled everything on the sand. He heard splashing on the other side as he
edged into the water. Cold, it took his breath away. What if he got turned
on? Without a suit, that would be embarrassing. That happened last year
with his then-girlfriend. A buddy told him later that some girls did that on
purpose—gave a guy a hard-on in public. But not today; down there he
was his usual shriveled self. He could hear steady arm strokes on the other
side of the brush. Likely she would soon turn and see him creeping toward
deep water, stoking the courage to plunge in. Did she take off everything?
Maybe she was in her underwear while he was naked. He took a deep
breath and submerged. When he surfaced, she was beyond the brush pile.
He could only see her head.
“Feels good, doesn’t it?” She folded her arms over her breasts and
bobbed up, almost to her navel, then sank out of sight. A few seconds later,
she surfaced, laughing.
Unbelievable, he thought. Un-be-lieve-able. He turned toward
shore. She had suspended all her clothes, even underwear, over a clump of
willow branches. He had never done anything like this with any of his guy
friends, certainly not with a girl, never mind his second cousin. For several
minutes they tread water, staying some distance apart. His eyes snapped
back and forth between her and the beach.
She splashed water on him. “I’m getting out.”
He waited until she disappeared behind the bush before he swam
toward shore. As his feet touched bottom, he glimpsed her through the leaves.
She was scrunched down on the sand, arms wrapped around her knees.
For days he couldn’t get that swim out of his mind. He began to
worry the memory would go stale, like listening to favorite music over and
over. Years later, he and Veronica rented a condo with a pool. One night
he suggested they go in without their suits. Once he spoke, he could sense
her body stiffening. She shook her head and looked away. He was glad he
never talked about that swim with Phil.
Last night’s phone call spun through his mind like a Möbius loop.
He pondered the change in her voice when he asked about Lawson. He let
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baseball cap perched on her head. Ben wondered if she was taking the
blame, had encouraged the boy to drive down, and now regretted it. Or
maybe she told him not to and was covering for him.
“Okay,” Ben said. “Let’s give it another try.”
He and the older boy smoothed the ruts while the twins collected
branches and laid them over the bare soil. Ben walked to the top of the hill
for a better look. The curve at the top was gradual, but the road sloped the
wrong way, away from the hill.
Years ago, his father got stuck on a dirt road one Sunday
afternoon. Their car hit a slick spot and fishtailed into a ditch. His father
had jammed the accelerator down and spun the tires. They sank lower into
the mud. Finally, he and Ben got out to push, and Mom sat behind the
wheel. Dad told her to rock the car. She tried several times but couldn’t
get the hang of it. Dad finally brought both fists down on the hood of the
car.
“Goddamn it, rock the car!”
Ben stepped toward his father. “Quit yelling at her—you’re the
one that got us stuck.”
His father turned and shoved Ben backward, knocking him off
balance. Ben sat down in the mud with a splash. He scrambled to his feet
and shouted, “Go push your own damn self out.” Head down, fists
clenched, he sloshed down the road. Fifteen minutes later, their car crept
up behind him. A farmer had pulled them out with his tractor.
Ben realized the woman was talking to him.
“I said, do you want us to push?”
She could have been 60, but it was hard to tell. Arms tanned and
muscular, a few creases on her face. Teeth straight and white, eyes a light blue.
He shook his head. “Ride in the front with me.” He looked at the
older boy. “You and the twins sit in the back. Make sure they don’t fly
out.”
Ben started the engine, checked the rear-view mirror. The older
boy had both feet braced, one arm across each twin. They could be his
kids, the woman, an older version of Phil.
The woman snapped on her seatbelt. “His dad said he could get
the truck since he did so well in school. Plus, playing baseball."
“What’s your name?”
“Frances,” she said.
“We’re going to do this, Frances.”
Maybe he shouldn’t have put the boys in the back. But they needed
weight over the rear wheels.
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“Damn straight.” She gripped the armrest with one hand and the
back of the seat with the other.
Ben backed up as far as he could, revved the engine, and released
the clutch. It didn’t engage until the pedal was nearly out. Not a good sign.
He hoped it wouldn’t fail before they reached the top. He brought the truck
to speed in low gear, then snapped into second as they approached the
slope. Tires churning, boys bouncing, they skittered over the branches.
When the engine started to labor, Ben rammed into low and swerved into
the turn as fast as he dared. Dirt spewing behind them, Frances chanting
come on baby, come on baby, come on baby, they rounded the bend and
arrived on top.
The twins leaped out, whooped and yelled, tossed handfuls of dirt
in the air. The older boy shook Ben’s hand, clapped him on the back. He
said folks called him Zack. Frances told him her name again. She hugged
him twice, once tentatively, then again with more strength. Her chest was
bony, her arms strong. He imagined her exploding out of Lake Michigan
on a spring day. They walked him to the river. Zack and the twins steadied
the kayak while Ben climbed in. He paddled a few strokes, turned, and
raised his hand. The boys waved. Frances stood in the water. The bottom
of her dress was wet.
He and Veronica had talked about having children. But she was
always busy. After getting a BS in Biology, she started teaching at a local
high school. From the start, she got into arguments with the principal about
teaching Evolution. The principal wanted her to add Creationism to the
syllabus. Other teachers got involved in the controversy. Veronica finally
quit, decided to go on for a Ph.D. She’d research better ways to teach
Evolution, make it less controversial. Ben didn't disagree with her. He just
thought it was a waste of time. Biblical literalists don’t want to accept
Evolution. They wanted to believe in Adam and Eve and everything else
in Genesis.
Ben wondered if Veronica knew Darwin had married his first
cousin. He had read that first cousins had a genetic similarity of 12.5%.
For second cousins, it was about three percent. He didn’t know if Phil and
Lawson had children.
#####
Ben leaned forward, squinted through the leaves. A few hundred
yards downriver, a bare-breasted woman sat on the bank, can of beer in
one hand. He stopped paddling. She must have heard him because she
quickly slipped into a sweatshirt. Ben continued to drift. Sitting next to her
was a man wearing a yellow fedora. He waved.
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"Well, Darlin'," said Harvey, "I bet Ben would be glad to give you
a lesson in paddling.” He laughed and poked her with his elbow.
“I’d love to learn.” She turned her back to Harvey. “Is there
something biting me back there?”
“I’ll look.” He lifted the back of her shirt. “I don’t see anything.
Of course, it might’ve crawled down your butt.” He snapped the elastic on
her shorts.
Ben motioned toward the river. “I better get going.” He took
another drink. “Thanks for the beer.”
Harvey stood up. "Well, hang on, no need to be running off. Me
and Glenice hardly got to know you.”
Ben wondered if they had a plan. Maybe he was supposed to make
it with Glenice while Harvey watched. They’d end up as a rollicking
threesome on the blanket. Ben turned his head as he glided into the next
bend. They were eating pistachios, staring at the river.
#####
Kayaks and canoes were lined up along the bank like felled trees.
Most were red, but a few were green or blue. Now the trip seemed too
short. It was fun: swimming in the river, helping Zack and his family. Later
he'd call Phil and tell her about it. He could go farther since the sun
wouldn’t set for hours. Except the next take-out point was miles
downriver. And Mom was holding dinner for him. Likely she had a
chicken in the oven.
He had decided to give the cash to her. It wouldn’t be right to keep it.
A truck and trailer from the livery rattled into the parking lot. A
boy and girl in their late teens climbed out. A golden retriever pup trotted
to the river for a drink. He rolled around on a sandy spot, then raced back
to pee on a kayak.
“Good trip?” asked the girl. She wore faded blue jeans with fake
rips. Two long black braids reached to her waist.
Ben thought they might be a couple. They loaded the trailer,
starting with the two-person kayaks and long canoes. Her braids snapped
back and forth like riding crops. She was as strong as the boy. They
gathered up life jackets and paddles. Ben grabbed his cooler and hopped
into the truck.
Maybe he wouldn’t call Phil. It could be awkward.
Baked chicken, just as he figured. And green beans and corn from
the farmer's market. Mom didn’t ask about his day. Instead, she talked
about next year’s reunion. Her cousin and his wife—Phil’s parents—
would stay at the house. When Dad was alive, they used to put guests in a
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motel. But things had changed. After dinner, Ben opened a bottle of wine.
He wouldn’t drink as much as he did last night. His mother took her glass
into the bedroom to watch television.
She had taken the envelope of cash. Ben thought she might split it
with him.
Ben turned off all the lights and sat in his father’s chair. Tomorrow
he’d finish sorting through Dad’s things, take several loads to the Christian
Rescue Mission. He’d salvaged a few items for himself. The pitching
wedge, a mug from Central Michigan University, a few CDs. He poured
another glass of wine.
Sad business. That’s what Phil said. Sad business.
Phil's parents would come to the reunion. Maybe they’d bring Phil
along. Would Lawson be with her?
Ben swirled his glass. He held it up and watched the legs creep up
the sides. He set it down and looked through a stack of his father’s CDs.
He would be nice to listen to stuff Dad liked. He took another sip of wine.
It would be okay to have another glass. And he would call Phil. Not now,
but later. Before going to bed. He didn’t have her number written down,
but it had to be on his phone from when she called yesterday.
ASHLEY KNOWLTON
CAMPING AT PRAIRIE CREEK
CATHERINE COUNDJERIS
THE RINGS OF SATURN
RIKKI SANTER
STEPSISTERS AT LARGE
for Claude Cahun (1894-1954)
and Marcel Moore (1892-1972)
reprieve>>retrieve
taboo>>redo
MARTE CARLOCK
MEXICAN FOOD
even started trying out her Spanish, which dated from junior high school
and I don’t think was all that great. But what do I know. My Spanish starts
and ends with adios. She would say, “Hola, Rita, que tal?” and the waitress
would spew forth some gibberish. No matter what, Sue would end with
“Muy bien, gracias,” whether things were bien with her or not. Okay, I do
know bien means good. And everything got less and less good until the
day Sue couldn’t go there with me at all. Couldn’t eat at all, in fact.
I spent a lot of time in the hospital, as long as she knew me and
knew I was there. But then she stopped waking up very much. She might
open her eyes, and I’d squeeze her hand and say, “Love you, babe.” She
would smile and squeeze as best she could. I could feel the squeeze less
and less every day.
The nurses began nagging me to go out. “She’s on a lot of
morphine,” they’d say. “She won’t be waking up for hours. Get a shower.
Get some dinner.”
I sure as hell didn’t want to go home to an empty house. Where
the hell could I go? Without thinking about it, I ended up at the Taco
Grande. I wasn’t hungry, so I ordered a margarita.
The owner delivered it. He wiped the table after he set it down,
draped the towel over his arm, and hesitated. “Dónde está la señora?”
I understood that much. I took a big chug of my drink and sighed.
“In the hospital.”
He slid into the empty chair across from me and I was surprised
to find I didn’t mind. “Hospital? Very sick?”
I stared into my drink and nodded. I didn’t want to say out loud
how sick.
He looked at me for a full minute. “You need to eat, Señor Roy.”
How did he know my name? While I was pondering that, he
reappeared with my go-to order, fish tacos. “I am Raul, señor. I am patron
of this place. Call on me if you need anything,” He turned back. “Your
comida is on the house tonight. Come here again tomorrow. Hasta luego.”
When Sue died, Raul came to the funeral. Not only Raul, but five
of the girls I had seen waiting tables at the Taco Grande.
I ate there a lot. It was closed over Christmas, so I went to my
daughter’s even though it’s a long trip and we never got along too good.
Holidays are not a good time for people who live by themselves. Even if
you have some place to go, it all just reminds you of what’s missing.
Who’s missing. I felt like a fifth wheel. So I was glad when Taco Grande
opened up again.
Raul stopped by my table. “Señor Roy, how was your Christmas?”
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CARLA MCGILL
ANCESTRY
PAL
PATRICIA L HAMILTON
HELP ME
SUE ALLISON
THE LAST DREAM ESSAY
When it began and the house hushed, the noise of his rumbling stomach
drew glares. He tried to shrink into his seat. He shrugged. He had no idea
what it was. It wasn’t like anything I had ever heard. And then he pulled
up his sleeve to show me the sores that wouldn’t heal. Did they hurt? He
shook his head and shrugged again, and we went back to watching the
play. Nine months later he was dead.
It took me a long time to get over my brother’s death. Dreams had
played a crucially helpful role. They were mostly of him drifting
amorphously around in some innocuous ether-world, telling me I couldn’t
come with him. But they weren’t enough. They weren’t enough because
my “prolonged grief syndrome,” as the latest DSM describes any grief
lasting more than a year, was not just sadness at losing my brother, but (I
just recently became aware) it was post-traumatic stress disorder.
But before that, this is what happened. My grief was so old. It was
so ridiculous. I didn’t even know why I was still “grieving,” so when I
found myself in a new city, with no one I knew, I said to myself that I
could think of my brother on my morning walks. He could keep me
company. I wrote that in my journal. “My dead brother has become my
companion.” I thought this was pretty benign, but then I had a dream in
which Claudia, a friend of my brother’s who is now a friend of mine (and
doubtless, in the dream, taking his place) said, “He never really liked you.
He thought you were interesting because you were such a nerd.” The
dream made me laugh. What was this, tough love? But the message was
clear: he was dead; he had a good life; he was fine; I needed to move on;
he wanted no part of this insanity. It wasn’t healthy.
I told my husband this dream. He likes dreams. Without
addressing the dream itself, he said that traumas we experience as children
return throughout our lives. He was talking about himself but I sat up
straight. That was it—I had PTSD! That explained everything! It explained
the years of unexpected bouts of grief that would body-slam me. Walking
down the street. At a coffee shop. At something someone said:
uncontrollable sobbing that left me exhausted. My husband volunteered
the emotions triggered: fear, helplessness, abandonment.
Now for the final dream. I go to his apartment. There’s a lot of
stuff, a lot, piled high. I see a collection of rope-tow grippers. We grew up
skiing at an area that had rope tows. There are two portable typewriters,
one new, which I think I had given him. I think of taking it. I’d been
wanting a manual typewriter. My husband gathers up a pile of blankets.
Claudia, my brother’s friend and, in my mind, his alter-ego, he being mine,
or something like that I guess, is there, too. I had recently been in contact
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with her, arranging details about meeting up in D.C. All these things are
helping me. Coming upon a cache of cards, she exclaims, “Look at all
these letters!” I look. “Thank-you notes for all the gifts you gave him!
Thank you for this, and for this, and look! For a silver bracelet!” In the
dream I feel embarrassed. I don’t know if it is a good thing or not a good
thing. I don’t take the typewriter. I take nothing. That was the dream, about
which I gave no further thought until the next day, when I was walking
into the living room with my first cup of coffee, when the words of the
dream stop me in my tracks: thank-you letters for all the gifts I gave him.
Imagine that.
Thank-you letters.
For all the gifts I gave him. Thank you, Billy, I say as the strangely
long grief disappears in a poof and never comes back. Talk about gifts.
Suddenly rather than being hit by grief, all I could do was smile. Who
wouldn’t love a guy who wrote you thank-you notes for gifts you gave
him, gifts that weren’t gifts at all, just living. Who sent you this dream.
Suddenly all I could think of was not loss but how lucky I was and
wondered how I could ever have been sad. What was I thinking? What
was wrong with me?
My parents, who had retired to Nevada, came east to pick up and
scatter his ashes. His friends held a memorial service. I didn’t attend either.
I didn’t want to see his ashes. I couldn’t face a celebration of his life. So,
because I refused these rituals of mourning, I remained stuck in the rut of
never-ending grief, of spinning my wheels, of repeating over and over the
emotions I had suppressed as well as the memories I retained: hanging out
in his hospital room after work; spending Sundays in his apartment with
The New York Times. I did his laundry. I brought him milkshakes and
grilled cheese sandwiches. For a long while I wished I had done more for
him—taken him to Italy, or just to the Hamptons for a day, or for a taxi
drive up Park Avenue as the lights were just coming on—but I didn’t, not
because I rejected the idea but because I didn’t even think of it, of doing
something “while there was still time” or “one last time.” Perhaps if we
had recognized, if I had recognized, if I had realized is what it comes down
to, the gravity of the situation rather than continue to act as normal as
possible, which is what we did (and what could be better, really?), I would
have addressed rather than suppressed the terror through which I was
living.
A month before he died, he made me a surprise lobster dinner for
my birthday. “Claudia helped,” he said. When I got to where he was
staying, which was at a friend’s apartment, one that had a kitchen and an
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MARTY KRASNEY
HISTORY LESSONS
Coda
so much depends
upon
WATCH
MARK THALMAN
POWER OUTAGE
ATTENDANCE
I tell my students
if I am ever absent,
I am either in the hospital
or at the district office.
And, if I am in a boring meeting,
I wish I was in the hospital
or here with you.
THE ANNOUNCEMENT
RESIGNATION
Administration is ignorant
if they don’t understand
being handed a curriculum
and designing great materials
to teach that curriculum
are two different things.
when I stepped into this humanitarian role; I represented the USA, and to
some that meant United States of Assholes. We were already getting that
reputation. Most people wanted to bring me down a peg just because of
where I was from.
But I could tell from his eyes that this man liked me. His smile
was feeble but genuine. If he had been a friend, I would have asked him
what was wrong, but in this office, at this organization, in this role, I
simply couldn’t.
“Oh, thank you for wanting to meet me,” I said. “It’s a pleasure to
meet you too. But now I must get back to my editing. My deadline’s
tomorrow.” I stood.
He still sat there, his eyes fixed on my face. “Please,” he almost
whispered. “You must get my family to your country.”
I froze. He froze. My heart ached in every beat. I don’t think our
eyes locked for more than a minute but it seemed like years. I’d seen the
photos from countries in his region, the video footage that media kept to
themselves because the public couldn’t handle them. I sifted through them
every day to see which ones were mild enough to publish yet dramatic
enough to pull at the heartstrings.
“If not me, then my wife and children,” he said. His country was
on the precipice of violence, and I was certain that torture had always been
a part of his life, lurking, waiting for an opportunity to snare his loved
ones.
I tried to gently decline. I told him I couldn’t help him. I gave him
other resources, some contact numbers. I told him that my position didn’t
allow for me to get him out of his country and into my own. I didn’t have
the clout or means to get him asylum. I suggested he call the American
headquarters directly. I knew how desperate he must be to resort to telling
a complete stranger his family’s circumstance, to ask for help. But hell,
I’d barely been able to procure an apartment in Geneva.
Plus it was against the rules.
I could’ve used my words, taken risks, to try to save his family. I
could have at least tried to get him a meeting with my secretary general.
But I was trapped in a system of neutrality and universality, wed to the
structure of an ideology that spouted procedures that taught me to get the
best outcome, I must follow step A with step B. Which, by the way, is still
the best system to help vulnerable people in danger out there.
“Please don’t mention our meeting to anyone,” he said, shaking
my hand again. He thanked me; I wished him the best. I heard his light
footsteps descend the stairs, step by step. I never heard from him again. I
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It’s an elegant
little sign
slightly squashed
8
toppled
like any edifice ripe to fall
suddenly defying
the mathematical certainty
of 4 + 4
containing everything
in an endless Mobius strip
ice skater’s
unbroken arabesque….
call it
eternal recurrence
mother’s milk
division of a cell
ROBERT RICE
EVERY BIRD KNOWS THAT*
DAN FITZGERALD
FORGIVE MY INGRATITUDE
“We need to talk about what your brother would want us to do,”
the social worker told Bea, as they sat in the family room just down the
hall from Russell's room. “Did the doctor talk to you about his prognosis?”
“Prognosis?” Bea asked. “What do you mean?” Bea had listened
to lots of doctors, residents, and interns since Russell had been found down
in his apartment a week ago. She had been at the hospital every day, and
he still wasn't waking up.
The social worker paused, sighing deeply. Her whole body
seemed to slump with sadness. Her name was Milly, but Bea had trouble
associating such a happy-sounding name with the depressed-looking
woman in front of her. Bea was going to give her youngest son that name,
if he had been born a girl. Bea wondered if Milly was always like this. She
could be an attractive girl, Bea thought, if she could just sit up straight and
manage to smile now and then.
Milly spoke slowly, as if Bea was having trouble understanding.
“Your brother does not appear to be recovering from his stroke,” she said.
“And if he doesn't recover soon, decisions need to be made as to whether
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we keep him on life support. I thought the doctors had reviewed this with
you?” she asked.
“They tell me every day how he is doing,” Bea replied. “But they
always seem to be trying something new.”
Milly sighed again. “Sometimes the doctors have trouble sharing
the details,” she said. “And they do try different things to make patients'
better.” She leaned in. Bea smelled peppermint tea on her breath. “But we
are at the point where what they are doing is not making a difference, so
there are some choices that need to be made. And you are your brother’s
power of attorney. Would it help if I arranged a meeting with his
attending?”
Bea didn't want to make it harder for Milly. And she didn't know
the attending from all the other doctors coming into the room throughout
the day.
Even though Bea knew the answer, she just had to ask, to be sure.
“What are the choices?”
Milly scrutinized Bea's face, as if to assess whether Bea was truly
following her. “There's really two paths that are followed in these sorts of
situations,” she said. “One would be to transfer your brother to a nursing
home, keeping him alive with the current artificial means of life support.”
She inhaled deeply before going on, her eyes continuing to track Bea's
reactions. “The other is to discontinue life support here in the hospital,
which would result in his death.”
Bea nodded, but didn't respond. What was there to say, she
thought. She didn't like the choices.
“What do you think your brother would have wanted? Did he ever
share his wishes to you about what he would want you to do if this were
to happen?”
Bea wondered about what Milly’s family was like. In Bea and
Russell's world, this was not something they talked about. But she was his
sister. They had another sister, Mae, but Bea was always the responsible
one. It would be her decision.
“Can we talk about this later?” Bea asked. She wanted to go back
to Russell's room, to be with him as she thought through her decision.
Maybe call her daughter.
“Of course,” Milly said. “I'll check back with you this afternoon.”
