HPC1043

MUHAMMAD NAJMI AIMAN BIN ZURIWAN

NAME: _____________________________
KBN230710383
ID NUMBER: ________________________ RUBRIC: PARAGRAPH WRITING (30%)

SCORE
CRITERIA Poor Fair Good Excellent TOTAL
1 2 3 4
The writing is poorly The writing is fairly The writing is satisfyingly The writing is excellently develop
develop and rarely use the develop and often use the develop using the correct using the correct structure.
correct structure. correct structure. structure.
Thesis statement and topic
Thesis statement and topic Thesis statement and topic Thesis statement and topic sentence are clearly stated. Topic _____ x 5
Writing Structure 20m
sentence are not stated sentence are stated. Topic sentence are clearly stated. sentence is greatly supported by
and undeveloped; poor sentence is not fully Topic sentence is well supporting points and examples.
reasoning and lack of supported; lack of supported by supporting
supporting points and supporting points and points and examples.
examples. examples.
Express personal response Express personal response Express personal response Express personal response and
Personal response 12m and discuss the topic and discuss the topic fairly. and discuss the topic critically discuss the topic _____ x 3
poorly. satisfyingly. excellently.
Rarely use the suitable Often use the suitable Usually use the suitable Always use the suitable types of
Types of writing 4m
types of writing. types of writing. types of writing. writing. _____ x 1
The writing has a poor The writing has a fair The writing has a satisfied The writing has an excellent
organization of the ideas. organization of the ideas. organization of the ideas. organization of the ideas.

Most parts are not Several parts are not Few parts are not organized All parts are well presented and
organized and less organized and less but still effective; well arranged; Introductory
effective; Introductory effective; Introductory Introductory paragraph, paragraph, thesis statement, topic
Organization 4m
paragraph, thesis paragraph, thesis thesis statement, topic sentence and concluding _____ x 1
statement, topic sentence statement, topic sentence sentence and concluding paragraph.
and concluding paragraph. and concluding paragraph. paragraph.

TOTAL EARNED ______ /40

WEIGHTAGE
______/30
 HOW ONLINE SHOPPING HAS ALTERED THE LIVES OF COLLEGE STUDENT

In these modern era, online shopping has been a daily routine in our lifes. Online
shopping has been very popular among many people due to the implementation of Movement
Control Order since pandemic of Covid-19. This method still being a main choice by the
teenagers especially student and brought a deep changes in their live from three different
perspectives.

First and foremost, online shopping has altered student life by providing a new level
of convinience in their purchasing routines. With endless of virtual shopping platform, student
can do a comparasion from numerous online store in variety of colour, size and prices.The
feature is easy to use and it also customer-friendly.This can save their energy and effort
compare when they go window shopping that have limited of choices. Admittedly, online
shopping provide many variety of product and help student to buy It effortlessly by touching
their smartphone.

Futhermore, it can introduce students to a variety of cost-saving opportunities. Online

shopping app like Shopee always make a promotion such as, 12.12 sale, and give a voucher.
With that, it can help student to buy their necessary thing like book, and laptop with a great
discount. The balance, can be save in case of emergency or use it to do an investment for
their future. Therefore, using a virtual e-commerce can help them to save and manage their
money efficienly.

Finally, it can optimize their time management by access online store. When student
do an online shopping they can save their time because product survey, product selection
and transaction, all of this they can do with in 5 minutes. However, it is different when they do
convencional shopping where they had to spend hours walking through crowded malls,
searching for the perfect item. This will allow them to use that time to do an assignment, or
revision for their examinations. Additionally, this method can save student time as they can
buy something anytime.

In summary, e-commerce platform make a significant change towards student life and
give noteable perks of advantages. As time being, this platform will continue to reformed
student life and they must seize this benefits, and adapt with the advance of this technology.

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