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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of

advertisements which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys,


and other goods. Parents often claim that these ads are unfair.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is beleived by some parents that there are is an increase in the


number of unfair advertisements such as snacks, toys, and other goods to persuade
children to purchase. In this essay, I would discuss about its benefits and some
drawbacks.

On the one hand, there are some advantages of these advertisements. First of all, it
can be high quality of the goods which are advertised significantly that build trust
for people to buy. For example are toys from Lego. Their products are committed
to quality, safety, and variety. As a result, the number of people who beleive to
purchase that goods goes up. And it leads to more labor can be employed to
generate products in time. Gradually, there are many people have work and it can
lead to an increase in tax for goverment.

On the other hand, there are some drawbacks to be taken into accounts. The first
undeniable reason is an overconsumption of unhelathy food as snacks. If children
absorb too much that fast food, it can lead to many diseases such as obesity,
diabetes, food poisoning. Secondly, not all family can afford for that goods. For
instance, an average salary of each parent in Vietnam is 5 million VND while the
quality products can be 200.000 VND.

In conlusion, advertisements can get people know more about their high quality;
However, it can lead to terrible consequences if we over-consum.

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