Bea wondered how many other people Milly needed to talk to that
day. What a job that would be, she thought as she walked slowly down the
hall to her brother's room in the ICU. Having to get so personal with
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the cards, blame the loss on somebody else. The kids stopped playing cards
with Russell, begging her to have Russell move out.
“Russell wasn’t always like this,” Bea had told them. She talked
about how protective he was of her when they were children. How he
would fight their dad whenever he threatened to hit Bea or Mae, only to
be hit harder for it himself. But until he ran away at the age of seventeen,
Russell always jumped in to protect her.
Bea pulled a Kleenex from her leather handbag, dabbing at her
eyes. She wondered what had happened to that sunny, red-headed brother
of hers. He became the man he most hated, their father, a bully and a drunk.
Probably too much of a fighter, she thought. After he left home, he joined
the navy, and when he came back, he acted as if everybody was out to get
him. Someone would say something to him in a bar and before you know
it, Russell would be in a fight and thrown out to the sidewalk. He always
acted so tough on the outside, Bea thought, but she only saw the scared
young boy who took on his father to protect his sisters.
Bea looked at the shrunken body, seeming even smaller amidst all
the contraptions keeping him breathing, and knew time was running out.
She could see Russell’s imminent demise in the faces of the sympathetic
nurses who would greet her as they came into the room to adjust the
gadgets, pushing in or pulling out the wires and the tubes and the drains,
as if he wasn’t there. Her brother’s body was just a work surface, she
thought, keeping nurses busy and machines alive. She had prayed daily for
God to save him. But now she was thinking God may have other plans.
What were those plans, she wondered, and why would God leave such a
decision up to her?
#
Bea had dreamed of being a nurse when she attended Catholic
school and the nuns talked about helping the sick. Instead, she married
right out of high school to a dashing dark-haired sailor who had come into
town, and by the time he left ten years later, she had three kids to support
on her own. There was no time or money for school. She was trained by
the welfare office to be a keypuncher for the County. Not long after, she
met Jim, who promised to take care of her and the kids in exchange for
marriage. She didn’t love him, but she was tired of trying to make do with
a paycheck that would be spent before she got it, and he was the best option
she had.
Every day, Bea regretted the marriage. Jim didn't beat her. He
didn't interfere with the raising of her children. But his constant presence
reminded her how she had given up her hope for anything better when she
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married him. She had settled, and soon rebelled. She drank like her
siblings, and then picked fights with Jim. She spent his money and racked
up debt, causing her to feel more imprisoned. Eventually they managed to
reach an unspoken truce, staying out of each other’s way as much as
possible, and learning to be, essentially, good roommates. Her drinking
became quieter, more of a way to soften the reality of her world. But six
years ago, when she was diagnosed with cancer, she realized she was not
ready to die. She prayed hard to her Catholic God that if she were to live,
she would quit drinking. She kept her promise.
#
A nurse came into the room, startling Bea from her thoughts. “We
have to turn your brother and clean him up a bit,” the young woman said,
cheerful and efficient. She was a pretty nurse, with wavy brown hair not
unlike that of her daughter. She wished her daughter was there, but knew
how busy she was, and how impatient she sometimes was with Bea. It was
as if her daughter, her oldest, had never forgiven her for her dad going
away.
“Why don't you get a cup of coffee,” the nurse suggested, smiling
sympathetically. “We won't be long.”
#
Bea got confused trying to find the cafeteria. The hospital was
such a big place, and all the hallways looked the same. She allowed herself
to be lost, to wander in the halls. She looked out the window of the first-
floor corridor to see two children playing tag. She wondered if they were
brother and sister, like her and Russell. They looked happy, she thought,
tagging each other, and then running away.
She sat down on the bench in the hall, watching the children. As a
child she got lost walking downtown with Russell. She hadn’t realized
they were lost until her big brother told her so, because she was enjoying
the journey and assumed, like so many children her age, all was well unless
she was told differently. They spotted a police station and went inside. She
must have been about four and her brother six, and Bea remembered to
this day how friendly the policemen were. Russell was trying to be serious
and adult-like, but Bea lapped up the attention, laughing at the policemen
who would pass by and make faces at her. When one of the policemen
asked her name, she proudly gave him her full name, Beatrice.
“Peaches?” the policeman said, with a big smile.
“No, Beatrice!”
“Sure sounds like Peaches to me.”
Bea shook her head. “No. I’m Beatrice.”
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The policeman knelt on one knee in front of Bea. “I’m going with
Peaches. What’s wrong with Peaches?” He winked at his colleagues. “I
think we’ll keep it.”
From then on, to this day, her brother called her Peaches.
#
“Code 199, ICU, Room 5405. Code 199, ICU, Room 5405.” The
words were blaring through the loudspeaker, but it took a moment for Bea
to realize this was an overhead page pertaining to her. Room 5405 was her
brother’s room.
Bea started back to the room and realized she didn’t know where
she was. She had languished too long in her wandering state, and she was
off course. It took her several minutes to find her way back. When she got
there, there was a sea of blue-clad doctors and nurses surrounding Russell,
shouting things in a language Bea didn’t understand, running in, out, and
around in the room. Milly arrived, efficiently moving Bea to the side, away
from her brother, and from the team of professionals who were doing God
knows what to his body. Milly sat her down in another plastic chair,
pulling an identical one up next to her, and kept patting her hand.
Suddenly, the frenetic activity inside the room just stopped. The
staff shook their heads and backed away from the bed, talking in hushed
tones and giving each other comforting pats on the back. Milly stopped
patting her hand and sighed. One of the doctors came out, took Bea’s hand,
and told her he was sorry. The nurse who had told her to get some coffee
came by and asked if she needed anything.
Bea asked to be with her brother, alone for a few minutes. She felt
terrible she had left him at the wrong time. Or maybe he was just waiting
for her to leave. Waiting for her to leave so he could make the decision for
her, as to whether to end his life. Protecting her until the very end. Bea
missed him already.
“Russell?” she asked of the body, disconnected finally from all the
fancy gadgets. Bea leaned over to kiss her brother on his forehead. She
caressed his cheek, a cheek so ravaged by a life some might call wasted.
“Russell, it’s me, Peaches,” Bea said, her eyes unable to focus
from her tears. “I’m sorry I wasn’t here for you when it happened,” she
said, patting his cold hand. “I’m glad you were my brother, Russell, and
I’ll miss you so much.” Bea leaned her head back to stop her tears and her
nose from flowing. She tried to blink her eyes to better focus. She held her
breath in to keep from sobbing, because she knew if she were to start
sobbing the social worker would have to come in and fix things so the rest
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of the staff would not feel helpless and face the fact someone had just lost
their brother.
That’s what Grace Kelly would do.
Bea continued to sit in the room for a few more minutes, watching
her brother’s face become more rigid, more pale, so quickly. She took one
more fresh Kleenex out of her purse and went out to thank the nurses and
to sign whatever it was she needed to sign to put an end to this day.
The nurse asked her for her full name, as she completed the form
to authorize disposition of the remains.
“It’s Peaches. Peaches Wilson.”
“Peaches?” the nurse asked, thumbing through the chart, and
alighting upon an admit form. “We had you down as Beatrice Wilson. Was
that a mistake?”
“Oh yes,” Bea said, gently. “That surely is a mistake. My first
name is Peaches.”
ELIAS KERR
TRANS (RE)INCARNATION
I.
I am home again and this body
found ways to make meat
and connective tissue nourish it-
self for so long, a cadaver
I won’t take back. My mother
wishes I’d put what god gave me
to good use, and when I trusted a scalpel
over his plans, she made it
her devotion. She devoured me
like scripture, fixated on sins and saving
SHERRILL ALESIAK
THURSDAY MORNING WEATHER
J R FORMAN
SPRING SLEEP
Original by Bùi Minh Quốc (Vietnamese, born 1940)
To all comrades of my generation
CLELA REED: Evening Street Press and Review have played such a
generous and supportive role in my development as a poet, I felt privileged
to serve as an associate editor on the review’s staff for several years. After
a number of my poems had been published in the review and after the
second time I had won the Helen Kay Chapbook Prize (that publication
receiving Georgia Author of the Year recognition), I was glad to say yes
to Barbara Bergman when she asked me to join the staff. It was a way to
give back. Reading the submissions kept me aware of poetry trends, what
made successful writing, and what didn’t work. It often inspired. And what
a fine editor Barbara was to work with! She wanted to publish as many
worthy writers as she could and produced hefty (and beautiful) issues
throughout the year. I only wish we could have cloned her so that we could
continue to benefit from her amazing work ethic, her wise discernment,
and her genuine delight in publishing. Thank you, Barbara, for making
many writers’ dreams come true. https://eveningstreetpress.com/book-
author/clela-dyess-reed/
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FRANK RICHARDS
THINGS PEOPLE MADE
It’s Monday and I’m hard at work on our latest computer effort at
Apple—named Lisa, coincidentally, just like you—when I get a phone call
from Ron Foster, the real estate agent who sold us our San Lorenzo Valley
home.
“I don’t want to alarm you, Jack,” Ron says, “but I’ve lived here
all my life, and I’ve never seen the river this high. Maybe you better come
on home.”
We moved there eight months ago, when spring had faded into
summer. Our weekends had been spent on a hammock strung between two
giant madrone oak trees, sipping wine, or in the hot tub we situated in the
center of a circular stand of thirteen redwood trees. We often slept
outdoors on the hammock, first making love to the murmur of the water
trickling over rocks in the little stream below and then falling asleep while
watching meteorites flare overhead.
Because we drive down from the mountains together every
morning, I pick you up from your job at the Santa Clara Bank of America
and we head home. The rain hits us when we take the exit off State
Highway 17 onto Bear Creek Road. It is an eleven-mile drive along the
winding road up into the mountains and back down the other side, into the
little river valley, the rainforest, and home.
I turn on the wipers.
You put your hand on my knee. “Do you have to drive so fast?”
You give your seatbelt a little tug.
I smile. I pride myself on my driving ability. I know every bend
in this road. Up and downshifting the purring engine of the black Porsche
911, I enjoy negotiating the twisting, weaving mountain road. Most of the
locals drive like me, maniacally, spurred to even greater speed when
another car happens to show up behind them.
A harder rain now falls. Little rivulets and tiny waterfalls run
down the face of the mountain beside the road. The mountain itself seems
to be oddly crumbling in the rain; occasional stones come loose and tumble
down, bouncing across the road in front of us as we drive along.
“Seems strange to be going home while it’s still light out,” you
say. You run a hand through your hair. You have that pale skin that comes
only with the true blond, a skin splashed with the faintest hint of freckles.
“Yeah. Almost like the weekend isn’t over after all.”
“Something terrible happened this morning at work, Jack. You
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“Geez, that water’s really moving,” I say. “Looks like over thirty
miles per hour.”
The river cut is fifty, sixty feet wide and the bank maybe thirty
feet down to where the bottom had been only a day before. I estimate it is
now fifteen feet deep. I wonder how many thousands of gallons of water
are passing our doorway each second. Our home is located on the first part
of a series of S-shaped bends in the river. The full force of the river is
hitting the other side, where the river turns off to the left. People on the
other side of the river have been adding on to their house over there, and
it looks like the addition now stands a lot closer to the edge than it did
yesterday.
As dusk falls, we watch, a little awed, trying to name the things as
they flow by. A fence. A doghouse, sans occupant. A garage door. More
trees.
“Look at that,” I say. “Part of someone’s house.” Things are
breaking up, things people made.
“That’s such a shame. You don’t think the water’ll come up to the
top, do you?”
“No,” I say. “Those Douglas firs have been here about five
hundred years, so in all that time, the water’s never come over the top.”
Nevertheless, I walk over to the stereo and turn on the radio. Maybe I can
get some news about the storm. What’s happened to the weather satellites?
Where is the severe storm warning?
What we hear is reassuring. According to reports, the heart of the
storm is hitting a couple of counties up the coast, north of San Francisco.
“See, we’re just getting the southern edge of the storm. Everything
will be all right.”
“Let’s do something else besides watch the river.”
“Good idea. How about some video pinball?”
Tiring of Pac-Man, you’d given me this pinball game for my Atari
as a Christmas present. We laugh as each outcompetes the other, aiming
to top the previous score. The game is a good distraction.
Then the power goes out.
I feel my way in the semidarkness. The fire in the fireplace
provides enough light to get to the kitchen for the lighter. I relight the
dinner candles.
“Here’s the flashlight. Where are the C batteries?” I rummage
through the designated junk drawer in the kitchen. “I’m going out to check
on the river.”
“I’ll get more candles,” you say.
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“On the radio they keep talking about a massive storm way up
north of San Francisco,” I say. “This must just be the edge of it. Don’t
worry.”
But I see the stress of helpless worry tense your neck and line your
forehead with fear.
I go outside and shine the flashlight down at the river. I’d put
twenty steps down there the previous summer, and the water is now all the
way up to the tenth step. It is still rising, about ten feet from the top of the
steps and the house.
After shaking off the umbrella, I come back inside.
You come out of the bathroom. “The toilet won’t flush. There’s
no water.”
I laugh and you join in. Nervously.
“This’ll do it.” I put a yellow, plastic bucket outside to catch some
of the rainwater to flush out the toilet.
You stand, back to me, arms crossed in front of you, staring out
the window. “Our neighbors are leaving.”
Through the sliding glass door on the deck to the side of the house,
I see the neighbor family’s line of evacuation lights moving in the darkness
of the storm. I can just make out the mattresses over their heads. They look
like a line of carpenter ants carrying leaves back to the nest. Where do the
idiots think they are going? The nearest town is five miles away. It will be
more dangerous on the road than staying in place. There’d been that
landslide, after all, and probably more since. I wonder why they haven’t
checked on us or we on them, but then I don’t even know my neighbors.
In the eight months we’ve lived in the mountains, I’ve never spoken to
them, only waved from a distance. We’d been too busy with the wine and
the hammock and the hot tub.
“You don’t think it’ll come up to the house, do you?” you ask.
“Maybe we should leave too?”
“They are lower down there than we are up here,” I say. “They’re
closer to the river. Like I said, our old Douglas firs have stood on the banks
of this river for five hundred years, and they haven’t washed away in all
this time, so I don’t think our house is going to wash away. Tell you what,
though. Just to be on the safe side, I’ll check the level of the water every
fifteen minutes. If it gets to the top step, we’ll leave.” If we do have to
leave, where the hell will we go?
We sit on the couch and listen to the tinny voice coming from our
little red transistor. The weather people still babble on about a storm hitting
the coast far to the north of us. There are no evacuation bulletins or
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The top of the tree extends across the river, forming a bridge of wood
pointing right at our house.
I don’t know what I’m going to do now.
AARON FISCHER: I’m very curious about what the other associate editors will
say about their tenure with Evening Street Review. For me it was mostly drudgery.
Some of it was my fault: committing to proof too many pages on too tight a
schedule, putting off starting until the job became a slog. But mostly it was the
poetry. I found the poems flat: The poets never seemed to push themselves to find
anything but easy, cliched language. Mostly they mistook a simple statement
about how they felt (sad or angry or jealous....) for the poem, when it was really
the place to start. I didn’t know why Barbara was publishing most of these poems.
I'm not talking about misspellings or grammatical errors or misusing a word.
These are all things that can be fixed easily. They don't deter us from recognizing
a real poem when we see it. If you need some evidence that I’m a biased judge
or need to defend the canon (whatever that is): I’m a white, straight man in my
early ’70s. If knowing that makes it easier to dismiss what I’ve said, feel free.
CHASE D SPRUIELL
THE FETAL POSITION
it is a polaroid to burn
it is a face in a cloud
or nothing at all
Spruiell
as in winter,
I long for summer
in summer,
I long for spring
as in silence,
I crave commotion
in chaos,
I covet stillness
desperate to
uncover
its name
Spruiell
if, you gaze around you and see only stained windows
of wondrous color, statues, sculptures next to you
imagining they are real people, candles lit
and gladiolas trembling in the air conditioning,
and finally, if you don’t find yourself floating above your normal
sitting place–elevated, levitated by the smell of Paco Rabanne
or Drakkar Noir or whatever cologne God is wearing
these days, I suggest you have come
to the wrong place to worship.
After the fires are out and the flood waters recede,
and whatever priestess or acolyte enters,
in her raggedy toga, soiled black at the hem,
Title and quotes are from WB Yeats’ Sailing to Byzantium, written 1926.
Newberry
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DEBORAH S PRESPARE
BUMBO
Nature’s play at mimicry only went skin deep. While one brother
clung to their parents with fear and trembling words, the other leapt into
the realm of adulthood with certainty and unabashed questioning, leaving
their parents, the idols of their childhood, behind in the twilight of youth.
The Brooklyn brownstone was left to the twin who stayed, Adam.
The other twin, Ajax—Jax, people called him—didn’t balk at their
parents’ decision to will the family home to his brother. Still living at
home, so stuck in his routines, Adam needed the brownstone to survive.
Jax understood this. To Jax the brownstone was a physical representation
of Adam’s self-imprisonment. Everything was a serious risk to Adam. His
anxieties kept him from doing much in life. Even his career was risk-
focused—actuarial science. So when Jax got a wedding invitation from
Adam, he was floored that his reclusive twin brother was claiming a
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school as far away as he could. When the cab drove off, their father
comforted their mother. Adam needed no comforting. He was relieved.
Gone was the constant goading to do things that were unsafe. Earlier in
their childhood it was racing bikes down the busy streets of their
neighborhood, climbing trees that overhung the same streets, and running
through handball courts mid-game, enraging the men at play. Then it
became stealing snacks from bodegas, tagging building walls, or sneaking
out of the house at night to meet up with other teenagers in abandoned lots
or construction sites to smoke cigarettes and sometimes weed.
The ridicule was ceaseless until Adam accepted Jax’s dares, and
once Adam performed the dares, the ridicule resumed, focused no longer
on his cowardice but rather on his poor or awkward execution: “You
should have seen your face. Could you have looked more scared?”
Adam touched his son’s hand, and instinctively the baby grasped
his finger. Although at the time he couldn’t comprehend it, now, holding
his own son’s hand, he understood his parents’ grief when Jax left. He
couldn’t fathom a day when Bertrin would grow up, possibly into a person
who might want to leave.
What makes a person? Adam wondered as he studied the long
lashes of his sleeping son. Because he and Jax were twins and raised by
the same parents, both sides of the nature-versus-nurture equation, on the
surface, were equal. But the differences between him and Jax were proof
that a person was more than their DNA. And because Jax was a bold
person right from the start (he was a crib escape artist as soon as he could
walk), the nurture part of the formula was uneven for them too. Their
parents worried about Jax’s risk-taking, but they didn’t hesitate to voice
that Jax may have a richer life for putting himself out there. They
encouraged Adam to be more daring like his brother, which Adam, looking
down at his son now, recognized had the opposite of the intended effect.
The more they wanted him to go out and play, the more he wanted to stay
home and read. There was no way he could compete with the audacity of
his brother.
Adam first became keenly aware of this when their father read
them Treasure Island and, inspired by the story, Jax insisted that they play
pirates. Jax commanded the game like how the pirates in the book
commanded the sea. Adam could never run a ship of gruff, sea-battled
men, but his brother ordered men like that into being during their
imaginative adventures.
Then their first day of school arrived, bringing with it new friends
who were more entertaining to Jax than games of make-believe with
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been hopeful ones. He didn’t dwell on this, though. His nephew was sharp
and going places. That was all that mattered.
And Bertrin did go places. College graduation with the summa
cum laude distinction. Law school. A job at a good firm in Manhattan. Jax
smiled at each of Bertrin’s accomplishments and knew Adam and Carlene
must be proud.
His phone rang one evening. It was a number Jax didn’t recognize,
but that didn’t stop him from answering. His business was all about
making new connections where there weren’t any before.
“Uncle Jax?”
“Bertrin? What a surprise.”
“I’m sorry I’m calling so late.”
“It’s only nine o’clock.”
“Right. The time difference.”
There was a long pause. He could hear Bertrin breathing on the
other end.
“Is something the matter?” he asked his nephew.
“Mom and Dad, they….” Bertrin’s voice broke.
“What is it?”
It took a moment for Bertrin to gather himself.
“What’s wrong?” Jax asked.
“They were in an accident. They are—were on vacation. In the
UK. It was bad. Their rental—” Bertrin took a deep breath. “They died.”
Jax could barely make out his nephew’s words but he felt them.
“I’m coming.”
The aunt and uncle from Boston had passed years before. The
headcount at Adam and Carlene’s joint funeral didn’t suffer, though, from
their absence. Adam and Carlene’s friends had multiplied through the
years, and there was Bertrin, his girlfriend, Dolores, and their friends.
After the funeral, Bertrin and Dolores hosted a reception at the
brownstone. Jax hadn’t stepped inside the home since Adam and Carlene’s
wedding. Like then, it was as if time never flowed within these walls.
There were touches of Carlene and Bertrin—a few new paintings and
photographs of them interspersed with childhood pictures of Jax and
Adam and their parents—but things were largely as Jax remembered them.
Standing in the doorway to his old bedroom upstairs, Jax smiled,
appreciating that Adam and Carlene had made it Bertrin’s room. The
furnishings had changed. Different posters adorned the walls, but the old
Victorian leaves-and-branches wallpaper remained. Albeit the paper was
more yellow now. And still in use but sun-faded were the heavy, forest-
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green drapes that Jax remembered hiding behind during rainy Saturday
afternoon games of hide-and-seek with Adam and their parents.
“I don’t know what I’m going to do with this place.”
Jax turned to find Bertrin standing in the hallway. The mourners’
hushed voices floated up from downstairs.
“Mom and Dad left me the house,” Bertrin said. “It’s so much
upkeep. And Dolores and I—our money is tied up. We just put a bid on a
place in the city. Before—”
“Bert?” a voice called up.
“I’ll be right down.” Bertrin gave his uncle a sad smile. “Would
you be upset if I sold it?”
The question didn’t surprise Jax, but his lack of immediate
response to it did.
