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A.
1. This ad says, “No one grows Ketchup like Heinz”. It is describing this
ketchup from Heinz is made by tomato slices.
2. Yes, there is a ketchup bottle made by tomato slices.
3. The ad makes me feel that I can taste the fresh tomato slice inside the
ketchup.
4. It uses red as a background which is totally can be represent as a tomato.
The ketchup looks like making from fresh tomato slices.
The ad states that Heinz grows ketchup like growing a tomato.
The top and bottom have used a real tomato which metaphors this
ketchup is contain every flavor in a tomato.
B. Outline
Topic Sentence: In many brands of ketchup, Heinz can produce ketchup like a
growing tomato.
Supporting Idea 1: The ketchup looks like making from fresh tomato slices
Detail: The ad makes me feel that I can taste the fresh tomato slice inside the
ketchup.
Supporting Idea 2: The ad states that Heinz grows ketchup like growing a tomato.
Detail: It is already common that Heinz product above average ketchup in
multiple brands. With the ad combining Heinz with fresh tomato inside a
ketchup shows the possibility that they have improved taste inside the ketchup.
Supporting Idea 3: The top and bottom have used a real tomato which
metaphors this ketchup is contain every flavor in a tomato.
Detail: the entire ketchup bottle is made by tomato slices
In many brands of ketchup, Heinz can produce ketchup like a growing tomato.
First, this ad makes me feel that I can taste the fresh tomato slice inside the
ketchup. Since, on the ad, the ketchup looks like making from fresh tomato
slices. Secondly, it is already common that Heinz product above average ketchup
in multiple brands. With the ad combining Heinz with fresh tomato inside a
ketchup shows the possibility that they have improved taste inside the ketchup.
For instance, the ad states at the bottom that Heinz grows ketchup like growing a
tomato has clearly given an idea that it tastes better from previous products.
Finally, with the fact that the entire ketchup bottle is made by tomato slice and
the top and bottom have used a real tomato which metaphors this ketchup is
contain every flavor in a tomato. In conclusion, the Heinz can produce a great
ketchup not only that taste better than many brands, it also keeps improving
from it self to serve customers better taste.
Do the REVISING PRACTICE activity on page 59 and write the final draft of your
paragraph. Use the checklist in activity D to help you revise your paragraph.
Do the EDITING PRACTICE activity on page 60 and then write the final draft of
your paragraph. Use activity E on page 60 to help you complete your final draft.