“Sorry. I shouldn’t have sprung that on you. Not so soon after….”
Bertrin cleared his throat. “We’ll talk later.”
Jax nodded. Watching his nephew descend the stairs, he thought
of course it should be okay for Bertrin to sell this place. The upkeep costs
and property tax were too much for someone starting out in life. He moved
to return downstairs too but hesitated when he slipped into nostalgia again.
There was Adam’s old room, which looked to be a study now, and the
bathroom they shared. There was their parents’ room, which Adam and
Carlene had claimed as their own. And there was the closet where the
board games and sports equipment were stored when he and Adam were
growing up.
He opened the closet door. No sports equipment but the games
were still there—Pirate and Traveler, Monopoly, Clue, Life, Candy Land,
Chutes and Ladders. Also crammed in this space were clear, plastic bins
filled with arts and crafts supplies—ribbons, glitter, glue sticks, beads,
buttons. Additions from Carlene, Jax surmised. All these years and he
didn’t know much about his brother’s wife.
His heart heavy, he closed the closet door and went downstairs.
He lingered as guests left. Soon it was just him, Bertrin, and Dolores.
“We’re engaged, by the way,” Bertrin said as he took a seat next
to Dolores on the couch.
“I didn’t know,” Jax said. “Congratulations.”
“We were planning to send out announcements after we told
Adam and Carlene….” Dolores looked at her lap. “Anyway, you’re the
first to know.”
“We should celebrate,” Jax said. “That’s what your parents would
have wanted.”
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ETHAN ALTSHUL
A HARVEST MOON
LEE LANDAU
I MISS YOU, ELLEN
-those days
DANIEL A RABUZZI
HIDDEN IN PLAIN SIGHT
“Human anatomy still has a few surprises in store for us: researchers have
discovered a previously overlooked section of our jaw muscles and described
this layer in detail for the first time.” December 20, 2021, in ScienceDaily.
M A PHILLIPS
GROSGRAIN TAFFETA
him. What he didn’t know was she had a nice little business going making
beautiful dresses for ladies from grosgrain taffeta, and when her mind was
uneasy, she would go out twirling under a bloodshot moon.
As her son grew, he knew what his mother knew: that the
minister’s son was the killer who had taken his father. Though his mother
did not need to say so, it was understood he would be the one to avenge
his father.
And when he got there, no one knew who he was, so he could
mingle in the town as a stranger. He went to the church where the
minister’s son was now minister, as his father had finally passed away.
The patient son, vengeance warming his heart, befriended the new
minister, wanted to be sure, wanted a confession.
So late one night, at the point of a pistol, he brought the man to an
isolated spot, and revealed who he was, said he would spare the man’s life
if he would confess what he had done.
Crying, trembling in terror, the minister said he was so sorry, he
had lost his head that terrible night, would give anything to be able to go
back, have a second chance.
So the young man left him there, went back home, told his mother
what he had done. She assumed he had shot the man dead.
And, as the years passed, he thought maybe he had.
When the old woman died, he cleaned out her room, gave all the
material to a young seamstress who had recently moved into town.
The young woman had come here to start a new life, to escape the
shame that had befallen her family when her father lost his life at the Little
Bighorn.
She opened her shop right there on Main Street, and soon her
reputation for making beautiful dresses spread throughout the region. Even
the prostitutes who had rooms above the saloon wanted to look their best.
Young men wanted to make her a wife, but she couldn’t get her father out
of her mind, her father who had blood on his hands. She was afraid for
what part of him might be in her.
When she had free time, she rode her pretty mare out into the
surrounding hills. She hoped to befriend some Cheyenne, show she was
ashamed of what people such as her father had done.
Finally one day, as cold winter was setting in, she came upon a
raggedy little camp of raggedy people. She gave these natives what little
food she had brought with her, and with the bit of their language she knew,
told them she was so sorry—for everything. She told them she didn’t
blame them for what some of them had done to her father, confessed that
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as a child she had even thought of doing something similar to that. She
knew they understood little of what she was saying, but still it felt so good
to be getting this off her chest.
And she returned the next day, with a wagon of supplies; but two
men from town suspicious of what she was up to followed her there, saw
everything, hidden up in the hills. They returned to the town without
revealing themselves to her, and waited for her to return.
They were the cattle baron’s only sons, raised to believe the world
more or less belongs to them. Simon, two years older than his brother,
Caleb, thought to ingratiate himself with the pretty seamstress by offering
to help her now, showing his heart is big, showing he feels sorry for these
poor people who lost everything. The town never suspected his father had
a heart, knew he believed the natives were inferior, so were getting what
God knew was right for them. But Simon, the older son, had his eye on the
seamstress, was willing to stretch the limits of his upbringing, at least in
her eyes.
So he entered her shop, told her he knew what she had done, and
now wanted to help her help those people.
Money was no problem for him, so Simon loaded his wagon with
supplies, and accompanied the seamstress, the following week, back out
to where the poor natives were camping. His brother Caleb didn’t at first
know what his elder brother was up to, but discovered soon enough.
Though Simon did not know, Caleb too dreamed of nothing but the pretty
seamstress with the gentle ways.
So the next day Caleb went out alone to see the natives, brought
them cases of new rifles, told them they had to fight or they would lose
everything forever and ever, told them he was their friend, wanted to try
to help make this right. He told them the first thing they would do,
together, was burn down his father’s house.
Most of the Cheyenne knew such a thing would be suicide, but
there were a few—just enough—who knew for sure they had nothing more
to lose.
So when the father and the older brother, Simon, were killed,
Caleb came into full possession of the ranch, called in the U.S. Cavalry,
who massacred the remaining Cheyenne.
So Caleb proposed marriage to the pretty seamstress.
But she was nobody’s fool, couldn’t help seeing what was going
on, so consented to the marriage after she had figured out a plan.
And when her husband, Caleb, disappeared, a few months after
the wedding ceremony, the whole town suspected what had happened; but
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the young lady was a powerful woman now. The ranch was big, but in that
large house she kept a room upstairs where she continued her seamstress
work. Women from all the surrounding region came out to be fitted.
One girl, who lost her parents to consumption, went out to the
ranch, offered to work there as a maid.
The seamstress, Lilith, took her in, began teaching her to sew. And
the girl showed such talent that before very long she surpassed her teacher,
and took over filling all the orders for the dresses. Lilith lost track of time,
riding her mare all through the wilderness.
Years passed, and the girl grew into a fine young lady. The town
came to think of her as Lilith’s daughter. And when Lilith went out riding,
and didn’t come back, and the ensuing search for months turned up no sign
of her, she was at last assumed to be dead, so her will was opened, and no
one was very surprised she left the young lady everything.
And though the girl could have stopped working as a seamstress,
she wanted to continue with that. Her dresses were the rage all around.
She finally married, had a daughter of her own, so the legacy could
be passed on. Then she had a son as well, and he had such gentle hands,
he was the one who finally took over all the seamstress work. Some men
made fun of him, calling him a seamstress, when they knew he called
himself a tailor. But the young man did his best to laugh it off, and did
such fine work everything more or less turned out to be alright.
Some in town suspected he preferred men, but in time he married
and produced a daughter, who was eager and had a natural talent for the
intricate seamstress work.
And she was the one with true ambition, wanting to turn this into
something big. So she visited San Francisco, and before long set up a shop
there that employed a dozen women. Soon she was celebrated in fashion
magazines, and church authorities helped with sales by claiming her
dresses were indecent, showed too much of these women. When asked
about this in an interview, she said women must use what power they have.
She said the fashion industry is a tool for making women more powerful.
And the nightclubs celebrated, twirling their power under the
bloodshot moon.
Till that terrible night the Earth went insane, shaking, and it all
came crashing down.
The young woman was lucky she survived. But her shop was
entirely gone. Everything she had worked for was buried.
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AL MAGINNES
HOW SALVATION WORKED
CAMERON MORSE
MARVEL
standing in
without shattering the moment
it is so delicate
precarious
with the leaf light of late morning
flashing
on the desk corner and my son's
Marvel
coloring book.
PEGGY TROJAN: Writers of prose and poetry will miss the polished
issues of Evening Street Review. Reading Issue 38 is a visual example
of the work that goes into producing a volume of 300 plus pages. I
enjoyed editing poems for the Review years ago. I know from personal
experience how much time and attention is given to each submission.
Compliments to all the staff! https://eveningstreetpress.com/book-
author/peggy-trojan/
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STEPHANIE KEEP
EMPTY CUP FULL
BLINDS
JO-ANNE CAPPELUTI
IF THERE BE ANY PRAISE…IN MEMORY OF AMERICAN,
MIDDLE CLASS
for my four brothers and me a dream of college one day, a dream that
began at age six for me, perched in an orange tree every day after school
reading my Puffin Book of Verse. My favorite was Keats’ praise to a
nightingale—a bird like its song that knows immortal means not meant
for death—which according to two of my brothers and me—the middle
three—meant earning PhDs and teaching at universities—my brothers
back east
(cont)
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and me out west and retired now, living with hubby in a house 100 years
old with add-ons from the 70s, on a street with two McMansions, one at
each end, one expanded from a house built in 1980 and one built from
scratch in 2016—along with a house rebuilt six times, only recently
occupied—and a long row on one side of lower-income, one-bedroom
rentals, overflowing with growing families, and an endless array of
Mercedes-Benz and SUVs, and once in a while faded RVs with out-of-
state plates
BECCA BAISCH
PRETTY KNIVES
A few days later, the afternoon was bright and hot with stark blue
skies. The ten-minute drive brought me to a business district, and I parked
my red ’87 Cavalier convertible. The car that my father, who’d worked as
a kid on his family’s salvage yard, gifted me, a not-yet-licensed fifteen-
year-old, for Christmas and said I could drive it if I promised to follow the
speed limit and not tell my mother. My mother, had she known this
enigmatic job interview was located at a nondescript office warehouse,
may have retracted her “doesn’t hurt to check it out.” She was the type to
lose sleep over irrational kidnapping fears.
I was dressed in khakis and a pressed button-down. My sun-kissed
blonde curls wilted under the heat and nerves. Sweat budded and snaked
along my ribcage. Inside the building, the harsh air conditioning, sterile
gray carpet, and white windowless walls swallowed me. I followed the
signs for Vector Marketing and entered a room with rows of fold-out
chairs, a setup not unlike the church fellowship hall that held my past piano
recitals. A woman greeted me, and there was a man next to a podium in
the front. He was short but held himself with pulled-back shoulders and an
erect head as if working to appear taller, flexing his wrist as if to show off
his shiny watch. His buzzed hair was gray, surely a premature gray
because his white face, with frameless round glasses, looked young.
Maybe thirties. The room filled with other young adults, each with that
brief flash of panic on their face that comes with choosing a seat amongst
a sea of strangers. I focused on the solo wall decoration: a framed poster
with the same logo on my letter, an upside-down pyramid with three blue
arrows shooting off the sides.
The man introduced himself as Kevin, and he had a voice to match
his arrogant posture. As he spoke, I didn’t hear his words as much as I felt
them. Words like important, successful, more money, and pay for college.
College? My parents had paid for it. I was spoiled in that way, but not
without the guilt and gratitude birthed from the constant knowledge it was
their ultimate dream to pay for their children’s college. Still, that didn’t
prevent me from wasting money on Bath & Body Works lotions or fancy
dresses one size too small.
But—but—Kevin emphasized this job was meant for a select few.
I pictured Kevin as a Marine and heard echoes of those commercials I grew
up watching, The Few. The Proud …. My back straightened. I was
capricious, sure, but also competitive as hell and addicted to praise, and I
crumbled under disapproval. That previous summer, after graduating high
school, I’d accepted an interview for a lifeguard position at the nearby
country club. I’d forgotten my commitment to read a Bible passage at my
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cousin’s wedding in North Dakota that same day. When I flippantly told
my father I could skip the wedding, assured someone could easily replace
me, he’d sneered with a puce face, and bellowed, “Look at you! Are you
proud of what you’ve become? Someone who shirks responsibility? What
are you doing with your life?” I hadn’t wanted to drive six hours to attend
the provincial wedding. Maybe that explained the buried commitment, but
my father’s stabbing words had scarred me despite his later, groveling
apologies.
With the rapt attention of one consumed by a hellfire and
brimstone sermon, I listened to Kevin’s finale; he left no opportunity for
questions. “All of you will take a short test, and as we come around and
read your answers, a few of you will be asked privately to return this
evening for further training and instructions.” A hush fell, and I circled my
eyes, sizing up the competitors.
The questions on the half-sheet of paper were standard. What
made me special, what were my strengths? I attacked them in the same
manner I did my Blue Book Essay Finals the past year in college. I’ve
never considered myself smart, more like a creative bull-shitter. Especially
when I could write down all that B.S.
I was one of the last persons chosen, probably because of my
spurious and copious writing. The same woman that first welcomed me
tapped my shoulder, and I accompanied her to a private cubicle. She said,
“You would make an excellent addition to our team. Would you be willing
to return tonight for orientation?”
Would I?
Hours later I did so, buzzing from the spell Kevin had cast. I
pictured myself doing administrative work. Vector. I would wear oxford
shirts and pencil skirts, a pair of classy heels and pearls, and sit at a desk
answering phones: “Vector Marketing, this is Becca speaking, how may I
direct your call…?”
The first arrow of doubt pierced me as the room filled with the
same amount of people it did during the selection process—to determine
who was special. Kevin shed his suit coat, rolled his white dress shirt
sleeves, and congratulated us, reiterating the promises of this job: flexible
hours, independence, and lots of money. I was working twelve-hour days
as a lifeguard and swim instructor at the country club. The money was
good. What wasn’t were the entitled pubescent boys who thought it funny
to keep swimming after we’d cleared the pool for thunderstorms, and when
I told one to pick up his trash, he’d said, “Isn’t that your job?”
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more empathy for any editor who has to make these decisions. I thank
Barbara Bergmann for her trust, and confidence, in my abilities, to serve
the Evening Street Press. https://eveningstreetpress.com/?s=L+D+Zane
MARK JACKLEY
PAUL SINEGAL
thought of you when I saw
the yearling’s antlers zip
across a country graveyard-
looking circle of stumps,
fluid as your licks on Bogalusa Boogie, dancing
into consciousness
one late October morning,
cold sun cracking through
the bummer clouds, a kid
showing me what it means
to miss New Orleans
Jackley
RICHARD LEVINE
ALBUQUERQUE
ALICE G WALDERT
ANNUAL CHILDCARE VISIT
HUNTINGTON STREET
ELLEN GOLDSMITH
MID-MARCH RAIN
I go back in time
to my grandmother’s kitchen table
in Brooklyn, bite into her challah,
sip my coffee-milk, listen
to the Yiddish I don’t understand.
Again and again, The Ukraine, The Ukraine.
What’s the Ukraine? I ask my mother.
KEVIN BROWN
THE SWEETEST SCENT
My father died of heart failure the same Chinese New Year girls
began to draw my eye instead of ire. I wasn’t present for his death but
figured it even since he wasn’t present for my life.
We all lived in Kowloon, but we no longer lived together, though
mom claimed that the case even when we did. When he roamed within the
same walls instead of a few kilometers away, he worked for people who
only spoke to him in snaps. One snap for tea. Three to open the door, five
to get out and close it behind him. He never looked at his superiors because
his eyes were always closed as he smiled and bowed until they passed.
They never looked at him because they were superior.
He smiled so much at work his face molded into a frown at home.
He never talked to us when he spoke aloud, and never spoke aloud when
he talked to us. Orders were given with grunts and snaps. If we ever caught
his eye, we had gotten in his way.
Nights, he’d drink bottles of baijiu, then snap his fingers for his
jacket. Slam furniture, slam doors as he left amidst my mother’s pleas to
not. He’d return the next morning smelling nothing like her fragrance and
carrying a bottle of Dynasty XO a few sips shy of dry. Mother would weep
in pain, then rage as she’d scream that he’s nothing but a disgraceful
eunuch. I always tried to look away before she hit the wall, and I always
failed to plug my ears before she hit the tile. Then all was silence and sobs
as we waited for his snore.
The end began with what I didn’t know was his way of bonding.
Drunk, he told me the proudest moment of his life was as a boy he’d
smelled Bruce Lee in person. He’d had the opportunity to shake his hand,
but when the star approached, he could only smile and bow, his eyes
clenched in what would be his greatest ability. “The scent of cologne was
so strong,” he said, eyes closed to stanch the welling. “It was the smell of
a great man.”
Then he left without a grunt or snap and never returned. It took
forever to clear his stench from our home and hearts.
The last time I saw him alive was a Sunday morning Mom and I
had yum tsa in Tsim Sha Tsui. Afterward, we walked the Avenue of Stars,
and I saw him standing in the shadow of Bruce Lee’s statue. Staring out at
the junks crossing Victoria Harbor, the South China Sea like dragon scales
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in the chop. I yelled his name several times, but he closed his eyes and
lowered his head, then faced the statue and walked away.
Heart failure was listed as the COD my mother said, because
“failure” was insufficient on a death certificate. At his wake, a family
wearing white cried. Mom and I wore red and did not.
In Chinese tradition, if a son is not present at his father’s death, he
must crawl toward the coffin wailing for penance. With Taoist chants
around me, I lowered to palms and kneecaps and crawled toward the man
who’d always ran away from me. Every millimeter neared left more of
him behind. Clenching my eyes, I wept with laughter at the proudest
moment of my life. The scent of formaldehyde was so strong. It was the
smell of a failed man.
JOAN E BAUER
ALCATRAZ
We shared an adventure.
Eighth grade field trip: museum first, then Alcatraz.
Another teacher, Tom, made arrangements.
I asked Tom again & again:
Could you please
give me the schedule, departure times?
FRANCINE WITTE
THE WORLD IS FINISHED
RUBY HAWKINS
TRUTH
Honey, Sister is about the queerest cuss you will ever see. Now I ain’t
saying there ain’t plenty
more out there but they are not in our neck of the woods. And child, I am
so glad. I couldn’t stand
another one like Sister. Take this morning, sister come down here
banging on my door. I thought
sure as hell she was going to break the dad-blamed thing down. And I
wouldn’t want Roy coming
home after a hard day’s work and find the door off the hinges. He would
cut as many didos as
Sister.
Well, Sister had her hoe in her hand and she was ready for bear. Get your
tail end out here Sister,
she said. We’ve got to get your garden in the ground. Here mine is
already sprouting and you
ain’t got seed one in the ground. I’m plum ashamed for the neighbors to
come by this house and
see your garden patch is covered up in all them old weeds.
Well, they wouldn’t much I could say about that. I’ve been aiming to get
out there and chap all
them weeds down and get my saved seeds out, but Child I just ain’t had
time, and I told Sister so.
But would Sister listen to a word I had to say? No child, that ain’t
Sister’s nature. She glared at
me and said, Yes Sister I know how busy you’ve been. Setting in there at
that computer writing
your foolish articles. You could’ve had your garden out and I see you let
your compost bed dry
plum up to smithereens. Now Roy will have to go buy fertilizer because
of having a lazy wife on
his hands. I feel right sorry for Roy.
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You ought not to waste your time like you do. What are you gonna do
with the few pennies you
make writing that trash. You don’t get enough to buy you a coca cola.
You are the silliest thing I
ever seen. I don’t know why Roy don’t pick up that computer and fling it
down the side of the
mountain. And you know every word l’m saying is the pure-d truth. Why
you could find all kinds of
useful things to do. You’ve got all that material that you’ve been buying
from the thrift store and I
know for a fact that Aunt Almer brought you down a whole tow sack full
of real pretty material.
You could be making quilts or clothes for them kids of yours. It wouldn’t
hurt you to make me a
new dress, seeing as how I’ve been out working while you set on your
lazy butt. Sister give me a
good chewing out and I thought for awhile she was gonna slap me
halfway to breakfast. It ain’t
past Sister to do that very thing. What could I say? I couldn’t think of
one thing to take up for
myself.
Sometimes you just have to keep your mouth shut even if you got
something stuck in your craw.
But to make a long story short, I did go get my garden hoe and Sister
helped me clear out last
Year’s weeds, and I got started planting my garden. I wouldn’t let my
Sister know for the world,
and don’t y’all dare tell her, but that was the very thing I was waiting on.
I knowed she couldn’t
stand staring at that weed patch for long. Sister can get mean and onery,
but that girl can work.
And I ain’t too proud to let Sister help me. Maybe next fall she’ll get to
thinking about all that pretty
material just laying there and we’ll start making us a quilt.
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Children, Christmas is over and I’m glad. You might think I’m just an
old curmudgeon for saying
such, but you don’t have to put up with Sister. I’m so tard I can’t hardly
drag one foot in front of
tother. Me and Sister had to get ready for the whole blooming family.
Now that wouldn’t be so bad
if our family wasn’t as touchous as a nest of hornets.
Guthrie and Roy have tried their best to stay out of the way. I feel kinda
sorry for them old boys
for having to put up with me and sister and all the family. But they ain’t
always a picnic either and
we still put up with their foolishness. I tell Roy, Roy I say, there ain’t no
quicker way to bring the
devil to your door than begrudging your kin folk.
Sister give him one of them old go to hell looks and said, Brother if they
ain’t enough food here,
you can take them all over to your house and feed them. That shut
Brother up putty quick. He
wasn’t about to take nobody to his house. But Brother is a good old boy.
He does like to cut his
monkey shines and it tickles the fire out of him to needle Sister.
(cont)
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Uncle Buford and Aunt Lily brung a whole passel of their grandkids.
Sister told me to set up a
couple of folding tables on the porch for all the kids. She wasn’t about to
have them around the
main table, and honey I was glad. I did want to get a plate of food
myself. I was gettin hungry. We
was so busy getting everything ready I hadn’t had time to grab a bite. My
stomach was grumbling
something terrible.
Uncle Bud and Aunt Fannie was giving everybody the evil eye. They are
persnickety. You do
have to be careful what you say when they are around. They belong to
the Holiness church and
honey, you can’t hardly open your mouth without them calling you
down. Sometimes they make
me so mad I could spit
Sister has to hide all her magazines and turn the TV to the wall or they
will be giving her a
lecture. 0f course they give us all a lecture anyway. They are afraid we
are all going to hell in a
hand basket Uncle Bud told me he was afraid I wasn’t going to heaven
with him. I patted the
pore old teller on the back and told him not to worry, that I was going the
same place he did.
Now Brother’s kids are just like mine and Sister’s but you’d never guess
it at Christmas. Brother
says theirs more ways than one to skin a cat I think he threatens to take
all their Santa Claus
back if they cut any didoes. Brother is as wise as a tree full of owls, I’ll
give him that. Sometimes
he can’t help but knock the wind out of Sister’s sails and, honey, it just
makes my day. Sister’s
always in need of being taken down a peg or two.
Hawkins
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VICTOR PEARN
GREEN ONIONS
RON TORRENCE
LOVE IN THE AFTERNOON
Jessica ran her fingers along the graceful curve of the antique
rocker that had caught her eye soon after she’d entered the store. She
looked up to see husband, Jonathan, lean over to study a smoking stand.
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Jessica shook her head with a wry frown. It wasn’t the smoking that
attracted his attention, that’s for sure, but the sherry glass coasters on top.
At fifty, his auburn hair was beginning to show pronounced strands of
gray, but the puffiness of his cheeks and around the eyes aged him much
more, as well as pointing to the problem if you knew what to look for,
which, sadly, she’d learned only too well.
She returned to the rocker. It was like the chair that her ninety-
five-year-old grandmother sat in the last time they’d talked years ago.
“Grandma, the doctor said you need to eat more so you can get
your strength back.”
Grandma had rested her gray head against the cushion of her old
rocker.
“No,” she said. “My long journey has come to its end.”
Her answer had floated off into the silence of her nursing home
room. Grandma’s favorite oriental rug and the rocker had been brought
there. Pictures selected from a lifetime were arrayed on the dresser of an
otherwise institutional setting, though her eyesight was so bad she couldn’t
see them. At the center was the fiftieth wedding anniversary photo of
Grandma and Grandpa standing together.
A few weeks after that visit, Grandma died quietly in her sleep.
Jessica studied the handmade construction of the chair. The price
tag seemed reasonable for such a nice piece, but the thought of owning it
made her want to throw up.
A sudden movement by Jonathan pulled her attention from the
chair. He’d looked up from the smoking stand to stare out the front
window. Without further hesitation he headed for the door. Jessica quickly
joined him on the porch to see him gaze intently at a tavern across the two-
lane country road.
He licked his lips.
“Think I’ll repair to the tavern for a little refresher.”
“Must you?” Jessica pleaded—once again—with a glance at her
watch. “It’s only two o’clock….”
“You know how such a warm day dries the throat. A cold frosty
will elevate the spirits,” he said, patting the gourd that extended generously
over his belt. “No chance,” he began with a smile that quickly faded to a
clouded frown, “you’d join me.” His voice trailed off.
“You know better than that.”
He nodded glumly.
“Please don’t do this.”
Jennifer tried to hold him back by the arm. He gently patted her
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Jessica put her hands to her ears. No avail, no avail. Year after
year to no avail! Shushing the voices for the moment, she continued to the
last house on the lane, surely the oldest in the village and long since
abandoned. The front suggested a once cheerful face now overgrown with
weeds and vines. The rest of the house had crumbled, the top floor long
since collapsed, leaving only a chimney still standing tall.
She paused in front of the old house to look down the lane, which
trailed off into the fields toward a farmhouse just before rounding a distant
bend. Jessica stood mesmerized by the solitude in front of her. Like these
old houses, like a clock in the antique store that had ceased to tick, round
and round her life had gone. A carousel with the calliope silenced, always
returning to the same spot.
Fifty in two days, was the substance of her life simply decay?
So different than the path she’d set out to pursue. From an early
age she’d been an avid reader. People began calling her “that serious girl.”
In high school she wore round-framed glasses and hung out with fellow
brainy kids. Albert Camus was a topic then, and she fell in love with the
man and his philosophy. She envisioned herself sitting in a Paris café,
beret at a sexy angle, discussing rebellion over wine and cigarettes.
“A woman philosopher?” Her mother’s face had actually
blanched. Father simply sniffed disdainfully as he turned a page in the
financial news, as much attention as he would ever give her. But she was
too determined to let their absence of support stop her, and off she went to
college, ever the dreamer Aunt Anne had so admired.
It was only after years of therapy that she understood her father’s
indifference. He simply didn’t want her. He’d wanted a son to follow his
footsteps into the family law firm. A daughter was of no use to him. A
woman attorney was unthinkable.
Jessica turned to walk back toward the main road, only to stop again.
She knew full well what knocked her off the gender-bending
pursuit of a professorship in philosophy. It came in the form of a smooth-
talking, unbelievably good-looking faux intellectual named Pete, who
swept her into a dreamscape of artists, actors, and musicians that only a
big university could provide. And six months of all the sex and passion a
romantic heart could want, replete with talk of, yes, the Paris cafés and
writing of novels (her) and composing of songs (Pete).
Of course Pete never wanted to use condoms. Love would hold
them together no matter what. So when the inevitable happened not a
month before graduation, he simply disappeared. There she was barefoot
and pregnant, so to speak, and in a deep, dark hole of guilt and degradation
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that lasted for years. A couple of good friends took charge of her. They
arranged an abortion, which only made the self-denigrating hole darker
and deeper, and provided the moral support to keep her from hurting
herself. She shucked her dreams of Camus and philosophy, as if it was the
treacherous path that had led her too far away from where she was
“supposed” to be.
Enter Jonathan and his sweet smile that had so charmed her when
they were young college graduates. He seemed to open a doorway to
regain a happier life. His jovial personality and good looks enabled him to
be a very successful salesman, which he still was.
And what did she do instead? Ultimately managed a small
insurance office! Settled for something mediocre to fill up the time. But
her mind never shut off. She never stopped reading voraciously.
Philosophy of course, but science, too, and literature. Not that anybody in
their social crowd ever had a philosophical thought. To them science
meant hi-tech business where you could make a real bundle.
And as Jonathon was out drinking more and more, and going to
sleep earlier and earlier, she read more and more. Jessica pursed her lips,
realizing that without living people to talk to, her reading had enabled her
to converse with some of humankind’s greatest minds instead. Looking at
it that way, her life hadn’t been such a merry-go-round after all.
Jessica approached the tavern to be greeted with the all-too-
familiar sight of Jonathan, blinking in the brilliant sunlight. Pudgy as she
was slender, he tripped down the steps toward her.
“What can I buy you?” he slurred with that sweet smile once again.
But that sweet smile now seemed more like the façade of the old
house she’d just stood in front of. Only a trace of the style and grace of
years ago and now fronting an inner life of decay and ever-increasing ruin.
Bathed in the afternoon light, she stood on the curb of this old town, staring
at Jonathan. The years of struggle and despair fighting his alcoholism rose
up so intensely she thought she’d vomit. Instead she continued to stare at
him, finally absorbing the entirety of what he’d become.
Jonathan’s smile faded as he sensed, this time, she wouldn’t
respond to his offer.
“How about that rocker? I noticed you were fascinated with that
old rocker.…” His voice trailed into the nauseating wheedle he used when
trying to defuse the slightest sense of anything wrong with their life
together. If she would just smile, everything would be all right.
Jessica’s heart leaped right into her throat at the vision of her gray
head leaning back in the rocker, as if he’d just offered her a coffin to sit in
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YAHYA AL-DEEN
CAME TO MY SENSES
Sometimes I crave
fear’s skin-crawl—something real
is about to happen. The thrill
ride and me with my phobia
of falling,
roller
coaster
with its rush.
HEATHER KENEALY
JANUARY SIXTH
I freeze the frame and can just make out his worn-down
brown shoe, untied. This patchy-bearded man-child wears
an open, surprised expression and I am surprised right back,
struck by his humanity, a notion I’d rather not regard.
CHARLENE LANGFUR
MAKING A GO OF IT
STANTON YEAKLEY
WATCHING BIRD
Eldon pumped the pedals of his bicycle, his coat puffing at his
back as if to hide burgeoning gargoyle wings. He wove in and out of light
hung crooked by the trees. Decades ago, Eldon would have made this ride
alongside screaming children, each racing home to beat the dark. Now they
cowered behind locked doors and screens, tucked into cul-de-sacs like
bedsheets.
After a few blocks, Eldon abandoned the neighborhoods and
turned left on Arthur Lindsey Lane. Steering off the road, he pedaled
slowly through a grove of cedars until he came to the clearing. When he
reached it, Eldon eased his aching legs off the bike and stood in silence.
The trees around him arced and contorted in the wind. The stars were
brighter outside the city, the quiet deeper. Only here, in the emptiness,
could he feel her—see her if he waited long enough. He stared upward and
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felt his body sway with the breeze. For a long time he waited. Then
something rustled in the underbrush.
Ahead in the grass was a shapeless creature. Shallow chinks of
light flickered from its eyes and Eldon heard the low rumble of a growl.
His heart beat slowly. He looked around for her, but she did not come.
Eldon stepped forward with his hands out.
_________
The next day, he woke to the creaking stop-and-release of the bus
picking up the Hemenez children outside the trailer park. He lay in bed as
light eased itself into his room. He fought the urge to remain asleep,
surrendering himself to dreams. Reluctantly, he rose and microwaved
yesterday’s coffee, glancing at a week-old paper. The headlines meant
little to him—they might as well have been dispatches from another
country—but the people were filled with so much life, in color there on
the front page. They cut ribbons and scored touchdowns and got married.
Theirs was such a tight-knit community. They all looked familiar even if
none of them knew Eldon’s name.
That morning, at city hall, he spent most of his time collecting
trash in beige offices. Occasionally, he would nod to faces that had become
familiar to him over the years, but he mostly kept to himself. By the time
he reached Public Relations on the third floor, a familiar inertia had settled
in Eldon’s bones, and he was surprised when Glenn Roberts, the principal
of Fairland High, rushed past him and slipped inside Sherry Thompson’s
office.
Curious, Eldon shuffled to an empty cubicle nearby and bent his
head to listen as the two spoke behind Mrs. Thompson’s half-closed door.
Their whispers were frantic.
“The boy, Dylan Lark, hasn’t been to school in four days,” Mr.
Roberts said. “Not since Monday.”
“And the girl?” Mrs. Thompson asked.
“She was absent for two days but came back yesterday. She’s
saying something happened to him.”
“What’s she saying happened?”
“She’s saying someone took him. Something ….” Mr. Roberts’s
voice wavered. “Look, I don’t know, Sherry. This is why I’m talking to
you. So we can get out in front of this. Connie Lark goes to my church,
and she’s been absolutely hysterical. It’s going to be a citywide issue after
today.”
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remembered how cold it was in his father’s car as he and Regina James sat
with what felt like miles between them, too scared at first to use each
other’s bodies for warmth. He felt so naked and vulnerable back then, even
though he nearly laughed thinking about it now.
Eldon watched from behind a mop as students filtered through the
high school hallways and he lingered on those hesitant, rapturous nights.
He remembered the smell of Regina’s shampoo and how his hair caught
in her earring when they finally kissed. He remembered ducking beneath
the window every time they heard a car and he remembered the fear and
how that fear melted with the first touch of skin. He thought of those nights
and he thought of another, just a year later, when his daughter was born.
Innocence lost for innocence gained. Seemed like a fair trade at the time.
_________
That evening, the sheriff’s department organized a group to scour
the hills stretching from Sandusky Road to Steve Cowen’s land. Eldon saw
them as he rode his bike home. In the cold, their lights blinked like
grounded stars.
As the days ticked by without any sign of the boy, Eldon watched
as Mr. Roberts rounded up teachers at five o’clock, asking them to join the
expanding search parties. Eldon would wave a consoling goodbye to the
groups as they piled into their sagging vehicles. He pitied their hopeless
efforts. He really did. But he had learned a long time ago that once a child
was lost, they were lost.
Of course, there had been no search for his daughter.
Probably because her disappearance lacked much mystery. A few
men had pulled her waterlogged body into a boat as Eldon and Regina
watched from the shore. There had been no need to organize search parties
or put her face on milk cartons. Her death was absolute, leaving little room
for argument.
Maybe what drove these searchers, Eldon thought, as they sank
into the night looking for Dylan Lark, was that there remained hope they
could find the boy. Shirtless with black, frostbitten toes. But alive
nonetheless.
_________
Eldon didn’t hear about the next disappearance until over a week
later. He was lingering around a Fairland High common area with a mop
and a bucket when the school secretary told Dana Holder that her mother
was gone.
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Dana was silent at first, her eyes hovering in the middle distance.
Then she let out a bobcat scream and crumpled to the ground as if someone
had sliced the flesh behind her knees.
Mimi Holder always told folks in town that she worked in real
estate, but really she sold Tupperware. She traveled house-to-house in a
pink car covered in stickers that said things like, Jesus Drank Wine. No
one wanted her to pull up in their covered drive, yet when the news of her
disappearance spread, people mourned as if they had lost a family member.
Another one of their own gone—ripped from the cresting peak of her life.
Unlike Dylan Lark, however, Mimi hadn’t been dragged from her car in
the dead of night. She had been taken from her own home, plucked from
the one space she thought was safe.
Mark Roy Lee had reported her missing. He never explained what
he was doing there. He could only describe the assailant: small and wiry,
something that could slither through your air vents and slip its hands
between your bedsheets. Something that could wriggle between the cracks
of this world and snatch you where you ate or where you lay your head to
sleep.
Nowhere was safe, Mark repeated like a mantra. Nowhere.
_________
Eldon wondered about the disappearances as he pedaled toward
the trailer park after work. Fairland’s tree line was a modest bouquet of
brown, green, and rust red, but the colors were mostly drowned in the blue
sky. As he worried about who might vanish next, he felt his bike lurch
forward with a deflating rush of air. Steadying himself, he got off the
bicycle and stooped over. A roofing nail was stuck in his front tire.
“Damn,” he whispered.
Although he wasn’t close enough to walk home, he knew someone
on this side of town who might have a tire he could jerry-rig to his wheel.
Lifting the front of the frame, he guided his bike down the uneven
sidewalk, passing through a world of caged storefronts and weeds that
grew through gas pumps like silent taunts.
It was dark by the time Eldon reached Geno Rodriguez’s pawn
shop. The shop bell rang as he stepped into the green-lit room. Inside, the
store held every manner of trinket and treasure. False jewels, welding
helmets, and firearms of every kind and caliber spilled over onto folding
tables set out in makeshift aisles. A collection of tires and tubes lined the
far wall and Eldon nodded to Geno as he made his way to the back. Geno
rose from his spot at the cash register and limped over.
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The two had known each other for a long time now—since before
Eldon’s daughter died and well before Regina left him. Even Geno was
married back then. Now they were both old men. Sporting a faded flannel
and paint-stained jeans, Geno’s entire person seemed to collect as much
dust as his trinkets.
“What are you looking for?” Geno asked. “The bike bust a tire
again?”
“Yeah,” Eldon replied, “ran over a nail on Fourth Street. You have
the same size tire I got from you last time? I just need something that can
get me back home.”
Geno nodded. “Think I got something in the back, let me go get
it.” He reappeared a minute later with a tire and an old inner tube.
“That looks a lot like the one that busted on me last time,” Eldon
said.
“”Cause it is,” Geno replied, eyes wrinkling under his glasses. “I
patched it though. Should be fine.”
Eldon nodded. “Well, I’m calling you to come get me when it
starts running flat halfway home.”
Geno laughed. “Shit, I know you ain’t got a cellphone. You ain’t
calling anybody.” Geno had a mild lisp and some of his more serpentine
consonants slipped out with pillowy softness.
Eldon shrugged and headed for the door before turning back to
Geno.
“You know about that boy going missing, right?” Eldon asked.
“Well, I just heard about a new one today. Might want to tell Carrie Anne
to be careful when she’s walking home. Sounds like people are getting
snatched.”
Geno shook his head ruefully. Carrie Anne was his youngest
granddaughter and he’d be damned if anybody snatched her up.
“Goddamn,” he said. “Only one I heard about was the boy trying
to park over on Lover’s Lane. Didn’t hear about any others.’Course, I
don’t get a paper here anymore and no one comes in, so don’t know how
I would’ve.”
“I’ve heard it around the school and city hall is all,” Eldon said.
“No one really knows who’s doing it, so just tell her to be careful.”
“I will,” Geno replied. “Hell, I’ll follow her around with a baseball
bat if I have to.” He adjusted his glasses. “I’m sure they wouldn’t find
Carrie Anne if she got snatched though. Remember my grand-baby,
Miracle? You know how she was missing and the sheriff and police didn’t
do shit about it?”
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“I remember she was with her daddy those four weeks and that her
momma knew it too.”
Geno shrugged and pointed at Eldon. “Maybe so. But remember
your little girl? Didn’t see the town getting all up in arms about her.”
Eldon nodded. His daughter had died on a late September
afternoon. She was swimming in a lake surrounded by a gentle
outcropping of rocks and small pines while Eldon relaxed on the shore. He
had been so relaxed, in fact, that instead of watching her, he drank six
beers and fell asleep, only waking when he heard the sound of distant
thunderclouds rolling in hot and electric from the south. His daughter had
drowned in the interim.
“She wasn’t missing,” Eldon said. “We knew right where she
was.”
“Maybe so,” Geno replied, “But all of them were gone. I don’t see
much of a difference in that.”
_________
When the disappearances continued that November, it became
clear to the citizens of Fairland that there was a monster prowling their
streets.
Michael Adly disappeared walking back from Homecoming while
his twin brother, Malcolm, drunkenly pissed in the bushes. Malcolm said
he saw something carrying Michael over its shoulder and, though he
couldn’t be sure, he swore it was a man with the head of a fox.
Days later, Cynthia Prothro was taken in broad daylight while
running south of Fairland High. She had been training for her second
marathon. No one saw Cynthia’s abduction, but Karen Hackbush,
treasurer of the Fairland High Student Council and starting midfielder on
the lacrosse team, swore she heard a woman scream and beg for mercy
right around where Cynthia was taken. In fact, Karen said she couldn’t
stop hearing those screams—that they wormed their way into her head.
Karen’s mother would say it was likely those voices that caused her
daughter to quit student council a week later.
Finally, there was Aaron Ridley. Aaron was the junior partner at
a boutique firm in the process of persuading the minor league football
outfit in Sioux Falls to move to Fairland. Aaron was dragged out of his
office late one night. The only difference between his and the other
abductions was that for the first time since the kidnappings began, there
was blood at the scene. It was as if someone had painted slathers across
the hallway with a thick brush. Unsurprisingly, security cameras captured
no usable footage of the assailant.
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up the tree line. He made himself think of all the good, beautiful things
about her as he heard the sliding door of his bedroom open and heavy boots
track toward him. The images left him as soon as he felt hands on his neck.
The hands were cold and when they clasped around Eldon and
lifted him from his bed, he shivered and gagged. The force of the grasp
snapped Eldon’s eyes open and he stared at the creature. Even in the
darkness, Eldon could see that the monster’s shadowy silhouette was not
that of a fox or a gargoyle. And even though it was momentarily faceless,
when his eyes adjusted, he saw that the thing indeed had a face. The face
of a man. A large, strange looking man with white shocks of hair and
smooth, baby skin that curved softly and rose in round puffs like cream.
The man had yellow eyes, and those yellow eyes sparked with joy as he
threw Eldon on the bed and mounted him, clutching Eldon’s throat with
animalistic force.
As Eldon twisted in and out of consciousness, he strained to think
of his little girl in the sunlight, reaching for her memory as he lay limp on
the mattress. Yet even minutes from death he couldn’t be with her. Only
blackness pinged across his vision.
He began to grow impatient. He opened his eyes to look at the
man, who was now sweating in his brutal effort.
“I’m ready,” Eldon choked. “Hurry.”
The blonde monster seemed not to hear him. He continued to
squeeze Eldon’s neck. Then, after a moment, he stopped and looked at
Eldon, as if seeing him for the first time. The man loosened his grip and
air rushed into Eldon’s lungs. He sucked it in greedily despite himself. The
man leaned into the moonlight and looked away, pondering the request.
Eldon could see his face with devastating clarity.
After a moment, however, the man must have decided he would
not be deterred and he lunged back at Eldon, fighting him to the ground
like a calf.
“Hurry,” Eldon gagged. “Please.”
This time, the man let go of Eldon instantly. He scoffed as he rose
from the bed and walked calmly to the door. He looked back at Eldon one
last time, his snow banks of skin glowing moon-blue. With a sigh, he
turned and walked through the broken door and into the night from where
he came.
Eldon lay on the bed and wheezed in ragged half-breaths until air
filled his lungs. When his dizziness subsided, he opened his eyes and
found he was in the same room—in the same trailer—where he had gone
to bed before this dream. And it was so much like a dream—almost a good
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dream. Lying there on the bed, he felt he was waking to a nightmare, and
he trembled with rage and sorrow having been deprived his chance at
death. His chance to be with her. He lay there for hours, rendered inert by
the indignity of an unwanted life. Then, when the first signs of light
painted the corners of his window, he called the police.
“I can give you a description of the monster,” he said. “I saw him
clear as day.
“Yes, I am sure. This is what he really looks like.
“Yeah, I can come down now. Let me get my bike.”
DANA STAMPS, II
SOUND ALONE
“I am interested in my music lasting only while I am alive.”
—Sonny Rollins
HANNAH RODABAUGH
LAST SIGHTING OF THE DODO (MAURITIUS ISLAND)
Now we have
whole prisons
dedicated to
the lost.
We call these
habitat dioramas,
these memories
of what
is passed.
Only we
put the others
on display.
We don’t make
example and
call it ecosystem.
Surrounded
by concrete,
painted walls,
verdant shades
of ugliness,
are malformed
(cont)
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specimens:
a great auk
over plastic eggs,
MARCO ETHERIDGE
BILLY AND JOEY GIVE UP ON HALLOWEEN
Joey is the big, brave, stupid kid and I’m Billy, the smart, loyal
sidekick, which goes a long way toward explaining why we’re
leapfrogging pumpkins in a sleet storm. Running away from a murdering
psycho is an after-dark activity, so a working flashlight, that’s top of your
list. Not your dad’s old Boy Scout flashlight that you gotta smack with the
heel of your hand because falling over frozen pumpkins sucks. Did I say I
was the smart one? I guess mostly smart would be more honest. Okay, so
Joey and I messed up. Joey messed up and I went along with him.
Whatever.
It’s not our fault, not completely anyway. I mean, we are ninth
graders, right? We’re supposed to get into trouble. Ask any of our junior-
high teachers. But when a psycho killer moves into the creepy old
farmhouse across the pumpkin patch from your best friend, that takes
things to a whole new level.
The first clue that Joey’s new neighbor was a murdering maniac:
his name. No honest farmer names their kid Claude. Kids named Claude
are tortured in school, and for sure at Taft Middle School. Then those
tortured Claude kids grow up to be serial killers, which was obviously true
about this new guy. And psycho neighbor Claude was single, as in no wife,
no kids to do the chores. No farm tools, not even a tractor. We know that
for sure because Joey and I took turns with my binoculars, and we didn’t
miss a lick.
So, when Joey grabs the binoculars and asks me what I think, I
tick the point off my fingers, which always impresses him.
“A guy named Claude, no wife, no kids, and no tractor, moves
into the creepiest old farmhouse in the county. No doubt about it, your new
neighbor is a psycho.”
Which explains why I’m running full tilt, dodging huge, slippery
pumpkins while beating on my flashlight. Joey’s ahead of me, hurtling
pumpkins like a track star, which he is, the big jock. Then he goes down
hard like he’s been shot, so I look over my shoulder for Claude the Psycho,
which is a mistake when you’re running through a pumpkin patch. Bang!
Face-down in the crusty sleet with my legs tangled in pumpkin vines.
When I wipe the cold grit out of my eyes, I see the beam of Joey’s
flashlight stabbing up into the falling sleet. I whisper-hiss in his direction.
“Joey!”
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“What?”
“Turn off your flashlight.”
“Oh, right.”
The light goes out and we’re hunkered down in the frozen furrows
behind our respective pumpkins.
“Billy, is he following us?”
“Naw, I don’t see him, and the house is dark.”
There was a pause. Joey usually needs a pause to gather up his
thoughts.
“Dammit, Billy, that’s just not fair.”
“What’s not fair?”
“Who the hell installs an alarm system on a hundred-year-old
farmhouse?”
“Someone who moves in across from two nosy kids, I guess.”
“You’re a funny guy, Billy. I ever tell you that? Listen, we better
crawl on out of here. I don’t wanna get caught, but I don’t want to freeze
to death either.”
Joey sets off crawling across the half-froze earth and I’m right
behind him. This is the sort of thing that might be fun if we had a bunch
of elementary school kids to scare, but we don’t, so it sucks.
At the far edge of the patch, we’re up on our feet and running,
sprinting for Joey’s barn. Normally, the old barn is one of my favorite
places on earth. But not tonight.
We’re chilled to the bone, caked in mud, and, yeah, scared. I admit
it, okay? I stick that worthless flashlight in my pocket and look down at
my muddy overalls. Joey looks just as bad, with cakes of mud on him thick
as football pads.
“Jeez, Billy, what am I gonna tell my mom?”
Sure, because it’s always my job to come up with a story.
“A raccoon in the henhouse. Wait, no, a badger. Yeah, a badger.
We chased it away, saved the hens, and then we tried to dig the badger out
of his den.”
“Wait, why not the raccoon?”
“Joey, Raccoons climb up trees. Badgers dig underground. We’re
covered in mud, not tree bark, right?”
“Yeah, whatever, a badger then, smart guy. Man, it’s a good thing
you saw that blinking red light.”
Two idiots standing at the cellar door, me and Joey, with Joey
poised to yank it open. Just then I spotted an alarm module mounted on
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the wall, red light blinking like an evil eye. I grab Joey’s hand, point at the
alarm, then we panic and start running across the pumpkin patch.
And something is still bugging me about the alarm system.
“Joey, you think that alarm is hooked up to video?”
“What do you mean, video?”
“Lots of these new systems have a camera. You can monitor your
house from your laptop or cellphone. Shit, what if he caught us on video?”
“Naw, don’t worry about it. He’s barely got a pot to piss in. When
he was moving in, I didn’t see any computer gear, zilch, not even a tablet.”
“Yeah, maybe. I hope you’re right. C’mon, let’s scrape this mud
off and try out our story. I’m freezing out here."
Ø Ø Ø
A few days later, an October ice storm knocks out power across
the whole county and Joey appears in the darkness outside my window. I
wiggle the window from the inside and Joey shoves on it from the outside.
Finally, the crust of ice cracks and we push it open. Before I can ask what’s
what, Joey’s inside my room, his face all excited.
“Can you get out?”
“Sure, I guess so, but where to? Everything’s turned into a skating
rink out there in case you hadn’t noticed.”
“I notice everything. That’s part of my plan. No power, right, so
no alarm system. Get your crap and let’s go.”
I’m yanking on clothes and doubts at the same time.
“What if he’s home?”
“Nope, I checked. His van is gone, and not a light on in the old
house. Because, duh, the power is out.”
I forgot to mention that Claude has a creepy black van instead of
a normal pickup truck.
“You sure about the no power, no alarm thing?”
“Of course, genius. No electricity means no blinky red light.”
“I think those systems have backup batteries.”
“You know what your trouble is, Billy? You worry too much.
Everything’s coated in ice. Cameras, sensors, everything. Hurry up,
already. No Claude, no van, no problem. One quick look inside that weird
cellar and we’re back here before you know it.”
Of course, Joey was wrong. He usually is.
Even on the gravel road, I’m slipping around like a hog on ice.
The whole world is glazed slick and silver. The farm lights are black, so
there’s no need to sneak through the pumpkins, which is fine by me.
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hoping to get on with the school newspaper. Who knows, maybe I’ve got
a few stories worth telling.
JOHN ZEDOLIK
UNCERTAIN LICENSE
JENNIFER DOTSON
SEQUOIA’S SECRET STRENGTH, A CASCADE
White Oak is not as tall as the distance between first and second base
but its taproot descends deeper than sequoia into the Earth.
Tree height is no indication of root depth.
Developed by Udit Bhatia, in the cascade poem, each line in the first stanza becomes the last line in
the subsequent stanzas.
Dotson
The Sweetelle is a poetic form invented by Alison Joseph consisting of ten 14-syllable lines with a
refrain at lines 1, 5 and 10.
Dotson
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BEATE SIGRIDDAUGHTER
DOMESTIC
And maybe that's how it simply is in the world. Maybe she is just
a little dumb. Although when it comes to anything practical, like doing the
taxes or remembering important dates and deadlines, she's the one who
always gets it right. I know she's not overly happy. How could she be?
Sometimes when he's particularly sarcastic, I look at Joey and hold his
eyes for a moment: shouldn't we do something? Say something? But, like
I said, she's not bleeding, and we don't want to draw any extra attention to
whatever it is that's just been said and whatever it is that she must be
feeling. You can tell by her slack lower lip and by the film over her eyes
that it hurts. It feels like she is getting smaller. I remember that feeling in
myself. He used to be like that with us, too. But she defended us, and
eventually he stopped picking on us. So maybe we should defend her too.
Of course, she doesn't really get smaller. It happens so regularly, if she
would really get smaller, she'd have entirely disappeared by now.
Sometimes I wish I could undo her sadness. But like I said—
maybe it's simply the proverbial it is what it is. In any event, it feels
normal, even harmless in a way. If it were really, really bad, she would
leave him, wouldn't she? I'd go with her, that's for sure. Well, maybe I'm
not all that sure. Would she even want me around to always remind her of
everything by my presence? Anyway, it doesn't come up, and I don't think
it ever will. I sometimes wonder what would happen if she ever turned the
tables on him, put him down somehow. But of course she never does,
though there are things she could say to him. Like that tax stuff and worse.
But she doesn't. And we don't either. Nobody wants to be in his line of
fire. She'll be okay.
HOLLY DAY
LIVE BAIT
Instead, two disappointing blue trays of water sit on the back counter
one filled with brown and gray inch-long fish, mostly floating belly-up in the water
a soggy mass of waterlogged worms in the other.
My daughter stands on her tiptoes so she can look right into the buckets
wrinkles her nose at disgust and confusion before asking
if we can take some home.
Day
GREG MOGLIA
AGAINST THE LIGHT
RICHARD ROBBINS
SUBTRACTION
On warm days I sit on the top step and watch cars and the dog-walkers
go by. Sometimes a wave. Sometimes a hello. Mostly I disappear
behind the plantain lilies. They’re green with shade, without ambition: They
thrive when paid no attention. Neighbors blocks from here curse the deer who sail
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MARIA WICKENS
FOOD CHAIN
The option of eating the cats has presented itself. I doubt I will get
buy-in, but if the children are hungry enough, they might just go along with
the suggestion.
A quick stock-take of our remaining provisions reveals how well
our cats ate before the plague shut the world down—duck and chicken broth,
mackerel and prawns, tuna and seaweed, chicken melting soup…. With my
husband no longer foraging supplies from the outside world, we are running
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The prime minister and her doctor provided some consistency until,
eventually, the microphones picked up a suppressed sneeze. The death rate
hit 3.5 million by the time the television stopped broadcasting. Seventy
percent of the country dead. Including the military commanders, the prime
minister, and her medical advisor.
By the time the plague caught up with Hamish, our self-imposed
isolation had bought us enough time to divine a well, set up a wind-powered
generator providing refrigeration for my insulin, and plant crops. Hamish
picked clean the remnant dry supplies of the nearest city, but now cornstalks
shyly push through the earth; carrots, spinach, and (to his youngest child’s
dismay) beetroot are ready for harvest.
With this in place, he died and we are absolutely alone. No
neighbors. No internet. No television news or radio.
For a while I hoped there might be an indestructible Homer
Simpson keeping the buttons pushed and the dials turning, but there is no
outside world now. Instead we have an endless list of chores to accomplish
during daylight hours to stay alive a little longer.
Night brings the nightmares of what next. All three of us cry out in
our sleep, and in the morning, I find Ollie curled up at the end of the bed,
apparently thinking I can offer him protection against the rough beast
slouching its way toward us. William Butler Yeats had the same
precognition as my husband. He knew the center would not hold. Things
have indeed fallen apart.
Although we are human and, because we know no better, we
persist.
Toby taught himself to drive and evidently inherited my immunity
and his father’s mechanical abilities because the generator continues to
harvest gales that frequently blow through, and he has kept the ancient farm
truck running. Once a week Toby leaves us and returns with whatever he
has foraged from nearby farms. He promises to be home by nightfall, which
limits the distance he can travel, but over time he has brought home
chickens, calves, and three goats.
Ollie desperately wants a dog, but Toby says every dog he sees has
reverted to wolf.
Even before the plague, when I look back, it was obvious we were
facing apocalypse pretty soon and here we are. Apocalypse now. Mankind’s
time is up.
Several chicks run around a coop as the cats eye them up. The
concept of family does not exist for our cats. I suspect they will eat me when
my time comes. Toby maintains an admirable emotional distance from the
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farm animals and has added butchery to his self-taught skills. He is only a
boy, sixteen; it breaks my heart what this has done to him. But Toby’s efforts
and self-imposed emotional armor will ensure that we survive long enough
to see the next species dominate on this merry-go-round of existence.
We live a long way from any centers of technological excellence,
so we have not seen the rise of artificial intelligence. Yet. I’m no kick-ass
Sarah Connor. Humanity really has no future if I’m the last female warrior
left on the planet.
Toby has not seen any live humans on any of his expeditions,
although a helicopter passes overhead twice a day, so we know we are not
the only survivors.
Before the plague tore through the village of Makara, there were
rumors of a foreign military base on one of the islands off the coast. The
marking on the helicopters is US military, although once I caught a glimpse
of a familiar logo on the side of the chopper: The Institute, the same shady
company Hamish used to work for. It had military ties and a close
connection with the Agency. Yes, that Agency.
If The Institute are searching for human life, I can imagine what
they plan for us next. When they find us The Institute’s scientists will
harvest our immunity. Drain us of our blood for the greater good.
On Toby’s first trip months ago, he returned with a supply of
insulin, and when that supply is exhausted, I will die because in the outside
world, there is no refrigeration. Any insulin stock has spoiled by now.
I have deferred the conversation about whether to eat Mommy, but
I would not hold a grudge against my children if they barbecued me to stay
alive.
I might object if they fed me to the cats. Toby has a strong sense of
irony and a pitch-black sense of humor, so it’s a strong possibility.
Lately the helicopter is passing by more slowly, circling as if
searching for something specific, like a hawk centering in on three small
rodents. I warn Toby not to be careless, but as winter turns to summer, he
stays away longer and explores farther. He still hasn’t encountered human
life, but he returns with only slightly weevilled flour and rice, bird-pecked
fruit and rodent-chewed vegetable crops, and more chickens. Our little farm
grows weekly. Eventually he finds a piglet.
Ollie squeals with delight and immediately names it Boston.
Toby and I look at each other in dismay as thoughts of pork ribs and
crackling vanish. You can’t eat anything that has a name. That’s the second
rule of farming.
The first rule is never name the livestock.
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“I stayed hidden last night. I knew they were coming, and I didn’t
want to lead them here.…” Toby comes to a halt. “Oh,” he says, looking at
the body, and adds, with classic Toby understatement, “That doesn’t look
good.”
“He assaulted Ollie,” I say.
“Big mistake,” says Toby with a chuckle.
“We should hide the body in case more come.” I lean against the
house, shivering as shock kicks in. Although it’s not shock. My mouth is
dry. My breath is sweet. A headache beats at my brain. It’s been about
twenty-four hours since that last shot of insulin.
“I’ll take care of it,” says Toby. “Did he tell you his name?”
“Only his rank,” I answer. “We weren’t on first-name terms.”
“Well then,” says Toby matter-of-factly, “he’s not a friend and he’s
not family.”
He drags the body toward Boston’s trough and whistles to Boston.
“Chow time, piglet.”
I weave my way inside and collapse on my bed, breathing fast. I
couldn’t imagine how Ollie would survive if I wasn’t here to protect him.
Now I don’t need to worry. Toby made it back and so long as
Boston is nearby, Ollie has a 400-pound devoted protector.
As I lie on my bed, feeling weaker and more confused every
moment, Boston makes his way into my room and nuzzles my hand.
I look him straight in his beady little pig eyes. “I will haunt you if
you eat me, pig.” Boston snorts a grunt that could be mistaken for a laugh.
“Look after my boys.”
He licks my hand. I take his intent to be friendship rather than
anticipation of another human smorgasbord.
I close my eyes. Toby has his father’s instincts. He will know it is
time to leave, and he will take Ollie, Boston, and the cats. They need to run
fast and run far as evil approaches.
I slip into darkness. Unconscious in a diabetic coma, I see glowing
red eyes, and a shadowy male form beckons me from the shadows, his wolf
snarls daring me to turn away.
I have no intention of turning away from a fight against evil.
If it buys my children a few extra hours to run further away, I will
resist. After all, if my pig can take down a captain of the US military, I am
confident I will be able to go a few rounds with evil incarnate. The local
language of our adopted home has a name for a female warrior—Wahine
Toa. I try it on for size, and I like the fit of the name.
I roll up my sleeves and dig in for the fight ahead.
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FRANK JAMISON
JAPANESE MAPLE CLOSE BESIDE THE HOUSE
HONEY
JOAN PRESLEY
PARADE REST
The head drill calls Parade Rest real slow and loud. We move
our right foot away from our left and clasp our hands behind our backs.
We stand, semi-relaxed and silent, while we listen to the bigwigs, whom
we haven’t met and never will, tell the audience that we are soldiers and
will go far in today’s Army, which isn’t true, and we all know it. It is
1983. We are non-combatants, always subordinate to those who do the
fighting, the few, the brave.
Afterwards, we meander—for the first time since we got here—
to the commissary, where we buy beer if we are old enough, donuts if we
are not. Then we pack our Army issue onto our backs, march one last
time together, and board busses to far-flung bases primed for battle, the
familiar kind.
Presley
JUDITH AMBER
THE DORMOUSE IN THE GIN BOTTLE
MEASURING MY LIFE
JOANNE HOLDRIDGE
SUMMER’S END
woebegone state
and suddenly I’m no longer sad or sorry
don’t want to wave a magic wand
and return them to their former
glossy splendor since what have I got
against old and bedraggled
the pepper plants gave all they could
GC ROSENQUIST
THE WIG
for Father, their wide eyes begging for him to appear through one of the
many entranceways. Me? I was bawling my eyes out. Dan was my big
brother, my hero, the sibling I was closest to. Dan was the one who
bandaged my scraped knee, he was the one who made silly faces to make
me laugh when I was in a bad mood, he was the one who read a bedtime
story to me every night. Now he was leaving me, he was going to see the
big, wide world, and forget about me. I had become so upset with emotion
I felt thirsty, dizzy and lightheaded. My legs were going rubbery, but I
forced them to be hard and strong.
Dan knelt down and hugged me. “Hey! It’s gonna be all right,
kiddo,” he said in his most soothing voice. I loved it when he called me
kiddo. “I’ll be home for Thanksgiving. We’ll eat lots of turkey and
pumpkin pie together and then we’ll puke it up all over the backyard so
we can eat some more!”
“Eeeww! Like the Romans used to in olden times?”
“That’s right, kiddo.”
I giggled. “Promise?”
He crossed his chest with his finger. “I promise,” he said. “But
you have to be a big girl for me until then, OK?”
I wiped my eyes, nodded quietly then hugged him back. I held him
tightly around the neck, never wanting to let him go. He gave me a kiss on
the cheek, stood up, and looked at his watch again. “Time to go,” he said,
glancing once more around the room for my father. He hugged Marina and
Regina, gave my mother a kiss, picked up his suitcase then boarded the
airplane.
That’s the last thing I remembered until waking up at the hospital
that evening.
When I opened my eyes I saw my father, handsome, thin, fit and
distinguished-looking with a smattering of silver hair above his ears,
looking down at me through a pair of black rimmed glasses. I was in a bed
that had a metal railing on the side and there was a persistent beeping
sound coming from somewhere far away. He smiled at me. “She’s awake,”
he said.
I heard a shuffling of many feet and saw Marina, Regina and my
mother, still wearing their Sunday finest, crowding around my bed. They
looked more relieved than happy to see me.
My mother forced her way through my father, took my hand,
leaned over and kissed me on the forehead. “You’re in the hospital,
honey,” she said, her eyes glassy with tears. “You fainted at the airport.”
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Father continued to arrive home from work later and later until
one night he didn’t come home at all. I remember Mother weeping softly
in her bedroom until the sun came up the next morning.
This happened on and off a few nights a week for a month.
Mother, realizing Marina, Regina and I noticed Father’s absence, did her
best to cover for him with one excuse after another, ranging from “Your
father had to stay over in farmer Ellison’s barn last night to take care of
that old mare that keeps getting sick,” to “He had a veterinarian’s
conference in Grand Rapids.” These excuses seemed reasonable to our
immature minds so we thought nothing of it. You see, Mother knew that
when your father is your knight is shining armor, you only saw the best
things in him. And we did. Until one stormy afternoon in late October.
As Marina, Regina, and I stood on the top step in front of our
school’s main entrance waiting for Mother to pick us up, I noticed the sky
above suddenly erupt with boiling, dark clouds. A cold swirling wind
swiftly rose and hissed like a wave in the ocean, ripping brightly colored
leaves off of trees everywhere I looked. Lightning flashed above us and
thunder rumbled the ground. The chaos of kids running to waiting buses,
some screaming, some losing precious pages of their homework to the
howling breath of the wind made it seem as if the end of the world was
here. Schoolbooks went skidding across the pavement, shoes became
dislodged from tiny feet and tumbled across the courtyard this way and
that. To my left I saw Joey Simone, the strongest kid in school, trying to
walk into the wind, fighting it with every ounce of strength he had. With
his body angled at nearly 40o his coat flared backwards like Superman’s
cape and his usually long curly black hair was pushed straight back, his
face burned red from wind shear. But step by step, he forced his way
forward and made it to the safety of a waiting bus. Our principal, Mr.
Hendrickson, did his best to corral children and their wind-surfing
homework lessons, but the gale was too strong for him to accomplish this
task efficiently, and I must say, he looked rather silly chasing after pieces
of paper that seemed in his grasp one instant then gone the next.
Marina, Regina, and I were protected from this onslaught by the
walls of the school. We watched the circus play out before us with great
zeal, laughing riotously. Regina was laughing so hard, in fact, she had tears
in her eyes. But this laughing was soon silenced as the wind brought with
it the scent of rain and yet Mother still hadn’t arrived. She was usually the
first vehicle in line. Once the courtyard had been emptied of kids and all
the buses pulled away, the principal saw us and stood with us until finally
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Mother’s silver station wagon finally appeared in front of the school and
parked with a screech.
But the woman that stepped out of the car wasn’t Mother. This
woman had a tight crop of golden blonde hair, a blazing pink dress with
shoes and a purse to match and those stockings with the line up the back.
Fighting the wind, she held down her skirt as she rushed towards us. I
thought for a moment it was Miss Derringer.
“I’m so sorry I’m late, girls!” she said. “I was stuck at the salon!”
We didn’t say a word. We just stared at this woman’s over-made-
up face, trying to figure out who she was. But, it sure sounded like Mother.
“Come on, let’s hurry, girls,” she said. “Thank you for staying
with them, Principal Hendrickson!” She took my hand and pulled me into
the cyclone.
***
The three of us couldn’t take our glares off this strange woman.
Finally, Marina, sitting up in the front seat with her, was the first to break
the silence.
“What did you do?” Marina asked.
“What do you mean, honey?” Mother asked.
“Your hair....”
“What? Don’t you like it? It’s a wig. I thought it was time for a
change.”
“It looks like you have a yellow wasp’s nest on your head!”
Regina joked.
Oh, how we all laughed and laughed at that. Regina even made
funny buzzing sounds and pretended to tickle me.
“That’s not very nice, dear,” Mother said. “I’ve spent the entire
morning getting ready. Do you think your father will like it?”
“Does he like wasps?” Regina countered. We laughed and laughed
again.
I saw my mother lock her jaw.
She drove on in silence until Marina spoke up again.
“Wait! You missed our street!” Marina shouted, pointing at the
back window.
“No I didn’t,” Mother said. “I have to stop and see your father first
before we go home. I’m sorry I have to bring you girls with me, but I didn’t
count on being stuck at the salon this late.”
She drove us clear across town and onto a street where all the
houses were closely packed together, where all the bushes were perfectly
trimmed, and all the grass was neatly cut. Halfway down the block she
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slowed the car then turned up a long, winding blacktopped driveway. Tall
red cedar trees swayed wildly in the wind on both sides of the driveway,
nearly breaking their spines. A small, quaint white brick house with a large
picture window in front sat at the end. Father’s vet van was parked in front
of the garage as Mother stopped the car and turned off the ignition.
“But this isn’t Daddy’s work,” Marina said.
“I know, dear,” Mother said as she checked her make up in the
rearview mirror. “I’ll be back out in a few minutes. You girls can do your
homework while you’re waiting.”
Before we could ask another question, Mother had that pink purse
in her hand and was outside fighting to keep her skirt down as she hurried
towards the front door. After a few knocks, the front door opened and she
went inside.
I was too curious about where we were to concentrate on my
homework, so I watched the world outside sway and howl, rumble, and
tumble instead. My sisters did the same.
It was much longer than a few minutes before Mother came out
again. She slammed the front door of the house behind her, took out a
hanky from her purse, and blew into it. When she lifted her head, I could
see that her mascara was running terribly, sending long black spidery
streaks down her cheeks...yet it hadn’t rained yet.
As soon as she stepped off the porch the wind picked up as if
wanting to sweep her away, and a drizzling sideways rain began. She came
towards us in stops and starts, trying to keep her balance as the wind blew
and the rain grew heavier. She fought through it as best as she could, arms
out, fingers splayed, her face angled down trying to avoid the stinging rain,
not caring if the wind blew her skirt up and the whole world could see her
privates. For some reason she reminded me of Jesus as he carried the cross
through Jerusalem, being whipped, kicked, and spit on. Just as she reached
the car, the wind rose again with a terrible moan and that blonde wig flew
off her head like a baseball cap. That was when Marina and Regina started
laughing and pointing at her.
Immediately, Mother’s hands went up to her head, which was
covered in a black hairnet and she screamed as the wind nearly toppled her
over the hood of the car. She looked at us through the rainy windshield,
and I knew she could hear the laughing and see the pointing. Her face had
broken into a hundred pieces, her make-up was smeared and running as if
her face was melting. But underneath all of that horror I saw a sadness,
and a humiliation, the depths of which I’d never seen before, and it
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Now it was my turn to brave the whipping, kicking and spitting. But I
didn’t mind, she’d done it for me countless times before. When I made it
to my mother, I grabbed her arm with both my hands and pulled, stopping
her from chasing after the wig. She glanced down at me, her face nearly
unrecognizable at this point and she began crying again. She slowly
dropped to her knees and wrapped her arms around me so tightly I could
barely breathe.
“My brave little pin cushion,” she wept into my ear.
Holding each other, we stayed there in the middle of Miss
Derringer’s driveway, in the rain and the howling wind and watched the
wig until it blew so far away, we couldn’t see it anymore.
NICOLETTE REIM
TATTOOS
JIM DANIELS
THE FOUNTAIN OF YOUTH
At last, a period.
The cold sparkle of water
down my throat, straight
from the pipe, spilling over
my cheeks and down my shirt
as my grandfather winks at me
and at whoever stands behind me,
whether they’re still alive
all these years later, or not.
Daniels
SALTING
Near the seashore, prehistoric man started extracting salt, a practice that
continues in the Camargue today.
(cont)
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Driving through the Camargue in a rented van to fit the whole family, my
parents visiting from Detroit, my father buckled in the passenger seat,
my kids and mother and wife in back. The men up front, even in France.
My father astounded by fear as I navigated the two-way one-lane paths
called roads in the dusty countryside of rural France. In Detroit, they kept
adding lanes so no one ever had to slow down and be polite. The clank of
machinery, our livelihood and music—so, what were we doing in France
with two little kids for four months? They came to see—to see a place
where even the earth spoke a different language. My father, retired from
Ford, and reticent about time as my mother’s walk crumbled into a
beggar’s dance, the botched surgery, the desperate lunge into
acupuncture and less reputable cures. We drove on water through
marshes and lakes, green fronds, pink flamingoes, a bird we knew in
plastic form with metal rods for legs because why not, because PINK
BIRDS! Real as maraschino cherries after all! In fearful awe of
untethered horses and bulls without enclosures. An expanse dwarfing the
only equivalent flat space he knew, the factory parking lot with its
yellow lines and barbed-wire fences.
My mother still had sight then, though she wore orange-tinted glasses to
try to fend off damage, take in the brilliance of the ragged green rug
unfolding its pulsing array of birds, the rising of those bulls and horses
from below sea level. The kids dozed in car seats while I drove, while the
rest of us pointed everywhere: Look! Look! Until we quietly settled
enough to lose our exclamation and take it in, the surreal expanding
landscape merging out into the sea—the sea, a final exclamation! The
white horses—Camargue horses—and the black bulls, graceful dots
roaming in their natural choreography around us while we stayed on
narrow roads, nearly invisible, almost hovering, until we landed at a
small car ferry to carry us across a lake—and the children awoke and we
stood on deck outside the van under the immaculate conception of the
cloudless blue BLUE sky above Saintes-Maries-de-la-Mer and my father
held my mother’s hand and they each held a tiny child’s hand on that
short endless voyage and my wife and I stood on each end and took the
children’s other hands and no one commented on it or took a picture as
the wind caressed our hair, as we emerged from the womb of the world
and no one was dying quite yet as we stood in our ragged line, though we
knew we must get off the boat eventually—one at a time, as we knew
was the way, salt against our faces.
Daniels
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ARTHUR GINSBERG
LIFE IN THE BALANCE
MICHELLE HARTMAN
DROWNING
MITZI KIRKBRIDE: For the past 7 years I’ve been with the Evening Street
Press (ESP); first as a sounding board then as the chairperson. I’ve seen the
ESP grow at a steady pace without loss of quality. The ESP editor, Barbara
Bergmann, is responsible, with the help of all the volunteers, for that steady,
quality growth. In addition, the covers have been outstanding. Through the
years, ESP has continued to produce clearly-written, positive, poetry and prose.
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STEPHEN IVES
MANASOTA KEY
TV monitors. The sound was muted, but the text scroll on the bottom of
the screen said a 737 had crashed in southern Oregon. Delta flight 1422,
originating in LA and bound for Eugene, had disappeared over the
Siskiyou range. The plane had first made an unplanned stop in Fresno, due
to an unconfirmed technical issue. Anna wasn’t sure where the Siskiyou
range was. At the same time, she felt a twinge of guilt for being relieved
that she didn’t know anyone from Oregon.
***
Only halfway home to Eugene, Brian stared out the window wall
of the Fresno International Airport. His connection in LA was so tight, he
needed to sprint from terminal one to terminal three. Now that effort
seemed wasted, because instead of an on-time arrival in Eugene, Delta
flight 1422 had made a precautionary landing in Fresno. No doubt because
of the hard left bank and sudden loss of altitude the plane experienced forty
minutes outside of LA. Brian doubted it was a controlled move; the pilots
weren’t avoiding migrating birds at 33,000 feet. After three seconds of
panic, the pilots regained control, but not before the beverage cart spilled
into the laps of the passengers one row ahead. The moment the plane
dipped, Brian had been staring out his window, wondering why he hadn’t
asked the beach-walker her name. The flash of sunlight on the wing had
temporarily blinded him.
Once safely on the runway in Fresno, it felt anticlimactic when
they announced it was a simple computer problem. Brian didn’t believe it.
The explanation seemed far too benign for such a dramatic move.
Ironically, his elevated heartbeat making an emergency landing in
Fresno was surprisingly similar to the feeling he had stopping the beach-
walker that morning on the key. Why hadn’t he asked her name? Sarasota
Memorial Softball was embossed on her ball cap. That was a big clue. A
first name may have been enough to find her, to ask her out and to have
dinner with her smile.
That's what his brother would have said. Instead of being
consumed with your teaching, ask her name.
***
“Anna?”
Anna heard Sid call her name, but she didn’t turn. Being Sid’s on-
again, off-again girlfriend—he was an oil-painter by trade— was getting
old. They were lunching on the deck of Snook’s Bayside Restaurant, in
spite of Sid’s vow to live in poverty.
“Anna!”
She turned away from the Gulf. “What?”
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He sipped his beer. Sid’s fingernails, often stained with red acrylic
paint—he loved all shades of red—looked to her like so many bleeding
cuts. She had to remind herself there were no cuts, no risk of infection,
that he was an artist, a calling as far away from medicine as one could get.
Their differences attracted her at first, but now she was starting to
experience a numbness. Underneath his laid-back exterior and his
sleeveless flannel shirts, he was controlling, possessive, and unnecessarily
inquisitive.
He smirked. “Anybody home?”
“I’m just tired.”
“Well, why wouldn’t you be?” He took another sip. He waited too
long to wipe away his foam mustache. That was another thing. “You work
a twelve-hour shift. Residency is a form of slavery. Plus, you still wake up
at the crack of dawn and walk the beach.”
She thought he wanted her to admit more, that she wasn’t just
leaving to walk the key; she was avoiding him. On the nights he stayed
over, he probably wondered why there was never any time for sex. She
came home late and woke up early.
“I need my solitude.”
He couldn’t know about the note because she was touching it in
her pocket, underneath the tablecloth. Without Sid in her life, she’d tape it
to her refrigerator or to the bathroom mirror.
“But not tomorrow,” he said. “Remember? My mother’s taking us
to breakfast.”
Anna frowned. His mother, a self-proclaimed visionary, a seer,
believed everyone knew or was related to everyone else in a past life. It
felt invasive to be in her presence.
Anna looked back at the pale blue Gulf.
“I can’t tomorrow.”
“Why not?” he whined. He glanced in the direction she was
looking, trying to see if the real answer was floating like a boat on the
water.
“I can’t.”
“My mother predicted you’d say that.”
She raked his face with a frown, because now he was mocking
her, or his mother, or women in general.
“She anticipated you’d be struggling. Unhappy, because you don’t
even know what your struggle is.”
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“Did she?” Anna pushed her crab salad away as if it smelled bad.
In spite of her aversion for Sid’s mother, that pretty much summed up her
current feelings about Sid.
“Also, your chief of staff hassles you.”
He was making her a better doctor, she wanted to say,
manipulating the note between her thumb and forefinger like a string of
mala beads. If anyone asked, and she didn’t care if they did, she’d say she
found the note on the beach. Or, more accurately, that it found her. Sid’s
mother would like that.
***
Sitting in his Adirondack, Brian still hadn’t written a single word.
Instead, he watched the woman walking toward him. She carried her
sandals in one hand, studying the beach immediately in front of her, as if
being careful not to step on a shell or a piece of driftwood. The brim of her
pink hat, with lettering too small to read, shielded her face. A long white
chiffon blouse trailed in the offshore breeze, a contrast to her shoulder-
length dark hair.
As she drew closer, he doubted she’d look at him. Solitary women
seldom acknowledged solitary men, a common disappointment he was
nevertheless used to, more the result of inappropriate or downright
dangerous members of his own gender than anything else. Because she
wouldn’t look, he felt safe admiring the casual swing of her walk.
Passing directly in front of him, she abruptly turned her head and
caught him looking. Confident in her aim, she pitched him a no-look smile,
her entire face brightening. Now he could see the tiny beads sewn into her
white chiffon, like pebbles on the bottom of a clear-running brook. A shift
in the wind carried the scent of gardenias, or maybe he just hadn’t noticed
them before. Her smile would not have been seen without a hat containing
her dark hair, hair flowing in the wind, dancing with the chiffon, a
counterpoint rhythm to her sandals swinging at her side, the slight twist of
her bare feet in the sand.
The waves fell quiet. A pinkish reflection colored the surface of
the water. She tipped her head once, acknowledging her approval of him
holding a pen and a journal instead of a smartphone in front of his face.
Amused by his surprise, she never slowed down.
For Brian, seeing the beach-walker was similar to seeing the
Grand Canyon for the first time, especially since his brother had described
it as a big hole in the ground. Instead, it was an overwhelming reality, and
he was as captivated by it as he was by the gentle upward curve of her
mouth. He’d no doubt try to describe her to the next ten people he met,
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beginning with the hotel clerk, the shuttle driver, the Delta ticket agent,
the poor sap occupying the seat next to him on the plane.
She’d planted this metaphorical kiss on his cheek at the very last
moment, delivered in a way that made him look for someone standing
behind him, believing her smile couldn’t possibly be for him.
She continued down the beach, never breaking stride. He felt
prickles of sweat on his brow. He ran his fingers through his hair, knowing
he hadn’t combed it or even looked in the bathroom mirror in the cabana.
He planned to shower before he caught the hotel shuttle for Sarasota-
Bradenton. He watched how easily she compensated for the incline of the
sand. Did everyone naturally do that? He imagined her singing to herself,
the surf occasionally keeping time. He closed his eyes, embarrassed that
his younger self would have leapt up and chased after her, a Labrador
trying to make small talk, with no thought for how he was interrupting her
peace or spoiling the moment that just occurred.
Instead, he wrote “thank you” in his journal. He underlined the
words. Thank you for your presence. In this precipitous moment. He
crossed out precipitous. She didn't need to know about his brother. Third
person might be better. He wrote, “A woman walked barefoot down the
beach. She turned and smiled.”
Eventually she disappeared around the point. He sipped his coffee.
Was that it? Was she gone for good? As the sun rose, the shadow of the
palm tree on the beach grew imperceptibly shorter. He’d intended to write
one final memory for his brother, the one about their shared joy as kids
when Santa left identical F-4 Phantoms under the Christmas tree. Instead
of writing his brother, he revised his note for the beach-walker. Life had
to go on, his brother would agree. Go ahead and tell her. If she comes back
this way, get up and give her the note.
He closed his eyes and listened to the surf. He counted twenty
slow breaths. When he opened his eyes, a figure had reappeared around
the point. He couldn’t tell if it was her. He sipped his lukewarm coffee and
felt a slight chill in the shade. The anticipation of her return rumbled his
stomach. In ten minutes, she’d be next to him. Again. He sketched his
clearest observation about her smile, then revised it on the facing page. It
still wasn’t good enough.
This time she might look away, stare out at the Gulf. He didn’t
know her. She didn’t know him. His delightful feeling could just as easily
become a full-on rejection. Also, wasn’t it risky to share a personal note
with a stranger? Her six-foot-five boyfriend might be waiting a mile away
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in the parking lot, reading box scores from the night before, nursing a
vodka hangover.
If he didn’t seize the moment, if his brother passed on in the next
few days, if he stayed in his chair, paralyzed, that would dishonor his
brother’s three-year fight. His struggle. Sitting was too easy. Now, she was
closer than he expected, splashing through the ebb and flow of the Gulf.
He was out of time. He ripped the page from his journal.
He pushed up from the chair, held his breath, and walked down to
the hard sand. If his brother had taught him anything, the time to do
something crazy was always now. He exhaled, folded the page once, and
waited for her to acknowledge him. She glanced up with an almost furtive
look, a look meant only for him, and he was suddenly too parched to clear
his throat.
She waited.
“I wrote something for you.” His voice came from him, but it
didn't sound like him. His inflection made the statement sound more like
a question. He balanced on the ridgetop of sanity. Something had
possessed him, but now, caught in the open, in his awkwardness, he could
fall either way. Suddenly it was clear that by giving a note to this woman,
this day would be no ordinary day.
She raised one eyebrow. “Something for me?”
He gave her the folded page. She took it like she was used to
people handing her things. Under the brim of her hat, her angular
cheekbones were glowing, which disappointed him somewhat, because his
note was about the radiance, the luminosity of her smile, not pure beauty.
Her cap read Sarasota Memorial Softball. She unfolded the page.
“Please,” he said. “Wait to read it.”
A wave washed around their ankles.
She gave a playful shrug. “Thank you. Very much. The last time
someone gave me a note, I think I was in fourth grade.”
She clutched the paper and walked away. She said thank you a
second time over her shoulder. He resisted staring at her, but couldn’t help
himself. After twenty paces, she began to read. She jerked to a stop and
laughed, no doubt having just read the line, “She turned and smiled at
him.” An accidental prophecy that was just luck.
She gave him another little wave, walking into the sunlight,
reading the note a second time, disappearing in the light that reflected off
the white stucco of the beach homes, the sand, the water, and abruptly
merging everything into an inverted weightlessness. He and everything
around him was falling. Dizzy, he felt no shame for his naked presence,
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his bent hair, his baggy shorts, his half-zipped sweatshirt. A walk in the
sun was a walk into the sun, that familiar warmth casually traveling
millions of miles without purpose. He wondered, when was the first time
his mother let the sunlight touch his newborn skin?
The sand, far below, surrounding his feet, resembled a mountain
range from twenty thousand feet. A baby in the arms of his mother, the
intense light was hurting his eyes. His mother reached for a peach at the
farmer’s market, and the shadow of her floppy sunhat no longer protected
him from the glare of the world.
He squeezed his eyes shut.
He gripped the armrests of his seat.
KAT BODRIE
PULLING TEETH
piles of faded
leather-soled shoes
seventeen years
with a death sentence
next month
(cont)
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LITTLE BOXES
for George
INJECTIONS
__
WILLIAM OREM
FOR MY PARENTS, BOTH DECEASED, FROM THIS MY
FIFTY-FOURTH YEAR
somewhere
NAUSET LIGHT
now shoulder-height;
and now a blind girl, swimming in the ocean.
My heart began its incredulous worry.
(cont)
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we’re here,
here we all are, we are floating together.
Orem
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NIGHT SONG
insistent mittens,
or the large owl
who moved last Autumn into the pine—
“Great Horned,” the neighbors think—
In truth
LIGHTNING STRIKE
ADRIAN S POTTER
THE BEST PLACE TO STORE HOPE IS IN A HOPE CHEST
DAVID DESJARDINS
PIECES OF A LIFE
The morning in early July that he heard that Janey Shea had been
hired to work on the assembly line at Paramount Cards, Thomas Kaminski
was already two pulls into the Popov’s that he packed to work each day.
“Wait. You’re talking Henry’s kid, right?” he said, pulling his pen
from its perch along the greying temple of his right ear. “Carrot top,
tomboy, he’d bring her in Saturday mornings?”
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It was Harriet from Payroll who’d let it slip about Janey. Thomas
had run the warehouse for nearly two decades, and Harriet came round
every Thursday morning with paychecks and gossip. She handed Thomas
the rubber-banded envelopes, her reading glasses dangling from their
lanyard onto the slope of her bosom, and let her eyes wander to the red
plastic thermos cup holding the vodka, set neatly on Thomas’s desk next
to a coffee mug full of pens; her glance was as much a part of her Thursday
routine as the paycheck delivery.
“That’s the one. Little red-haired girl, we called her. Not so little
now. Not quite the same red, either, come to think. Must dye it.”
This was momentous news, although only the few remaining old-
timers at Paramount could appreciate it. Back in the day, Henry Shea had
had a bright future at the Pawtucket greeting card company, looked to be
on a fast track to upper management. He’d turned a GI Bill education into
an MBA, studying nights at URI, all the while supporting a wife and kid.
Had the common touch too. Played on the factory’s softball team with all
the peons, in the outfield right alongside Thomas, who for years afterward
would make it a point to sit down the pallet mules he supervised in the
warehouse and force them to relive the glory days with him. “Man, did we
murder the ball, Henry and me,” Thomas would say. “Like Rice and Lynn
back when they first came up from the minors. What are you laughing at?”
As he signed for the paychecks, Thomas shook his head. “I'm
surprised they let her in the building, considering.”
“Yeah, me too, but the new management, that’s ancient history for
them. What can I say?”
Thomas tried to remember where he was when he first heard that
Henry Shea had skipped town with $377,335 of the company’s money.
Funny how the exact amount still stuck in Thomas’s head. He’d been with
Sandra then, in that apartment she’d rented above the Portuguese market
in Providence. This was when it was fresh and crazy-good between them,
their first go at it—the first of many he and Sandra had managed to screw
up over the years. She’d had that Maine Coon cat, made a mess on the
living room carpet for weeks after Thomas moved in. He remembered
Sandra teasing him from her vanity mirror with a pretend pout that day
when Lester from Shipping called, wondering whether Thomas had any
good ideas as to who should play center field that evening for the playoff
game against Decorator Fabrics, since Henry clearly wouldn’t be showing
up.
Bad news comes in threes, they say: Paramount lost the game that
night, and worse, Sandra kicked Thomas out two weeks later, blaming the
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lying and the drinking, her usual refrain. As if she didn’t like her wine
coolers.
Thomas tucked the paychecks into the top drawer of his desk to
be handed out later and rode the freight elevator with Harriet down to the
second floor, where the boxed-set assembly line ran like a long suture
between pallets stacked high with envelopes and greeting cards, its
conveyer belt rumbling nonstop with an unending parade of dancing
snowmen and genuflecting Magi. Thomas made the trip repeatedly every
workday, it being his responsibility to keep the line stocked with
Christmas cards for the girls to count and box.
His route took him past the paper cutters, who maintained and
operated the massive machines that guillotined the sheets into individual
cards. This was precision work: Screw up while cutting the card stock and
it would cost thousands. The machine operators still wore the standard
military-green monkey suits that the company once required of all its
employees. They stood arms akimbo, watching the machines like drill
sergeants reviewing a new company of enlistees, alert to the slightest
incompetency or insurrection. One of them—Francis Murray, a primo
ballbuster—watched Thomas stroll by. He lifted his chin toward Thomas:
“Hey, Kaminski, your mom pack you anything good for lunch today?”
Thomas walked on, ignoring the snickers behind him. He’d tried
to keep it a secret that he’d had to move back in with his mother, but
Francis’ aunt was one of the regulars over at St. Adalbert’s, as was
Thomas’s mom, and who ever knew old biddies not to blab.
His recollection of Henry’s kid was a bit fuzzy; after all these
years, he wondered if he’d be able to pick her out? Well, that shouldn’t be
hard: Janey would be the new girl on the line. Thomas knew all the others,
most of them high schoolers employed just for the summer to help get the
Christmas product ready to ship. Janey would be older than the rest of
them. He did the math in his head. It had been 17 years since Henry flew
the coop, leaving wife and daughter behind. That would make Janey 22 or
23 years old now. What does something like that do to a kid’s head? he
wondered.
Turning the corner, he could see the long line of card and envelope
counters, distributed every three feet on either side of the conveyer belt,
slapping down 25-counts of cards and envelopes on the dingy, grafittied
canvas. The girls wore rubber finger grips—condoms, some of the guys
joked—to help count out their piecework, and tied their hair up to avoid
accidental snagging by the relentless belt. The sight of so many exposed,
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curving napes slowed the pace of many a male employee here, Thomas
included.
He spied her immediately, his eyes drawn to a blue paisley
kerchief that funneled her exotic burgundy hair into a ponytail. Was a time
when almost every female employee at Paramount corralled her hair up
like that, but it had been years since he’d seen that look on any woman
younger than the babushkas attending the daily 7 a.m. Mass at St.
Adalbert’s. As he approached, Thomas found himself recalling those old
WWII posters that showed some tough babe flexing a bicep. He wondered:
Did Janey remember that outdated style from when she’d skipped down
the warehouse aisles behind her father those many years ago?
Stopping near the front of the belt, Thomas took the inventory
clipboard from its shelf and pretended to study it. Then he grabbed a pallet
truck and tugged a load of red baronial envelopes into a slot near Janey’s
work station. Janey sat near a trio of chattering high schoolers but did not
join in their talk. He could see her face clearly, see her strong chin and
thick eyebrows. There was a steeliness in her unfocused gaze, as if she
were hearing something she was tempted to laugh at but instead saving it
up for an appreciative audience. He’d seen that look, that Mona Lisa self-
containment, on Sandra. What was so funny? he wondered.
XXXXX
When Thomas arrived at his mother’s second-floor apartment
hours later, his hair damp from an evening cloudburst, he found her in the
pantry, balanced precariously atop a small stepladder, breathing hard, her
arm deep inside one of the top cabinets.
“Ma! The hell you doing?”
He lifted her from her perch and set her on the floor; she was like
a six-year-old in his arms. At 73, his mother seemed to dwindle a little
each year, although he had to admit she’d always been a tiny lady.
“The cocoa powder. I can’t find it.” Her face was red from her
efforts, and she tugged a feather of white hair from her eyes. “You’re
always moving things around, Tomko. I can’t find anything anymore.”
He resisted the urge to roll his eyes. She was always alert to the
slightest condescension. Pulling open the adjoining cabinet, he plucked the
cocoa powder from its usual position.
“Look. Right here.” He put it in her hand and she stared at it,
suspicious, aggrieved.
Thomas grabbed a Narragansett from the refrigerator and fetched
from the oven the plate that his mother had prepared for him, wrapped in
aluminum foil. He walked his meal over to the table near the window.
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“You already eat?” he asked, popping the lid on his beer, although
he knew the answer. For as long as Thomas could remember, his mother
had grabbed her meals in brief, solitary interludes like a harried waitress,
often standing with her plate near the pantry window and watching cars
and children pass by in the streets below.
“Of course. You think I can wait all hours for you?” It was 6:30.
She did, however, enjoy watching her son eat, and she sat opposite
him now, her hands on her lap.
“So what’s the cocoa powder for?” Thomas asked, flipping the
newspaper open to the sports and draping it over the salt and pepper
shakers.
“For the brownies, Tomko. Did you forget already? Father
Raymond’s anniversary? It’s tomorrow. The girls and I have a little
surprise prepared for him after Mass.”
She frowned. “Something wrong with those carrots?”
Thomas stabbed a few and ate them. “No. See?”
His mother had lived alone since a heart attack caused Thomas’s
father to drive his truckload of auto parts off the Hartford Turnpike nearly
four decades ago. Most of Thomas’s memories of his dad were from his
days playing Little League ball, when Mr. Kaminski would sit in the
bleachers at Macomber Field, a pint bottle tucked in his jacket pocket,
waiting for his son’s turn at bat. Sprinkled through the apartment were
black-and-white photos showing a thin, nervous man with long, thin
fingers resting wraithlike across the shoulders of either Thomas or his
mother, sometimes both. Thomas often tried to imagine what his father
would look like were he still alive, but the only image he could ever
summon was a gaunter version of his mother.
“I saw her at the Almac’s today, Tomko—Sandra, I mean. In the
pet food aisle. Must still have that cat, I suppose.”
Thomas flipped the page over to check the standings.
“I guess so. That one or some other.” He glanced at his mother for
a second. “How’d she look?”
His mother shrugged. “How she always looks. Kind of lonely, you
ask me.”
She paused. “But good.”
Again, she waited before adding: “Clean.”
Thomas offered a noncommittal grunt.
“There was a child, a little boy there, helping his father. I saw her
watching him, how she looked.”
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At noon the next day Thomas screwed the cap back on his red
thermos and walked down the long aisle that ran past Occasional. Each
row of stock bore a placard: Valentines, Graduation, Bar Mitzvah,
Thinking of You. Above him, banks of tall grey windows were rimmed
with paper chaff like dusty snow, as if beset by endless blizzards.
He made his way down to the factory’s first floor. He knew that
most of the assembly line crew usually spent lunchtime out on the grassy
slope facing Pine Street, patronizing the various lunch trucks that peddled
meat pies and BLTs outside the factories of Pawtucket and Central Falls,
but it was still drizzly, so he thought he’d try the cafeteria.
Near the time cards were some vending machines, and as he
stabbed the buttons that spat out a black coffee, the racket of the girls’
conversation gave him pause. Who could have a conversation amid such
noise? Still, he turned and scanned the tables, blowing on his drink. There
she was, sitting alone, a plastic spoon poised over her yogurt and a
paperback spread on the table before her.
Thomas folded his lanky frame onto the bench across from Janey
and undid the metal clasp on his lunchbox. He placed the sandwich and
hard-boiled egg on his napkin; the brownies he unwrapped but kept hidden
from view. Janey nudged her book closer to her own lunch but otherwise
didn’t acknowledge him.
Hoping to kick off a conversation, Thomas strained to make out
the book’s title: “The Unbearable Lightness of Being.” He could not
imagine what the book might be about: philosophy? physics? As she
concentrated on it, Janey twisted her oddly colored hair between her
fingers. Almost purple, the girl’s hair was itself as confounding to Thomas
as her book. Who had hair such an eerie shade? A comic book character,
maybe, or a supermodel. He noticed too for the first time that a silver stud
pierced one of Janey’s nostrils, and he became even more uneasy, as if he
had totally misunderstood her nature, her essence.
Suddenly she slammed her book shut in exasperation.
“What?” Her eyes were on him, hot, fierce.
“I...well....” Suddenly Thomas understood how he must appear to
her. And not just to Janey—a few of the high schoolers had turned to watch
the old letch hitting on the new girl. He was appalled to think anyone could
think such a thing of him. How could he have not anticipated such a
reaction?
“It’s just that.....” Panicked, he struggled for something, anything,
that might make her understand he had no interest in her that way. “I...I
knew your father.”
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“Yeah? So?”
“He was my friend.” This was a lie—or at least, a stretch—but he
was desperate to disarm her fury and dispel her mistaken perception of
him. “I remember him bringing you here when you were just little.”
Her eyes narrowed, but he could see her anger start to ebb. She
folded her hands over her book and stared down at them. Thomas could
tell she wanted to hear more but would never say so.
“Oh God, you were such a charmer, running up and down the
aisles. Just a little scamp, scooting up to folks all through the building. A
real crowd-pleaser you were, with these little red curls.” He had her now,
her eyes on him with a faraway wistful gaze, as if she could almost see
these things herself.
“And your pop watching you—it’s Janey, right?—him watching
you, anyone could see you were his pride and joy.” He was laying it on
thick now, maybe even making some of it up, he couldn’t be sure. He had
no idea why he was feeding these memories to her but he couldn’t stop
himself.
She was quiet for a while, and then seemed to shake herself, as if
coming out of some daydream.
“Yeah, well, pardon me for saying this all seems just bullshit.”
She scraped the inside of her yogurt container and held it before her, as if
it were some bitter medicine. “Presumably you know what he did to us.”
“I do.” He saw he had pushed too hard, had reignited her bitterness
when he’d hoped to douse it. “So, you and your ma never heard anything
from him, all these years.”
“Nope.” She finished her yogurt, and stuffed the cup and spoon
into her lunch bag. She stood up. “So thanks for this trip down memory
lane. And who are you, anyway?”
Thomas stood up with her. He held out his hand.
“Thomas Kaminski.” She didn’t move. “Janey, I’m really sorry. I
should mind my own business. I just thought...well, I don’t know what I
thought.”
He lowered his eyes, but seeing his lunchbox, raised them again.
“But look, I brought these. My mother made them. Won’t you
have one? They’re really good, I can swear to that.”
Janey looked at the brownies. It took a moment, but slowly that
smile returned, the one she’d had yesterday as she listened to the girls
talking on the assembly line.
“Really. Your mother.” She looked back up.
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She’s laughing at me, Thomas thought. That’s okay, let her. Better
that than the other thing.
He slid the brownies toward her. He himself was indifferent to
chocolate, but he knew he was strange that way.
XXXXX
Their lunchtime meetings soon became a routine, with Thomas
making sure to always bring something sweet for Janey. His mother was
glad to bake anything Thomas requested, and on those rare days when she
couldn’t, he stopped off at Korb’s bakery on the way to work, taking a
ticket and waiting for the saleslady to carefully nest his strudel or tarts in
a waxed paper bag. He was like a suitor arriving with flowers, and Janey
played her role accordingly. When he would produce his confection with
a flourish, she accepted it with a mock-regal entitlement, “Ah, my just
desserts.”
Over time, he coaxed her story from her, the insult and injury of
life with her mother after Henry’s abandonment: their sudden indigence,
the forsaking of the cushy private school; the investigators nosing about
for any covert funneling of stolen dollars back to Janey and her mom. Then
later, in high school, Janey’s pregnancy and the arrival of little Paige. Only
over the past year had they started to dig out a bit, with Janey earning her
GED and lining up nursing classes for the fall.
For his part, Thomas fed Janey tidbits about her father, pieces of
a life, all invented spontaneously: How Henry had carried his daughter’s
photo in his wallet and pressed it upon his teammates for them to admire
during postgame drinking sessions at the Le Foyer club. Or how, like Babe
Ruth himself, Henry promised her a home run and made good on it that
very evening. With each tale, Thomas felt a reproach stir within himself
that he recognized as Sandra’s: You're doing it again, more lies. But
they’re white lies, he argued. They make her feel good. Look at her;
anyone can see that. You could tell by her stillness as she listened, by the
reverie settling upon her, like motes in a snow globe when you stop
shaking it.
One day, Thomas arrived in the lunchroom to spot Francis Murray
across the room sitting alongside Janey. Francis seemed to be talking and
Janey listening, frowning, as she poked her fork at a salad. When Thomas
joined them, Francis smiled sourly at him, swept up his sandwich, and
walked off.
“What did he want?”
Janey took her time chewing. “Nothing.”
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The woman behind the wheel had steel-gray hair and wore a blue-
checked Friendly’s waitress uniform. She leveled a tired, guarded gaze at
Thomas, as if he were a security guard telling her to move her car, but
finally nodded toward him.
“She says be nice, I’ll be nice.” She turned to caress the little girl’s
hair. “Right, monkey? Gramma be nice, won’t she?”
Janey rolled her eyes and turned to Thomas.
“And this is Paige. Paige, say hi to Mr. K.”
The girl ignored Thomas and continued squirming till Janey let
her down. She toddled over to a grassy area and looked back, taunting
them all with her impishness.
“So Mr. Kaminski, Janey says you and my ex- were like this.” The
woman held up two fingers, pressed together.
“Well, not quite,” Thomas said, glancing at Janey. “It was mostly
just...we were on the softball team together—”
“Paige!”
The little girl had bolted down the grassy slope. Janey ran to
intercept her, but her mother kept her gaze on Thomas.
“It’s funny, though; I don’t remember you at all. And here you are
with all these pretty stories about Henry being such a good dad, and I’m
wondering: Who is this guy? And the stories—like you’re Walt Disney or
something. What’s with all this crap, Mr. Kaminski?”
“It’s not—” Thomas paused. How could he explain when he didn’t
understand it himself?
“Look, she doesn't need all this in her life. She’s doing just fine
without any of your fairy tales. Stop fucking with my little girl, do you
hear?”
She stared at him fiercely, then sighed and looked over toward
Janey and Paige. Janey had caught the girl, and was dangling her upside-
down and blowing on her belly, producing gleeful squeals. Thomas
watched too but the scene pained him, and he turned back to Mrs. Shea.
“You’re right. I’m sorry.”
The last Friday in August came, a day that Thomas had been
dreading: Janey’s last at Paramount. She would start up her nursing studies
at the community college immediately after the Labor Day weekend.
Instead of using the cafeteria, they sat in brilliant sunshine on the grass
verge outside the warehouse and gorged on Mrs. Kaminski’s brownies.
Janey presented Thomas with a Paramount greeting card showing a cat
clutching a bouquet of roses. Her daughter had roughly crayoned every
square inch of the card in yellow and orange.
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Before Janey hurried inside for the rest of her shift, she stood
before him.
“So. Mr. K: You should take care of yourself, okay?”
He searched her face for a clue to what she meant but saw none.
They promised to keep in touch but Thomas knew—even hoped—that
Janey would never return to the warehouse. When the 12:30 bell rang and
the last lunchtime stragglers sprinted inside, he sat back down on the
grassy sward, plucking handfuls of blades, tossing them onto the asphalt,
and yearning for a bottle of something.
Finally, Thomas stood up. Instead of heading inside, he found his
car and drove slowly around the city, past Macomber Field, past the
medieval-looking tower that sat atop Jenks Park like a cherry atop a
dessert. He felt like a teenager, tossed by unnamed urges. Why had he
stayed in this rundown mill town his whole life—even worse, at the same
job? Everyone else seemed to move on, toward or away from something.
Why not him?
At last he pulled up in front of a triple-decker on Japonica Street
that looked like all the other triple-deckers on the block. In its front yard
was a large maple tree with grey muscled branches, a thick-roped swing
dangling from the broadest. It seemed a miracle on this last day of summer
that no child was playing on this swing, and he turned off the ignition and
strolled into the yard, studying each second-floor window, their curtains.
He tested the ropes; they seemed strong enough to handle his weight, and
so he sat on the swing and launched himself into what in a few seconds
became a vigorous, chirruping arc. He felt a tremor in his stomach that he
couldn’t recall ever feeling as a child, and after a few minutes the triple-
decker’s front door opened and a calico cat emerged, stretching paw after
dainty paw onto the porch landing. It watched him intently, like it would
any unpredictable animal.
and suggested to Barbara she send it back to the author to fix the tense problem. I don’t
know if that’s how it was fixed or if she tackled it herself. And it’s always wonderful to
come across a prose piece or poem that needs no fixing at all. Even better: a piece that
needs no fixing and is so good you want to reach out to the author and tell them. There
were several of those. https://eveningstreetpress.com/book-author/matthew-j-spireng/
KATHRYN DE LEON
THIS POEM IS ABOUT
JOSCELYN WILLETT
STILL DO
JACOB FRIESENHAHN
GRIEF
it wasn’t what
I said
it wasn’t the question
I asked
it was so much more
it was everything
as they covered
her face
the backs
of her hands
were weeping eyes
with protruding veins
that ran down
like the tears
I knew
she was crying
HAYSTACKS
ZARY FEKETE
MIRRORS
His text sound beeped, and he looked down at his phone. It was a
message from his sponsor. There was a couple across town who had a
donation for the Salvation Army. His sponsor asked if he had time. He did.
These days he had plenty of time.
Nick considered his recovery to have officially begun four months
ago in February, but, in reality, it probably started earlier. Probably on
Christmas morning when his wife had asked him to run down to the
apartment storage unit in the basement of their building for the Nerf guns
that were hidden down there for the boys.
Nick had grabbed the keys and taken the steps in threes. He had
about 5 minutes before his wife would get suspicious. He ran out the front
door to the liquor store around the corner, the only one that was always
open in Bloomington, even during the Minnesota winter. He bought a half
liter of vodka and a half liter of Sprite. While walking back he chugged
half the vodka in his right hand while emptying half of the Sprite from his
left into the gutter next to the sidewalk. He stood in the front door to the
building long enough to pour the rest of the vodka into the remaining
Sprite. He stooped down and dropped the empty vodka bottle down the
street drain. There. That would get him through the morning. This kind of
behavior was standard operating procedure until a few weeks later when
his wife found him passed out on the toilet, and he knew he couldn’t
pretend to hide things anymore.
The downtown Minneapolis Salvation Army AA group met every
Monday evening. Nick had learned a bit of the lingo since he began to
attend in February. He started taking Antabuse, the preventative drug that
would make him violently sick if he drank. He also began to meet with his
sponsor, William, a British ex-pat in his 70s. It was William who texted
him the address of the couple across town with a donation.
Nick grabbed the keys to the delivery van from the shared kitchen
table in the dining room. The first two weeks at the Salvation Army were
free, but then they wanted you to start doing something to earn your keep.
First he washed dishes. He moved on to cleaning the bathrooms and doing
laundry, and, once the leadership realized he was serious about his
recovery, they gave him the keys to the delivery van and he started picking
up donations.
Most donations were furniture items, things like old mattresses or
bed springs. Sometimes it was clothes, knotted up in oversized plastic
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garbage bags. Once or twice a month someone had a stack of records they
wanted to get rid of or a rack of used books. Nick brought them all back
and logged them into the front store’s book. Then the stuff went on sale to
bring in some additional income for the Salvation Army halfway house
where he was living with the other guys.
His phone beeped again and a second text arrived from William.
Apparently, this donation was going to be different. Nick was supposed to
pick up some wall length mirrors and deliver them to a different address.
He shrugged and hopped into the van, threw the stick into reverse, and
carefully backed out of the lot. Soon he was motoring past the used
furniture lots on either side of the street. He waved to a couple of the guys
on the street. Then he was on the freeway headed south.
The first few nights in the Salvation Army had been tough;
William said they were for everyone. Nick’s body wasn’t used to sleeping
without liquor and he stared up at the ceiling for the first week listening to
the belches and farts of the other 50-odd guys he shared the dorm with.
The sleepless nights had also given him plenty of time to think. He didn’t
think about any of the cliched stuff like picturing his wife or boys alone
without him. Truth to tell they were probably relieved he was gone. He
figured they wanted him back but not halfway back. If he was going back
this needed to work. That first week as he stared at the ceiling he thought
about himself. He imagined the alcohol molecules draining out of his
blood, floating out into the air around him, mingling with the other smells
of the dorm. He started to work up an image of a steel door in his mind;
the door he was slowly closing and locking against any future relapses.
The door was going to stay closed this time. However long he needed to
stay at the center before returning home…three months? Six? Over a year?
He was going to do it.
The pickup location was in South Minneapolis. He had been to
this general neighborhood on more than one occasion with the van. The
houses there were nice. Not mansion-nice like in some of the outer
suburbs, but definitely upper-middle-class-nice. He took the freeway exit
after driving for about 10 minutes. Two turns later he was pulling up next
to a nice yard. The lawns here were small but very trim. The streets each
had a neighborhood watch sign posted. “Our neighbors are
watching…Zero tolerance for crime.”
He got out without locking the van doors and walked up to the
front door. The door opened before he could ring the bell. It was an older
couple and they were all smiles. They invited Nick to follow them to the
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basement. He slipped out of his shoes and followed their stream of chatter
to the downstairs stairway.
“We your first ones today?” the older man said.
“That’s it,” Nick said. “Not going to give me any trouble are you?”
The lady thought this was very funny and suddenly launched into
a story about something that happened last summer with her and her sister.
Nick let most of the story wash over him while he grinned, “gotcha’d,”
and nodded.
“Yep, it takes all kinds,” he said when she was winding down. “So
now, you’ve got some mirrors to get rid of?”
The older man gestured to the stairs, and Nick followed him down.
The basement was unfinished but spotless with lots of good overhead
lighting. The mirrors were stacked against a wall.
“There they are,” the man said. “We had been keeping them for
our niece. She dances at the Children’s Theatre Company downtown…but
turns out she didn’t need them. Where will you take them”
Nick said, “Someplace up North Minneapolis.”
When he mentioned North Minneapolis the couple both hummed
and nodded and acted like he said something serious. The man helped
Nick move the mirrors back up the stairs and out onto the street one by
one. Nick could probably have managed two mirrors apiece if he was
working alone, but he didn’t want the guy to feel like he was ungrateful
for the offered help. That was one of the lessons from the big AA book
that William had drilled into him for several week: Always deal in
gratitude. People want to give, but they also like people who are grateful.
Nick thanked the couple and then sat in the van for a second with
the engine idling. He checked his phone and another text from William
had already arrived with the address for the drop off. A couple seconds
later he was back on the highway, heading north this time. By the time he
was entering North Minneapolis a thin drizzle had started. The yards he
passed were bare and muddy. The drop off location was for an apartment
building sandwiched between a shabby Arby’s and a concrete supply
company. There was no place to park, so Nick turned the hazards on and
inched the van into a tight squeeze by a fire hydrant.
He rang the buzzer at the front door and was surprised to hear a
kid’s voice in the speaker. The speaker was crackly but he heard the kid
say something about the 6th floor. Nick took three quick trips with the
mirrors until he had them all stacked outside of the elevator. He re-parked
the van a block away on a side street, beeping the doors locked and
manually checking with his hand that they were locked and then jogged
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back to the apartment building. He carefully moved the mirrors into the
elevator.
The elevator door shuddered closed and after a few deep creaks
the entire unit began to shiver its way upward. As he rose he could smell
different smells as each floor passed, giving him an idea of who lived in
this building: curry, garlic, onions, saffron…and finally, as the door
opened on the sixth floor, the deep, high, acidic tang of cat pee.
The smell grew stronger as he exited the elevator. There was a
bare lightbulb above him in the hallway, and no other lights. He used his
phone to inspect the first few apartment numbers and found his target three
doors down. He knocked and waited.
A moment later the door opened and the owner of the young voice
was standing in the doorway. Nick guessed that he was probably 12. The
kid was all smiles and beckoned for Nick to follow him. Nick shouldered
the first two mirrors and stepped into the apartment.
It was filthy. There was a tiny kitchen closet on the right, the sink
clogged with dirty dishes and crawling with flies. The fridge door hung
ajar, the lower hinge clearly broken, the smell coming from the kitchen
was thick with rotting chicken and mold.
The rest of the apartment seemed to be all one room. Every inch
of the floor looked covered with dirty laundry and crumpled magazines.
Nick counted five cats, but there might have been more. There was an
ancient couch on the left with wiry springs poking up from the cushions.
A pillow carelessly teetering on the arm of the couch seemed to confirm
that this the only room and that the couch was the only “bed.”
The kid was standing in the middle of the entire mess, still
grinning his huge, bright smile.
Nick tried to return the smile, but the cat urine made him wince.
“This your place?” he finally managed to say.
The boy nodded.
“Well, then these guys are yours,” he said, patting one of the
mirrors. “Where do you want them?”
“Over here.” The boy said. He quickly kicked a few socks out of
the way and pointed at the back wall, across the way from the couch.
Nick carefully navigated the crowded floor, standing the mirrors
against the bare wall. He couldn’t wait to get out of the smell. His eyes
had begun to water.
When he finished he looked back at the boy who was still smiling
but was now admiring himself in the shiny surfaces of the mirrors.
“Where’s your mom?” Nick said.
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CONTRIBUTORS
CAROL EVERETT ADAMS (she/her) writes poems about Disney theme parks,
organized religion, UFOs, and other topics. She lives in the Midwestern United
States and works in the tech industry. Her poems have been published in
California Quarterly, Crack the Spine, Euphony, FRiGG, Ghost City Review,
Hawaii Pacific Review, The MacGuffin, The New York Quarterly, The Virginia
Normal, and others. She earned her MFA in writing from the University of
Nebraska. You can connect with her at caroleverettadams.com.
YAHYA AL-DEEN By print time, we had not received a bio note from this incarcerated
writer who publishes under the name Yahya al-Deen. This is a portion of the submission
letter: “…collection of short poems, which is my niche…. I have a ‘least-is-most’ approach
to writing, by attempting to paint a great and inclusive picture with as few words as
possible.”
SHERRILL ALESIAK began writing at age ten, pumping out stories about Elvis and
musings in a bulging diary. She has taught college writing along with writing in
advertising. Her poems have appeared in publications such as Dunes, Creosote, Muse,
Clockhouse, and the poetry anthology, Eating her Wedding Dress. A big bow to her
readers. She and her husband live in Michigan, along with their furry clan, Jack and Chips.
CYNTHIA RAUSCH ALLAR studied under Molly Peacock and Greg Pape,
receiving her MFA at Spalding University. Her thesis, “‘A Snake Lies Hid:’
Aphra Behn’s Poetry and the War Between the Sexes,” appeared in Allegorica: A
Journal of Medieval and Renaissance Literature. Poems have appeared in Myrrh,
Mothwing, Smoke from Tupelo Press, The Cancer Poetry Project, The Boom
Project, Two Hawks Quarterly, Naugatuck River Review, Evening Street Review,
Off the Rocks, Paper Street, Bloom, and others.
SUE ALLISON was a reporter for Life magazine; her writing has also been
published in Best American Essays, Antioch Review, Harvard Review, Threepenny
Review, Fourth Genre, The Diagram, River Teeth, and a Pushcart Prize collection.
She holds a BA in English from McGill University, an MFA from the Vermont
College of Fine Arts, and an MLS from Georgetown University.
JUDITH AMBER’s work has been published in the San Luis Obispo Tribune (annual
poetry contest), Tolosa Press (creative non-fiction), Transitions Abroad (online), The
Oregonian, Oregon Coast Magazine, The New Times (San Luis Obispo) and the
literary journals Talus and Scree, Raven’s Perch, and Fishtrap Anthology. In August,
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2023, she received a scholarship to attend the Elk River Writers Workshop in Montana
and was a member of a poetry workshop led by poet Sean Hill.
KEN AUTREY taught English at Francis Marion University (SC) and now lives
in Auburn, AL. His work has appeared in Atlanta Review, Cimarron Review,
Poetry Northwest, Southern Poetry Review, and elsewhere. He has published four
chapbooks: Pilgrim (Main Street Rag), Rope Lesson (Longleaf Press), The Wake
of the Year (Solomon and George), and Penelope in Repose (Helen Kay Chapbook
Contest winner, Evening Street Press). He helps curate the Third Thursday Poetry
Series at Auburn University.
KEVIN BROWN has published two short story collections, Death Roll and Ink
On Wood, and has had fiction, non-fiction and poetry published in over 200
literary journals, magazines, and anthologies. He won numerous writing
competitions, fellowships, and grants, and was nominated for multiple prizes and
awards, including three Pushcart Prizes.
AMANDA NICOLE CORBIN has had her short form prose published in a variety
of magazines and journals including Thrice Fiction, Nano Fiction, the Notre Dame
Review, and more. She currently lives in the Midwest, and spends her time writing
little snippets, creating miniature things, and playing Magic: the Gathering.
AMELIA COULON is the author of six full-length romantic novels and over one
hundred short stories of various genres. She is fifty, the mother of two and has
been married to her soulmate for twenty-two years. Her work has been published
by Aspen House Publishing, The Journal of Compressed Creative Arts, Page &
Spine, and Evening Street Review in addition to numerous other outlets.
JIM DANIELS’ latest poetry collections include two chapbooks, The Human
Engine at Dawn, Wolfson Press, and Comment Card, Carnegie Mellon University
Press. His latest fiction collection is The Luck of the Fall, Michigan State
University Press. A native of Detroit, he lives in Pittsburgh and teaches in the
Alma College low-residency MFA program.
HOLLY DAY’s writing has recently appeared in Analog SF, The Hong Kong Review,
and Appalachian Journal. She currently teaches at the Loft Literary Center in
Minnesota, the Richard Hugo House in Washington, and WriterHouse in Virginia.
KATHRYN DE LEON is from Los Angeles, CA, but has been living in England
for thirteen years. She is a teacher and lived in Japan for six years teaching English
to Japanese university students. Her poems have appeared in several magazines
in the US including Calliope, Aaduna, Black Fox, Trouvaille Review, and
Neologism Poetry, and in several in the UK including London Grip, The Blue Nib,
and The High Window, where she was the Featured American Poet.
JENNIFER DOTSON (she/her) is the author of two collections, Late Night Talk
Show Fantasy and Other Poems (Kelsay Books, 2020) and Clever Gretel
(Chicago Poetry Press, 2013). She is also the founder and creative engine behind
www.HighlandParkPoetry.org. She’s been practicing her French on Duolingo
since 2019 and hopes to have occasion to use it in halting and embarrassing
conversations with actual French people soon.
AARON FISCHER’s poems have appeared in the American Journal of Poetry, Five
Points, Hudson Review, and elsewhere. He won the 2020 Prime Number Magazine
poetry contest, 2023 Connecticut poetry prize, was a finalist in the Able Muse 2023
poetry contest, and won top sonnet twice in the Maria W. Faust sonnet contest. His
first full-length collection, My Shabby Afterlife, was published in 2022. Work in
Evening Street Review: https://eveningstreetpress.com/product/evening-street-
review-number-34-summer-2022/
Center Writing Workshop, he received a BA from St. John’s College and PhDs from
the University of Dallas and the University of Salamanca. drjrforman.com
ARTHUR GINSBERG is a neurologist and poet from Seattle. His work appears
in the anthologies Blood and Bone and Primary Care from University of Iowa
Press. He received the William Stafford prize in 2003. He earned an MFA degree
from Pacific University where he studied with Dorianne Laux and Marvin Bell.
His books The Anatomist and Brain Works were published in 2013 and 2019. He
teaches a course, “Brain and the Healing Power of Poetry” at the University of
Washington.
ELLEN GOLDSMITH (she/her) is a poet and teacher. Her books include Left
Foot, Right Foot, Where to Look, Such Distances, and No Pine Tree in This Forest
Is Perfect. Poems have appeared in numerous journals and anthologies. Professor
emeritus of the City University of New York, she lives in Cushing, ME.
the former editor of Red River Review as well as the owner of Hungry Buzzard Press
and recent winner of the John and Miriam Morris Memorial Chapbook Contest. She
holds a BS in political science-pre-law from Texas Wesleyan University.
RUBY HAWKINS writes poetry and short stories. She has been published in
magazines and chapbooks. She writes poetry about life, love, heartache, and
happiness. She writes sister stories in the dialect of her mountain background.
STEPHEN IVES has been published or is forthcoming in Allium, Mississippi Review, Sortes,
South Dakota Review, Wisconsin Review, Pacifica, and has been anthologized in Popular Fiction
by Oregon Authors. He owned a custom homebuilding business and was an adjunct instructor in
the University of Oregon Architecture Department.
STEPHANIE KEEP is a writer living in Montana. Most recently, you can find
her work in the Tipton Poetry Journal. Her poetry practice has come as a welcome
surprise borne of long walks, first along the streets of San Francisco and now on
the trails of her native Mountain West. In every creative venture, she’s looking
for interesting, not perfect.
University. She has also studied creative writing at The Writers Studio and
Stanford Continuing Studies. Her work has been published in California
Quarterly and The Phoenix. She enjoys traveling, hiking, and creating sculptures
and jewelry.
MITZI KIRKBRIDE is a retired CEO and past director at Guide Dogs for the
Blind, the largest guide dog producing school in the world. Involved in business
writing during her career, she currently is writing creatively in both prose and
poetry. She spends her free time on the board of directors of several non-profits.
When not so busy, family and friends fill her days.
MARTY KRASNEY’s poetry and short stories have been published or are
forthcoming in Areté, Innisfree, Frost Meadow Review, Marlboro Review,
Missouri Review, Mudlark, The MacGuffin, Tricycle, and Witness, and he has
completed a novel, The Bees of the Invisible. His long and varied career as an
organizational executive culminated with ten years as the founding executive
director of Dalai Lama Fellows, a global network of contemplative, young social-
justice activist leaders, now based at the University of Virginia.
LEE LANDAU’s chapbook of poetry, Knotted, takes you on a journey from her
childhood and adolescence. The journey is about an abusive mother and passive
father. The poems startle, the images and metaphors sparkle and add depth.She
thanks Evening Street Press for this inclusion. Her work has been published in
journals: New Millennium Writings, Poetica Magazine, RavensPerch, Cathexis
Northwest, plus elsewhere.
RICHARD LEVINE is a retired NYC teacher, and the author of Richard Levine:
Selected Poems (FutureCycle Press, 2019), Contiguous States (Finishing Line
Press, 2018), and five chapbooks: The Cadence of Mercy, A Tide of a Hundred
Mountains (winner, 2012 Bright Hill Press Chapbook Competition), That
Country’s Soul, A Language Full of Wars and Songs, and Snapshots from a Battle.
He was co-editor of BigCityLit.com, and continues to serve as an advisor.
richardlevine107.com
CARLA MCGILL’s work has been published in The Atlanta Review, Bryant
Literary Review, Shark Reef, Crack the Spine, Westview, Common Ground
Review, Caveat Lector, Door Is A Alembi, Jar, Euphony Journal, The Hungry
Chimera, Carbon Culture Review, Neologism Poetry Journal, DASH Literary
Journal, Schuylkill Valley Journal of the Arts, The Summerset Review, The
Penmen Review, Cloudbank, Paragon Journal, Burningword, The Alembic,
California Quarterly, Waxing & Waning, Broad River Review, and others. She
lives in Southern California where she writes poetry and fiction.
upper in Champaign, IL, always trying to get back to that poetry and novel thing.
WILLIAM OREM writes about spiritual issues. His first collection of poems,
Our Purpose in Speaking, won the Wheelbarrow Books Poetry Prize and the
Rubery International Book Award. His novels, short story collections, and plays
have been honored with the GLCA New Writers’ Award, the Eric Hoffer Award,
the Gival Press Novel Award, and others; currently he is a Senior Writer in
Residence at Emerson College. Details at williamorem.com.
VICTOR PEARN’s poems have been published over 200 times in an assortment
of works, including: Caribbean Writer, Chiron Review, Long Islander, Midwest
Quarterly, Mind Matters Review, Negative Capability, Sulphur River Literary
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Review, The Seventh Quarry, and Whole Notes. He has authored over 13 books.
These poetry books are currently available on Amazon: American Western Love
Song, Apricot Harvest (poems written in China), and Cattails and Sagebrush. He
lives and writes in Colorado.
JOAN PRESLEY grew up in the San Francisco Bay Area and has lived in Reno,
NV, for many years. She is a veteran and a retired fire marshal. She graduated from
the University of Nevada, Reno with a BA and an MA in English and, during the
pandemic, finished an MFA at Pacific University in Forest Grove, OR. Her work
has appeared in The Brushfire, Evening Street Review, The Meadow, Painted Cave,
and Slab Literary Review. She loves Bichon Frises, pickleball, reading, writing,
movies, travel, her friends and family, skiing, and hiking–maybe not in that order.
BÙI MINH QUỐC is a Vietnamese poet known for “Up to the West,” which
inspired generations to rebuild the war-ravaged highlands, and for “A Poem on
Happiness” about his first wife, the writer Duong Thi Xuan Quy, who was killed
in 1969. “Has It Ever” was voted one of the 100 best Vietnamese poems of the
20th century. Hei served as editor-in-chief of the Journal of Quang Homeland and
founded the newspaper Lang Biang. He was expelled from the Communist Party
in 1989 for mobilizing writers to demand freedom of speech, for which he was
twice placed under house arrest.
DANIEL A RABUZZI (he/his) has had two novels, five short stories, 25 poems, and
nearly 50 essays/articles published (www.danielarabuzzi.com). He lived eight years
in Norway, Germany, and France. He has degrees in the study of folklore &
mythology and European history. He lives in New York City with his artistic partner
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CLELA REED is the author of seven collections of poetry. The most recent, Silk
(Evening Street Press, 2019), won the 2020 Georgia Author of the Year
recognition. A Pushcart Prize nominee, she has had poems published in The
Cortland Review, Southern Poetry Review, The Atlanta Review, and many others.
A former English teacher and Peace Corps volunteer, when not traveling, she lives
and writes with her husband in their woodland home near Athens, Georgia.
FRANK RICHARDS writes fiction. His work has appeared in publications such as
Avalon Literary Review, Euphony Journal, O Dark Thirty, Menda City Review, The
Penmen Review, Pennsylvania Literary Journal, The MacGuffin, Sanskrit Literary-
Arts Magazine, The Virginia Normal, and War, Literature, & the Arts. He is assistant
nonfiction editor for Village Square Literary Journal. He holds a doctorate in Public
Administration and an MFA in fiction. Frank and his wife live in Central Virginia
along with an assortment of rescued cats and German shepherd dogs.
GC ROSENQUIST was born in Chicago, IL, and has been writing short stories
since he was 10 years old. His 12 previously published books include horror,
poetry, a comedic memoir, and science fiction He works professionally as a
graphic artist. He has studied writing and poetry at the College of Lake County in
Grayslake, IL, and currently resides in McHenry, IL. For more information on GC
Rosenquist, you can go to his website at gcrosenquist.com.
RIKKI SANTER’s poetry has received many honors including six Pushcart and
three Ohioana and Ohio Poet book award nominations as well as a fellowship
from the National Endowment for the Humanities. Her eleventh poetry collection,
Stopover, which is in conversation with the original Twilight Zone series, was
recently published by Luchador Press. (she/her) www.rikkisanter.com
DONNA SPECTOR is a playwright as well as a fiction writer and poet. She received
two National Endowment for the Humanities grants to study theater and Ovid in
Greece. A program of her poems aired on Australian national radio, and her poems,
plays, stories, and monologues have appeared in many literary magazines and
anthologies, including The Greensboro Review, Poet & Critic, Sycamore Review,
Gaia, Notre Dame Review, Parabola, Rattle, The Connecticut River Review, The
Pedestal Magazine, The Paterson Literary Review, and American Life in Poetry.
PATTI SULLIVAN’s chapbooks are At the Booth Memorial Home for Unwed
Mothers 1966 (Evening Street Press, 2015), Not Fade Away (Finishing Line Press,
2014), and For The Day (DeerTree Press, 2012). Her poems appear in Spillway,
Chiron Review, Solo, Miramar, Glimpse, Raising Lilly Ledbetter, and several other
anthologies and journals. She is a California-born abstract painter and collage artist
living on the central coast, continuing to enjoy a life engaged with creativity.
ALAN SWOPE’s poetry has been published in Fort Da, Roanoke Rambler,
Perceptions, Front Range Review, Mixed Mag, and Poetic Sun. He is a practicing
psychotherapist and an emeritus professor with the California School of
Professional Psychology. He enjoys singing, acting, travel, cinema, and gardening.
BRUCE TAYLOR is the author of Poetry Sex Love Music Booze & Death
(Upriver Press 2018). His work appears in The American Journal of Poetry, The
Chicago Review, The Nation, Poetry, Rattle, and on the Writer’s Almanac. He has
won fellowships from Fulbright-Hayes, the National Endowment for the Arts, the
National Endowment for the Humanities, and the Bush Artist Foundation. He
lives in Wisconsin with Patti See. https://people.uwec.edu/taylorb/
MARK THALMAN is the author of Stronger Than the Current, The Peasant
Dance, and Catching the Limit. His poetry has been widely published for the last
four decades, and has appeared in CutBank, Pedestal Magazine, and Valparaiso
Poetry Review, among others. He received his MFA from the University of
Oregon. After 35 years, he retired from teaching English and creative writing in
the public schools. Please visit markthalman.com for more information.
RON TORRENCE published his first short story at 50 and his first poem at 80.
Even so his fiction, non-fiction, and poetry are pretty widely published. the
prophet bird, a poetry collection, was published in 2021, and Julia’s War, a
chapbook of four interrelated stories, has just been published.
PEGGY TROJAN published her first poem when she was 77. Widely published,
she is a frequent poet on Wilda Morris Poetry Challenge and Your Daily Poem. She
recently finished a chapbook about being ninety. Her husband, David, died in 2020.
She still lives in the house they built in northern Wisconsin, with her eldest daughter.
She enjoys making jam from her raspberry patch for family and friends. Evening
Street Press published her chapbook, Homefront: Childhood Memories of WWII and
Free Range Kids, memories of growing up in a small town. She has published two
full collections and five chapbooks. Her books are available on Amazon.
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JOSCELYN WILLETT's poetry and short fiction can be found in places such as
Third Wednesday Magazine, Spry Literary Journal, Drunk Monkeys, Sundog Lit,
and a vintage suitcase beneath her bed, among others. A San Francisco Bay Area
native, she works in video games as director of communications and enjoys hiking
with her kids, camping, and all manner of trashy television.
FRANCINE WITTE’s (she/her) poetry collections include Café Crazy and The
Theory of Flesh (Kelsay Books) and Some Distant Pin of Light (forthcoming from
Cervena Barva Press, 2023,) as well as chapbooks Not All Fires Burn the Same
(2016 first prize winner, Slipstream,) and First Rain (Pecan Grove Press.) She is
also a flash fiction writer. She lives in NYC.
L.D. ZANE served in the Navy from 1968 to 1975. Five of those years were aboard Fast
Attack submarines. He’s been published in over two dozen literary journals. His anthology,
It’s Always My Fault & Other Short Stories, has recently been published by Pretzel City
Press, and is available on Amazon.com. He is pursuing publication of his first novel, Un-
Becoming. L.D. is a member of Bold Writers, and was an associate editor at Evening Street
Review. You can view where L.D. has been published, and read his published stories on
his website: ldzaneauthor.com.
JOHN ZEDOLIK has published poems in such journals as Abbey, The Bangalore
Review (IND), Commonweal, FreeXpresSion (AUS), Orbis (UK), Paperplates
(CAN), Poem, Poetry Salzburg Review (AUT), Transom, and in the Pittsburgh
Post-Gazette. In 2021, he published his second collection, entitled When the Spirit
Moves Me (Wipf & Stock), which is spiritually-themed and available through
Amazon. John’s iPhone is his primary poetry notebook, and he hopes his use of it
to craft this ancient art remains fruitful.
BARBARA BERGMANN, EDITOR
WHO I AM
Photo on the cover of #4 (I successfully removed myself from the Issue 3 cover.)
As I compile the last issue of Evening Street Review, I recognize the names
of previous contributors, am astonished at the age range of writers over the years
(16 to over 90), and I am grateful for the willingness of so many contributors to step
up and keep the press going. Comments from some of them are scattered throughout
the issue with links to their pages on our website, eveningstreetpress.com
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